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Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2008 - 05:04 pm Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

I didn't realize Angel and Liam were diff. men. Spike at least seems to be thinking with his heart then his little head.

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Date: 03/30/2008 - 07:24 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

Heehee, the Lorne conversation was fabulous!

Author's Response: I so love Lorne, he's just the best - I'm happy you got a kick out of the conversation boo - thanks for the great review. Kisses.

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 - 06:25 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

That was a chapter full of delicious 'page turners'.

Hope Angelus gets his nose ground into the dirt like the horrible person he is!

Loved the Riley background - wasn't that a surprise. Hope Spike just jumps her soon - it is sooo what she needs. Even if she has no clue...;)

Author's Response: Oh good, I'm so glad you liked it - I tried to add in as much as I could. As for Angelus, he won't be getting anywhere, trust me, *winks*. Yup, the Riley background explains a lot of Buffy's apprehension and true, she does need tobe jumped, but she doesn't know that, giggles. GLad you liked the chapter darling - thanks for the review. Hugs.

Reviewer: Julie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2008 - 11:34 pm Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

Loved that almost kiss - why oh why did she fall? Can't wait until you update again.

Author's Response: I'm happy you liked their , somewhat intimate moment - Spike truly can't help himself, in many ways, he's still just a kid. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter sweets - thanks for the review. Kisses.

Reviewer: Braydie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2008 - 03:16 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

Yay! Thanks for posting! I'm so glad your husband's coming home for a bit!!! If you don't end up writing while he's there, you have a very good excuse. :)*

Author's Response: THanks hon - I can't wait to see my hubby. I'll definetly post the day before he comes hom, just not so sure I'll be able to post the following weekend, we'll see. THanks for the review sweets - glad you enjoyed the chappy. Huggles.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2008 - 06:24 pm Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

This chapter ramped up both the friendship and the sexual tension beautifully. Spike's infantile jealous rage over the spa appointment was hilarious, and his seething at seeing Buffy all wanton and relaxed over the supposed sexual encounter was a delight to read. Her real explanation, and his immediate shift into leer mode was in character, but can't he see all his pushing and innuendo are getting him nowhere?

I guess not. Spike acting human and interested was going a long way to getting them closer, and then he tries to close the deal. Was Buffy hinting that she's a virgin? Maybe Riley said she was a lousy lay and she's been self conscious ever since. Either way, Spike needs to be more gentle, not ham handedly throw them together in the same room in Florida. His seduction technique may have worked in the past, but not on this long haul gal.

Spike's becoming more compassionate and sympathetic, but he has a long way to go. Being roommates, a kitten may go a long way as an olive branch once they have the expected blow up in Florida. I'm looking forward to more of Spike's romantic bumbling.

Eight days with your husband - congratulations! I'm sure you'll have loads of fun.

Author's Response: Hee hee, glad you liked the jealous SPike over the spa-treatment Buffy had. And you're right, they are slowly building a friendship - of course the UST is ever present, but that's b/c Spike has a ways to go before growing up more. He sees any little advancement as an opportunity for something else right now, but he'll learn, he will. As for Buffy, well, she has issues that stemmed from Riley, no doubt, but those issues will come out when the time is right. She just doesn't trust Spike right now enough to share everything with him - and rightfully so. I think you'll really enjoy the Florida chapter coming up. Yeah, Buffy will be upset, but since they will already be there, there's only so much huffing and puffing she can do about it too. Yup - 8 wonderful days with the hubby, I can hardly wait. Thanks for the review darling. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2008 - 04:30 pm Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

I loved it! That part with Lorne was sooo funny! :p

Author's Response: GIggles - glad you liked it, I couldn't resist throwing in that misunderstanding. Thanks for the review sweety - smooches.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2008 - 11:17 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

OH that was good, I wonder what happened and why she blames herself and why she seems so scared, when her and Spike almost kissed.

