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Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2008 - 04:24 am Title: The Human Touch

Well, this is defintly a hoot and a hollar of a tale. Love the name and it pretty much says it all about their relationship not only in this tale, but in canon as well (at least in my opinion). Love the "melting socks" reference.

This was my Sunday catchup read of choice and I'm sure glad I picked it. I had forgotten how often you make me laugh while reading your tales. I chuckled at least half a dozen times per chapter making my 17 yr old eye me with concern (evidently he thinks I might be senile, looking a my laptop screen and chortleing away radomly -- if only he knew).

The hot tub scene with the "questions" really tickled my fancy and I wonder if Buffy was just being silly drunk, or is she really that innocent? Either way, I though it was great and can't wait for Spike to use his high IQ to teach Buffy some big words?!!!

I love how you throw all the other "worthless males" into the tale and Spike's reaction to them. He's so cute actually treating Buffy so much better than any other female he's ever "dated" -- See Spike, sometimes if you get to know them first, they're worth a second go.

So, I'm a little rusty on my reviewing and will hopefully get back into the swing soon cause that's part of the fun for me, read the tales and if I like them, review them and of course it's a big hoot if you get a response back too (kinda like the bonus part of a DVD).

However, I know your wonderful Hubby is back in town and you must make the most of that so I won't be offended if you don't respond. With all he does for our country, he deserves your undivided attention and full family time when he's here.

Hugs to you and yours and again, thank you for sharing your awesome talent and always refreshing and witty sense of humor!

Author's Response: Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee - it is SOOOOOOooo good to see you back here sweety. Of course I'm sorry the little one moved, but I'm glad you can at least enjoy some TSR now. An YAY - I'm so pleased you like ML - I wanted to try something slightly different in plot, even if the comedy/UST parallels IAN. Yup - Spike is smitten, but a wee bit of growing up to do is on the list - he'll mess up along the way, what 23 year old doesn't? Giggles. Getting reviews from you always makes me happy b/c you pick up on things so well and are hilarious with your insight.. Ah yes, I did enjoy my time with the hubby - realy took a long break from the pc altogether, but it felt good, kind of refreshing, cuz now I'm ready to get back to work. THanks for reviewing darling, I'm so pleased to see you back you've no idea. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: GoldenUsagi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2008 - 07:15 am Title: The Human Touch

Oh, I love this! Completely hilarious and wonderful! My favorite part so far was Buffy locking Spike out on the balcony. And Spike was so naughty, to replace things in her suitcase... He is a planner, isn't he?

Author's Response: Giggles, he sure is - he's as naughty as they come - at least for now. He's still, in a sense. just a kid, albet a bright one, but a hornyy kid, hee hee. Glad you enjoyed it sweety and thanks for the review.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2008 - 06:34 am Title: The Human Touch

*LOL* Why is every fic of yours educational? I just read the entire In The Army Now the other day and got educated. Now I learned that cider vinegar helps sunburn too? And I love that! I love that every fic of yours is a surprise, and you have such a KILLER sense of humor!

I love love love love everything. Thanks for bringing us these chapters. Hope all is well. :D

ps: I heard raw aloe vera helps as well. :D

Author's Response: HAHAHAHA, I love tidbits of info and sharing little tricks I suppose that's why I throw in little educational things. YAY, I'm beyond flattered and so hapy you enjoy my sense of humor - I can't help but to try and make people laugh, its my fav thing in the whole world. ANd oh yes, aloe does help too, very much so, though I would use it after the vinegar, b/c of the soothing factor and that aloe helps to heal. THanks for the awesome review boo - luv u.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2008 - 07:36 am Title: The Human Touch

Awww, sweet! Sleeping together :) His plan worked, I wouldn't want to sleep in that smelly bed either, why should Buffy? :p But I wonder if the morning after will be awkward, even if nothing happened?
What happened in Florida will never stay in Florida.... that's for sure ;) / Ariadne

Author's Response: Yup, his plan worked, but not like he originally thought, and at least he didn't try to take advantage of her. GLad you liked the chapter sweets - thanks for the great review, hugs.

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2008 - 07:35 am Title: The Human Touch

I just loved this chapter, the whole thing! But especially the ending. What Spike said IS completely true-- I'm a rather "touchy feely" person, and since my current relationship is long distance the few and far between times my boyfriend and I DO get to spend time together we can NOT stop touching. It's just something that offers comfort, whether it's from your family, friends, lover, etc. EYE like human contact. EYE thrive off of it. EYE can not imagine repressing those instincts for years, like silly Buffy! Hopefully Spike is really learning to let go of the "conquest" aspect of his pursuits and is going ot realize that he just wants HER!

