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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 02:57 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

Poor thing with her almost kiss. Pretty sure she'd be happier if she just let their little fling develop. At least she seems to be adding a good bit to his depths. Love that he's trying so hard to know her. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Oh, she'd definietly be a lot happier giving in, but the cost of 'afterwards' wouldn't be worth it for her, not with how Spike is right now. He's got some growing up to do until he deserves it, *winks*, but it'll happen, I promise. And he does want to get to know her better - but of course, that's part of the reason how and why he redeems himself and changes his ways, *double wink*. Glad you enjoyed the update daer, thank you so very much for the fab reivew - kisses.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 02:38 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

Either Buffy is a virgin.. or a prostitue.. I know big difference there.. But it is late and I am enjoying this chapter.. But I need to read it tomorrow when my brain is working better..

Angel.. his half-brother?? Like I said... too groggy... but had to sneak a peak.. Ready for the their trip.

Author's Response: HAHAHHAAH, you do sound tired with your conflicting thoughts - but no worries, have a re-read tomorrow and lemme know what you think darling. Glad you enjoyed the chappy though and thanks for the review - get some rest darling - smooches.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 02:06 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

Dang it! Stupid thing lost my first review.

Ah, competition.....but since Buffy lives with Spike, Angelus stands very little chance. And of course, she saw the type of guy he was right away.

Snooping Spike again......but he got her to open up...some.

Have a feeling Buffy blames herself for Riley cheating because Riley couldn't get her off. Something stupid like that, because it's obvious she was made to feel all at fault.
Does she have friends besides Cordy? And outside of work? It seems that Buffy lives a very lonely, solitary life. As Spike pointed out, she has the time.....has she at least spent it with girl friends over the years? (Noticed they'd both been cat people.)

Uh-oh, and now Spike has changed their plans to one room........such a dick! When he's impulsive, he really sticks to serving #1 still....I know you're not going to deal with the real-life issues this whole thing would cause, but he should still *think* about Buffy's honor besides his own libido. He's already gotten to know her more as a person than any other woman.

Author's Response: Giggles, mena dn their hormones, always vying for territory - gotta love it. Yeah, the Riley thing - which will come out much later in the story - is a sad, sad thing and no fault of Buffy's at all - Riley's an ass imo - always has been. As for Buffy's social like??? No, she doesn't have much of one b/c of the long hours she works. SHe has Cordy and Willy and some friends she talks with from back home in CA every month, but she's a busy career gal - sad, I know. Hee hee, as for SPike changing their room arrangements, it actually turns out well despite his dirty little 'out for me' attitude, *winks*. You'll see next week, I promise. Thanks so much for this wonderful review, I simply adored it and am please you're enjoying ML so much. Smooches to you sweetheart.

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 01:52 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

Inch, by inch......I love the slow work up between them, and the more he gets to know her, the more he wants to know. You are a great story teller, no slam, bam, thank you ..Ma'am....makes theings so much jucier. I do love this story.....oh and as for answering reviews.....no worries, you go and enjoy your time with your hubby, have 8 days of bliss, your readers will all be here, and i'd rather know you were having a good time. I am so glad he has a leave, bless him. Take care and big hugs Debbie

Author's Response: Oh yes, and that's a HUGE part of it - that he has nothing but time to get to know her, and knowing more and more only increases both his desire but his frustration as well. But it WILL make him grow up - that's the big part of the picture, *winks*. Thank you so much for being understanding while the hubby is home - come a week from tomorrow it will be nice to have him home. And I'm very, very pleased you enjoy a slow build up to the story rather than a wham-bam situation - things do take time. THanks for such a lovely review darling - hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 01:45 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

Woman, you do NOT have to worry about review answering! In fact, don't! Have a fabulous time with your husband and neglect us until you have time again. :) Love how this fic is going! It's just hilarious and cute. I especially loved after the "let it rot" line when Buffy thought "And ewwww!" Cracked me up. Have a fun 8 days!

Author's Response: Awwww, thank you darling, really. He'll be here a week from tomorrow, but I do always try and take the time - like when he's in the shower to answer reviews. I'll get cuaght up after he leaves if I can't get to them all but yes, I will definitely enjoy my time with him thank you - and thanks for the fab review. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: SpikesLilChit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 01:30 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

So close....yet soooooo far! The kiss that never was! Once again, I loved the chapter! I spewed water all over my desk when she had to explain what a Brazilian wax was....that whole scene was frickin hysterical!!!!! I look forward to your next update, as always! Enjoy your time with your hubby.....go get your freak on girl!!!!! Hugs and kisses!!!!!

(I just realized that my review had not posted on the last chapter.....grrrr arg! Loved it too!!!!)

Author's Response: Oh yes, they keep coming close, but no cigar yet. LMFAO - you actually spewed water over the Brazilian part, omg - that's funny, though I'm sorry about your desk. THanks so much for the review sweetheart - I'll surely be enjoying myself come not this monday but next - sighs. Hugs you tight and glad you liked the update.

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 01:01 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

I so loved this chapter! The beginning scene with the introduction of Angelus (I already hate him btw, he's even worse than Spike could even dream of being), loved that Spike already knows Buffy enough to think she would never fall for Angel's ploys. And even though he knows that, he couldn't stop being jealous when he read of her appointment with Lorne. That was priceless. I adored the scene with the pics, how they could stop being antagonists and actually got along for a little while, until of course, Spike messed it all up again. I can't wait for the trip to Florida, I'm sure it'll be memorable. *weg* Fantastic update, darling. Love you tons! *besos*

Author's Response: Awwwww, thank you mi hermana, you know how much I love you and of course could never do without your help. Yup, Angelus is indeed worse than Spike could ever be, but jealousy still baounds - ahhhhh men. Hee hee. Giggles over the as waxing - my twisted sense of humor coming out. As for the FLorida trip - oh my, lots of fun to be had in the sun, *winks*. THank you for everything carino - luv u - smooches.

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