Author's Response: Welllll, it's a story that will reveal itself later down the road, adn truthfully, she doesn't trust herself around SPike - she's a stronger woman than I, hee hee. GLad you liked the updated hon and thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2008 - 02:53 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

Please please PLEASE post the next shapter before then!!! i can't wait that long!!!

Author's Response: GIggles - i would but I need time to polish it up and get it beta'd again. I do hope you enjoy it once its ready and thanks for the review darling. Kisses.

Reviewer: quirks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 11:26 pm Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

ooh! the plot thickens! the bit with lorne was funny. but now angel is in town! *meep*
it's awesome to see spike's slow descent into realizing he cares about her.
thanks for the update! and i'm glad to hear your hubby will be around. :D

Author's Response: Hahhahaah, oh yeah, things will get interesting with Angelus around and yes, SPike's slow descenet is something even he can't see right now - but it's hapening. THanks for the review and the well wished on my hubby's coming home. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 10:54 pm Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

PLEASE don't let dirty Angel mack on Buffy!

Author's Response: Hahahahahha, well, you know how Angelus can be.... time will tell, but no fear, any S or B with other is soooooooooooo far from graphic it's not even on this plane of existence, *winks*, trust me. Thanks for the review sweets - huggles.

Reviewer: sanityfair Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 02:49 pm Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

I was so excited to see the update today, it didn't disappoint! Can't wait for the next! Have a wonderful time with your husband! *winks*

Author's Response: YAY, I'm so glad you liked it hon - I hope you enjoy the next chapter as well - it's full of fun surprises, *winks*. Thanks for the review darling - huggles.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 11:56 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

*nods* I second this (pimping the stories).
Oh Angel... I thought he was the one that didn't give Buffy the raise but that was his father. I hope Angel won't pretend that he and Spike had a bet regarding her.
Bikini? Wow, Spike is very very jealous :-D
Buffy was wincing in pain? I wonder if she got a bikini wax :))
Well enough opportunity for Buffy to tease Spike ;-)
Loved the spuffyness (going to the photos, Buffy telling her story). They build (start to build) a relationship but I don't think both notice yet.
Enjoyed the update :)

Author's Response: Oh yes, Carrie is a wonderful author, LOVE her stories. Nope, Liam is the father, Angelus is the son - I know it confused people some, but I wanted to keep the names and simply assign them as such to the characters. Spike doesn't want to make Buffy into a bet at all, but Angelus does. He's an ass, what can I say. Yup, they're slowly building a relationship - key word being slowly. Still have a ways to go, ubnfortuntely. GLad you liked the chapter hon and thanks so much for the review - kisses.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 11:18 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

oh yeah, and i knew exactly why she broke up w/ Riley. her "problem" was she wasn't getting the big SURPRISE at the "end", if ya catch my drift. i could tell when she got all avoidy. lol can't wait for Spike to fix that for her!

Author's Response: LOL - you may be right darling. THanks for the review - luv ya.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 11:13 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

omg u suck!!!! ::shakes fist at IBE:: i actually started smoking a ciggy at the end. whew! u write the best freakin' angst!! but i know u'll make up for it! it's just.......::pouts:: i want ch. 10. hell he could complicate me anytime!! wake me up if u have to hun! and seriously, Angelus??? i hope she stabs him again!

those pics u've made for ur stories is HOTTTT!!! yummy Spike in a suit! makes me appreciate a suit! lol but we can also say the same thing for the dogtags and THE DOOR! he actually made a comment about acting with the door. he said it was the greatest acting partner he'd ever had. LOL and the audience agreed w/ him! LMAO i sure appreciated it!

give me ch. 10 please!

Author's Response: LMFAO - sowwy, Hangs head in shame - but it had to be this way. CHapter 10 - well, I think you'll really like it, I have something special for the end of that chapter, *winks*. Angelus is a source of angst as well, but not tooooooooooo terribly much, just enough to shake things up. HAHAHAH, glad you like the piccies and oh yeah - if I could include dog tags in this story, I surely would. Glad you liked the chappy darling - thanks for the great review. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: SpikesGoddess Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 09:15 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

Awww! Glad hubby is coming home! You know Jealous Spike is just so hilarious! lol! If only men had to go through the pain that we have so they can have the pleasure! lol! oh, a bit of history from Buffy is finally surfacing! Maybe the business trip will go smoothly so that they can get to hot monkey sex too! lol! Great chapter, can't wait for the next!