Loved the chapter, sorry for the big ol' rant. :) Can not wait for more. And have happy happy fun love love time with your hubby!

Author's Response: Yes, it is true, he wasn't simply giving her a speech for the sake of holding onto her, and I think it was time for him to be rather nice about things instead of snarky for a change. LMAO on the EYE comment - but it is hard to suppress the need for touch and eye contact, it means more than words ever could. As for Spike, well, he still has a ways to go before he grows up enough to realize she's all he wants. Baby steps here, unfortunetly. GLad you enjoyed the chapter so much hon and thanks for the fab review. smooches.

Reviewer: flibble Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2008 - 11:39 pm Title: The Human Touch

Wow. What a fabulous chapter. I love the fact that, even though Spike keeps going on in his head about wanted to get into Buffy's pants, he's actually being very sweet with her. And Buffy's thoughts about him being a 'pig' are getting more and more forced. It's a lovely slow progression that I'm enjoying very much.

Spike's little speech at the end there was perfect, because he really wasn't actually coming on to her. He just wanted her to stay there in his arms. Any indication of an ulterior motive in that moment would have killed it for me, but this was really well done.

Looking forward to them waking up in the morning.

Author's Response: He really is being very sweet to her, and the best part is he's learning from all this - whether or not he realizes it and it will go a long way on his road towards growing up. I prefer slow progressions myself, they just seem more realistic to me, so I'm glad you like that fact within the story. And you're right, he wasn't coming on to her at all, he simply wanted to relieve her obvious nervousness and it worked out well for the both of them. I'm so glad you liked the chappy hon and thanks for the review. Hugs.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2008 - 04:54 pm Title: The Human Touch

Oh I loved it, and can't wait for more well I guess I have too.



Author's Response: Aw, glad that you enjoyed the chappy darling, and yes, I will update in those 2 weeks, but of course family has to come first - I missed my hubby. THanks for the review sweetheart - huggles.

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2008 - 02:13 pm Title: The Human Touch

Ok, I was so miffed that I wrote this nice review when I read the story and come to find out it disappeared. Damn it~

Ok...first of all, does that cider vinegar thing work??? Cause I'm always on the lookout for remedies for the burning of the skin. Hell, I put Casper to shame, and it sounds smelly, but helpful.

And Spike is right. Studies show that infants who are deprived of human touch fail to thrive, as opposed to babies who get all the huggles and snuggles and kisses - you get the picture. As adults we don't think we need it...but we couldn't be more wrong. It was an absolutely beautiful moment (not mushy) and I think they're falling....at least into like!

Keep your hubby happy, I know you won't have any trouble doing that ;)

Awesome chapter my sister...and I can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Yup, the cider vinegar thing works - even if the vinegar is white it still works, just a little less smelly with the cider one, hee hee. Ah yes, the human touch, so much more important than people think its ridiculous and Buffy has been without for a very very very long time - so it will leave an impression on her, *winks*. Yeah, I think it's safe to say they're falling into 'like', but the road is still fresh and full of bumps - sorry. Sings.... you can't hurry love, o, you just have to wait - LMFAO. THanks so much for the review my darling, sweet friend and sister. Love you to pieces.

Reviewer: Scooter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2008 - 03:30 am Title: The Human Touch

Haven't read the chapter yet. I'm was waiting til I had time to savor it. That sort of sounds bad, but you know what I mean. Just wanted to say to IBE- have a great time with your hubby. So glad he is able to come home and spend at least a little time with you and your family.
Thanks for the double dose of Murphy's Law. Now, off to read "the human touch", squeeeee.

hugs, scooter

Author's Response: Awwwww, thank you so much and I will. I always look forward to his visits, it makes me feel relieved and less stressful when he's around. I do hope you enjoy the chapy once you're ready to read darling. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Sarah Aless Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2008 - 05:16 pm Title: The Human Touch

I get the feeling she's softening a bit - even if she does still have to act outraged when he is crude. Loved this chapter and serve Buffy right getting sunburn - if she'd just been a normal female and let the man rub suncream on for her (i'd jump at the damn chance!) she'd have been fine!
They were sweet sleeping together though.
Great job can't wait for more.
Oh and have fun with hubby - don't do anything I wouldn't.........which isn't much so have at it!! hehe
Sarah
x

Author's Response: Yes, she is, but just a bit. It's been a long time since she's been this been this near a man in this kind of situation, so 'leery' is stil on the menu. LMAO - oh yeah, I had tons of fun with the hubby, I couldn't help myself, so, I ;helped myself', hee hee. Thanks for the review darling - smoochies to you.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2008 - 04:20 am Title: The Human Touch

(Posted this review last night but for some reason it's not showing up on the reviews page.)