Author's Response: Thank you darling, the kids and I miss him so much and he's the perfect role model loving husband and father - he's a hero in our children's minds. Oh yes, a jealous Spike makes for hilarious happenings plus its kinda hot too, hee hee. Glad you enjoyed Buffy's history, I shed some light on that and a little on SPikes to serve a purpose later. Hee hee - the trip to FL wil be interesting to say the least - I do hope you enjoy it when I post again. THanks for the fab review hon - hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: flibble Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 09:13 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

Holy hell! That almost kiss was scorching hot. When he whispered, 'Complicate me', I just about went up in smoke. I can't wait for Buffy to give in, but I'm adoring the ust-filled wait. I hope you and your hubby have a wonderful visit. You so deserve it! Hugs.

Author's Response: YAY - I am so thrilled you enjoyed his husky voiced "Complicate me." I, myself, thought it was the perfect seductive thing to say. Hell, I would have given in myself, hee hee.

Author's Response: Damnit - keep hitting button s by accident, I wasn't thru answering. Anywho... Yup, plenty of more UST ahead - this story is like a pot of boiling water, it takes time to get it to the point where its steaming and ready, giggles, perhaps a terrible analogy, but you get what I mean. It needs to be realistic before they can get to the luvin. I'm hapy you liked the chapter hon and thanks so much for the review. Kisses.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 09:01 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

I loved the snappy dialogue throughout the chapter, Spike and Buffy play off each other beautifully. ;) The misunderstanding about Lorne being Brazilian was hilarious... lol! And the closing scene rocked, it played out just like one of those old romantic comedies... Buffy's actions would make Doris Day proud. :D Fantastic update!


Author's Response: Hehehhehe, I do love writing the banter and the misunderstandings are such a bonus to play off from. Giggles, that almost kiss, yup, the classic 'ooomph' and fall away. It's just too early yet for them to get together - but it doesn't mean I can't write little moments like this in between, *winks* - which there will be plenty of. THanks for the review sweetheart, I'm glad you enjoyed the update - smoochies.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 07:57 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

Awesome update! Loved Angel getting the brush-off, although that bet he sprang on Spike got me all worried, I REALLLLLY LMAO'ed at the 'Lorne' part and my breath got caught in my throat as I expected them to be kissed (you know I think the definition of stupidity is reading the same thing and expecting a different ending *chuckles*)

You know I adore this story, and yay for hubby coming home! Also totally with you on Darkrivertmepest's stories, as you both know!

Luv ya lots!

Author's Response: Yup - Angel is a complete ass in this fic - somehow, that's the way I like to write him - more of an Angelus-trickster type. LMAO - I know so many people wanted to see them kiss, BUT - still too early, lots more growing up for SPike to do, sighs. THanks for all your help boo, I love you my Greek goddess and again, happy b-day.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 07:19 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

Have to be quick - have to take kids to school - what a nuisance RL can be sometimes!! That was absolutely brilliant. Spike seems to be using his upper half slightly more in relation to Buffy now although not where the "Brazilian" was concerned and that was so funny. Hope you enjoy your visitation and I am really looking forward to more. Loved it.