This chapter was funny, but that last part was just beautiful. From the moment Spike opened his eyes I was practically holding my breath. What he said & the way he said...that was more intimate than if he'd just said "to hell with it" and done what he'd been wanting to since he first met her. You could almost here the click as the connection that was made between them in that moment.

Author's Response: YAY, I can't tell you how happy I am that you enjoyed there moment in bed. He could have easily taken advantage of the situation, though Buffy would have slapped him for sure, but he knew and saw her nervousness and soothing her was more important to him in that moment. He does have a heart, its just that he's young and has to learn a few valuable lessons first. I'm thrilled you enjoyed the chapter and in particular that scene, I enjoyed writing it. THanks for the awesome review boo - hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 - 10:18 pm Title: The Human Touch

The comic and romantic timing for Buffy finding Spike had re-packed her bag couldn't have been better, and Spike knew it. He's already such an egomaniac, it's hilarious that Buffy inadvertently feeds into it. She's got every right to be angry, but wet, half naked flesh trumps her anger every time.

This made me laugh out loud: "Just breathe out of your mouth so you don’t have to smell him. Fat lot of luck that did her, now she could practically taste him!" Buffy can't win!

They're believably becoming friendlier and friendlier, and in between all the leering and innuendo, Spike is caring and charming. I really liked his impromptu speech about the tactile nature of human beings, and I bet it's going to stick in Buffy's head, too.

Thanks for another fun chapter. BTW, is that cider vinegar trick real?






Author's Response: Yup - the cider vinegar trick really does work, I swear by it. Buffy realy does feed into his egomaniasm, doesn't she? SHe's getting used to it, but oh how right you are, half naked wet SPike - now that can stop traffic. LOL.
I can't tell how happy I am that you cracked up over the now she could taste him line - I personally thought it was hilarious, cuz it is true sometimes, you taste things even if you don't wanna smell them, LMFAO.
Spike is definitely growing, and he is caring and charming, it's jjust going to take awhile b/c of his long years spent being the way he is. But it'll be all spuffy in the end, its the journey that counts. THanks for such a fabulous review darling. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 - 06:46 pm Title: The Human Touch

This chapter had a bit of everything, laughs, sweetness, droolworthy moments, great dialogue, and learning something new about vinegar... I loved it! :D Thanks for the extra long long update! =)

Author's Response: YAY, glad you enjoyed all the moments I packed into the chapter. THanks for the great review - hugs you tight darling.

Reviewer: SpikesGoddess Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 - 06:11 pm Title: The Human Touch

Aw! I absolutely loved that chapter, from Spike wanking off to them cuddling in bed! lmao! Words cannot describe how i am feeling right now! Poor Buffy getting sun burnt, never did the vinegar thing tho, does it really work? Will have to try it next time, not! Loved it, dunno how I'm going to cope for 2 weeks, but hopefully i will!

Author's Response: HAHHAHAHA, he needed a bit of relief. Yup, the vinegar thing works like a charm. I'm so glad you enjoyed the update hon and thanks for the review - hugs.

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 - 04:39 pm Title: The Human Touch

Definitely had more than a laugh or two. The trip was perfect from the get go up until the last line. So many things happening between them, so many feelings growing, changing, evolving. I just love the journey you're taking us in, darling. :D I'm looking forward to more. :D *smooches* Enjoy your time with hubby!

Author's Response: Awww, your so good to me carino. It is a journey for them for sure, a long one perhaps, but it's spuffy in the end of course. THanks for all your help mihermana. Luve you..

Reviewer: jeanieofoz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 - 07:19 am Title: The Human Touch

*beautifully done*

Author's Response: Thank you sweety - kisses.

Author's Response: Thank you sweety - kisses.

Reviewer: dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 - 07:04 am Title: The Human Touch

great chapter! i can't believe the lengths spike is going to. this is fantastic, please hurry and update again soon. i can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Hahahhaha, that's SPike for ya, but he will have a transformation, just a slow one. GLad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review, I'll update as soon as I can darling. Kisses.

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 - 06:56 am Title: The Human Touch

Loved it!!
Buffy was so funny when she saw Spike in the towel!! Loved how her lusty reaction made her completely maleable to why he repacked the suitcase.

Sunburn treated with vinegar? Never heard of it - but I will definately try it. (with a sideorder of Spike of course)

Loved the snuggly, sleepy bit! So sweet. And ofcourse - what happens in Florida wont stay in Florida - will it.

Hope you enjoy your trip and your man: )

Author's Response: Hee hee, I think I'd react the same way, jaw open, drool coming out, totally forgetting what I had to say, chapter up on a good snuggly note. Thanks for the great review hon - smoches to you.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 - 03:24 am Title: The Human Touch

Dang site!

Wow, a rational suggestion from Mr. Horny.....yet, it does sound like something an intellignet player would memorize to put girls at ease.
They're like cymbals - inevitable to crash together and share the same space. Poor Buffy, LOL. I can definitely relate to the nasty burn.

Author's Response: LMAO - indeed it sounds like a well rehearsed 'line', but this time, it wasn't. He's human underneath all that testoterone, giggles. ANd what a beautiful analogy - I really like that - two cymblas crashing together - couldn't have said it better myself. Thanks for the awesome review darling - smoochies.

Reviewer: quirks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 - 02:45 am Title: The Human Touch

ooh! you spoil us with such a lovely long chapter! i loved spike the care-taker and snuggler. *sighs dreamily* thanks for this and enjoy your man!
:)

Author's Response: Aww, i'm super pleased you enjoyed the long chapter and that Spike really can be a good caregiver with a big heart. He still has a ways to go, but, well, that's a slow progression for the sake of it being realistic. And hey, we all know its spuffy in the end, *winks*. Thanks for the review hon and I had a WONDERFUL time with the hubby - thanks so much. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 11:55 pm Title: The Human Touch

Another excellent chapter , too too funny . I'm glad your husband is coming back for a visit , enjoy it and although i'll miss the update next week i'll wait for a good cause. Oh and don't forget to thank your husband for me again and anyone else serving our country overseas.

Author's Response: YAY, glad you enjoyed the laughs. And I did indeed tell my hubby that you said thank you - it brought a smile to his face and made me smile. He never gets tired of hearing those thank yous. And thank you for such a lovely review darling - huggles.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 11:31 pm Title: The Human Touch

omg i wish i could fall asleep like that! that'd be freakin' awesome! this was such a great chapter! i loved it! and when i get a sunburn, i might actually try that cider recepie. maybe! and if he's such a genius, he should come up w/ better ways for them to get together. stretch his mind gurlie! and i really wish he would've dropped that towel! :)

Mon

Author's Response: Hahahhaa, wouldn't it be awesome? All wrapped up in a Spike blanket with his manly smell and strong arms... sighs. But I had to settle for my husband, DOH - I didn't mean that, bad Tina, hee hee. Oh yes, that vinegar treatment works like a charm, trust me. Well, he may be a genius but common sense eludes him sometimes, lmfao. Thanks for the review my friend - you're awesome. Hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 09:15 pm Title: The Human Touch

Thanks for both chapters. Happy Easter to you and have fun :)
Heh heh good timing for Buffy or not, having to face an almost naked Spike now :)
Loved their banter :)) Spike didn't think other men would see her looking like this but he quickly remembered. And he was right about the sunburn ;-)
Cider vinegar ? I didn't know it had that effect.
And Spike managed to get Buffy in his bed after all *g*. Loved his speech. ~ Till in two weeks :) Enjoyed the long update (chapter) a lot

Author's Response: Not a problem, I figured if I have to disappear for two weeks, I may as well give readers two weeks worth of updates. Giggles, Buffy was stopped dead in her tracks after seeing a freshly showered Spike - who wouldn't? LOL. And yup - the vinegar thing works like a charm, used it many times myself. Thanks for the review my friend - hugs you tight sweety.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 08:41 pm Title: The Human Touch

Oh if Buffy doesn't want Spike in her bed every night (right!!) can I have him - PLEASE? Absolutely loved it (as ever). He was just caring then. He hadn't forced the situation for his own ends. Have a fab couple of weeks and I'll be waiting for my fix. xx


Author's Response: Giggles, ok, you can borow him for awhile until I need him back. Yup, he wasn't 'trying' any funny business on her, he genuinely saw how nervous she was and was only concerned about relieving her of her fears and it is important to have touch and snuggles, it's soothing to the soul. THanks for the awesome review dear - hugs and kisses to you.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 08:08 pm Title: The Human Touch

Love him taking care of her. Really makes her have to re think some of her ideas about him. And convincing her to sleep in his arms. That was pretty adorable. Wonder how she's going to react when they get back home, to their real lives. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Yes, it does make her rethink a few things even if she's still leery. But he does have a good heart despite his young and reckless attitude. THat will change though, slowly, but it will change. Glad you liked the update darling and thanks for the fab review. Kisses.

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