Author's Response: I understand about getting the kiddies ready - boy do I ever.Yup, SPike is using his brain a bit more, but of course its a dual edge sword b/c the more he learns the more he wants and he still has some growing up to do, lol. All part of the plan though - nothing is ever easy with these two and of course to get them together now would be, hmm, unrealistic in this somewhat unreealistic story, giggles. Glad you nejoyed the laughs my friend and I do hope you enjoy next Sunday's chapter - it's jam-packed with fun. Thanks for reviewing darling - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 07:17 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

have a lovely time in florida...
loved the update, so I think Buffy is still a virgin, hope angel doesn't spoil that.
and Spike is growing a conscience, slowly.
looking forward to next update

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Author's Response: ooops, I hit the wrong button before i even typed my response - bad Tina, lol. Yp, Spike is growing a conscious - even if only slowly, *winks*. I think you'll enjoy their trip to FL in the next chapter sweets. Thanks for the review - huggles.

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 06:22 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

Completely hilarious, tragic, sad, ironic and beautiful. Brilliant update. Already cracked up at the asss....sistant, but the other lines were even better.
Wonderful, how Spike starts (finally!) to use some other parts of his body, namely his brain.

Author's Response: YAY, I'm super pleased you enjoyed all the elements contained in the chapter as they do serve a purpose. And yes, poor SPike, the more he learns, the more he wants, lol. Thanks for the review sweets - hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: Katie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 04:34 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

Awww... a heartwarming and kinda sad chapter, with all of Buffy's tragedies. I couldn't help but cringe for Spike when he kept messing up. He really has no clue what he's doing, does he? Silly boy's never had a girlfriend...

As for Buffy, I really want to know what happened to her engagement, but I'm sure we'll all find out soon enough.

And FINALLY, the overnight trip. That has been dangling over my head for weeks now, and goshdarnit, I want my plot bunnies!!!! *throws silly tantrum* Now I get to bouncily wait for another week to see what happens.

Despite my anxiousness about the trip, after thinking about it this cahpter fits in well. Gives us another side of the story. Can't wait for the next chappie!

~KatieGrrl1016

Author's Response: I figured a little bit of insight into Buffy's history would do well here, and of course there was a tad for Spike as well. As for Buff's engagement, that will come out later, actually much later, but when you read the 'why' you'll understand, I promise. I have a plan for Yup, I promise the FL trip this upcoming Sunday - and I do hope you enjoy it. thank you very muchGlad you liked this chapter as an in-betweener before their trip - it helps the story along. Thank you very much for the review darling - huggles.

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Date: 03/17/2008 - 04:11 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

OMG OMG, I got such tinglies at the 'almost kiss!' Damn it woman, is this story going to be FILLED with 'almost kisses?' UGH, this UST is going to be soooooo long lived. And the Brazillian wax job LMFAO! Priceless! I hate Angel... YAY! And I'm so glad Spike didn't make a bet with Angel on who would ahem... well.. you know. And awww...poor Buffy's reaction to Spike...lol, I think I did that once! Hmmm is Spike gonna get her a kitten? Gag, I'm making myself sick with all this sweetness...ewwww LOL.. Thanks for posting tonight hun, was WELL worth it!

Author's Response: Hahahahhha, al I can say is it's gonna be a long road, so there'll be some of that 'almost' moments, but of course eventual spuffyness. Glad you liked the 'Brazilian', I couldn't resist the misunderstanding - which of course they have many throghouth the entire story, mwhahahah - evil laugh. Nope, no way is SPike going to make a bet w/ Angel over Buffy - even he has some morals when it comes to that, plus he' knows her better now too. Sticky sweetness huh, puke -yeah, me too, not much on it but sometimes it serves a putpose if planned right, giggles. Glad you liked it all my sista - luv you lots and thanks for the review - I have to review your tory now too once I finish answering review. Kisses.

Reviewer: SpikesLilChit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 03:10 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

Just also a heads up....I live in South Florida....It was soooooooo sunny and warm today. It actually hit 90 here today. Which is way out of the norm for this time of the year! Hope you have a wonderful trip! I'll try to keep it nice and sunny for ya!!! Hugs!

Author's Response: WOW, sounds nice and sunny there, sighs.... a perfect time for their little trip, huh? Giggles. I think you'll really enjoy that chapter once it's up, *winks*. Thanks for the fab review sweets - smoochies to you.

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