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Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 02:04 am Title: Harmony and Discord

I love how she showed her jealousy, certainly gave him something to think about. I was so happy to read your update, (actually read the last 2) always picks me up. I have had my dad in the hospital for the past 2 weeks, not going to well, so I REALLY appreciate the escape, I needed it.
I am sure you and your hubby and family had a wonderful time together, I am happy for you. I am sure you cherished every minute.
Love the story, puts me in their world and I can feel their fire........so hugs to you and a big thanks
Debbie

Author's Response: Oh yes, she left him with something to think about alright - how he processes it is another ball of wax, lol. I'm sorry to hear about your dad sweety. I can empathize with you as my own father is not doing so well these days and has an upcoming major surgery. I'm glad I could at least provide you with a fun pick me up escape from that. My prayers are with you sweety and thank you so much for the review - hugs you tight then hugs you tight some more.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 01:37 am Title: Harmony and Discord

OMG did I love this friggin chapter, she did exactly what I would have done (and have done, drives people crazy) he was groveling to get ther attention, now it's time for some tit for tat Tina , you intimated as much at the end of the chapter, he's gonna learn how it feels. Really can't wait for the spuffiness though, but I know your gonna make it explosive.. Update soon , soon, soon.

Author's Response: LOL - yes I did say a tit for tat was coming and it will. The best part of it though is that Buffy won't be doing it for revenge, it just sort of hapens. As for Spike, wellllllllll, he gets mad and then retaliates, but not in a good way - stupid man. But I do hope you enjoy the next update as much as this one - I coudn't resist writing that fight scene, giggles. Thanks for the fab review darling. SMooches to you.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 01:24 am Title: Harmony and Discord

OH that was good, I can't wait to see how they make up.

Author's Response: Hee hee, thanks boo - and yes, they'll make up... right before things blow up again. Hugs and kisses darling.

Reviewer: Avalon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 01:03 am Title: Harmony and Discord

Buffy certainly has him by the short hair whether he realizes it or not. I love the way he can't help but make things right... Can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: Yes she does - he just doesn't know how to handle it properly, poor clueless kid.. ANd of course he needs to make things right b/c he can't handle being on her bad side - he's whipped, lol. THanks for the review sweets - glad you like the chapter - huggles.

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 12:44 am Title: Harmony and Discord

She doesn't want him? Uhuh, right...and I'm really just a hobbit masquerading as a chick. Sure. As for Spike, he's just a downright rude, egotistical bastard and dad-darned it...I like it. Gives me chills when he gets a gruff voiced and whispers naughty lil tidbits in her ear. (Wish it were me he was so hot and bothered for. **sigh**)

Loved the chapter! Looking forward to their makeup and the upcoming angst! I love drama and very rarely get the right dose of it from most writers. Which is something I NEVER have to worry about with you, dear. You feed my angst addiction very nicely!!!

Author's Response: HAHAHAHHHA, that hobbit comment was frickin hysterical, rofl. As for Spike, yeah, there's something about a bad rude man that although its soooooo wrong, it feels sooooo right. WOW, I'm absoutely honored by your compliment darling - that touch of angst.... it's always necessary, I just hope you enjoy it when it comes sweety - thank you sooooooooooooo very much for this review. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 11:36 pm Title: Harmony and Discord

Wonderful chapter! I just loved the fight scene, it was masterfully done! And of course, their reactions to it, too. *wide evil grin* I just adore the pacing, the way things are evolving, the way Buffy keeps fighting against her growing attraction to Spike, the way he's slowly, oh so very slowly changing his ways. This fic just keeps getting better and better and I feel so very honored I can help you at least a bit with it. Love you, cariño! *hugs*

Author's Response: Thank you my darling sister. Yeah, its a long road and a inner strugle for Buffy - and Spike too, but oh, the sweetness of it all when the spuffiness comes, sighs... and I know with your help it will come out perfect. THanks for always being there for me darling - you're the best friend a gal could ask for - luv u boo.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 11:15 pm Title: Harmony and Discord

Love it that Buffy and Spike .. are doing the martial arts rough and tumble... and of course he would "get off" on that..

Hasn't quite learned yet that the things that work so easily with the Harmonys don't necessarily work with Buffy.. He knows she is interested... but she's not going to "fall" for him until he stops and tries to know Buffy the person..

Can't wait to see who will be visiting next week...

Enjoyed as usual..

Author's Response: LOL - oh yes, he gets off on a spot of violence when coupled with a half naked Buffy. He's pretty much a dumb bunny when it comes to Buffy when compared to other women, but he'll learn, albeit slowly, but he will. Hope you enjoy the next chapter as much as this one darling and thanks so much for the review. Smoochies.

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 10:52 pm Title: Harmony and Discord

Yay!!! Love this fic, absolutely LOVE it!!! :) Great update. Buffy can be such a child. :P But so can Spike! Can't get through a sentence without sneezing (sick as a doggie) so I'm going to cut it off right here, but just know I can't wait until the next update!

Author's Response: They're like a couple of kids aren't they? But it's fun to write them as such for the time being, lol. I'm so sorry you're sick hon - I hope you get the rest you need. THanks for the review and you get better - send you cyber chicken soup and a hug.

Reviewer: GoldenUsagi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 10:30 pm Title: Harmony and Discord

Pleased that it was her turn to be surprised, he gave her a curt nod. “Jujitsu.”
“Oooo,” she drawled, tasting the victory that would soon be hers. “This is so on.”

I loved this bit! Go for rolling around on the floor "wrestling." And whoa, Buffy has the silent treatment down to an art form. And heehee, she locked him out again. Glad they sort of made up, though. Great chapter!

Author's Response: HAHHAHAH, glad you liked that part - I was thinking it be funny if they were on even ground for this - makes it more interesting. Yup, that silent treatment always gets to men, funny how that works, huh? Thanks for the fab review hon and again, congrats on your well deserved awards you've won. Hugs you tight my friend.

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 10:30 pm Title: Harmony and Discord

Gah!!!!!! The kiss on the temple!!! God, I'm still panting heavily! EVIL WOMAN - MUST UPDATE NOW! I know, I know, I'm a greedy heartless bitch. But you love me anyway! And OMG, I have so totally done what Buffy was doing - to my poor husband! God, I should go and kiss him a thousand times over for putting up with me. And tee hee, Spike is falling...falling...dum dum dummmmm. And the martial arts exercise... yummy - Can I have some please? LOL Great update!

Author's Response: He HAD to go there, didn't he. Of course it didn't work but yeah, a kiss like that and to walk away??? I would have grabbed him myself. LOL - indeed I love you anyway my twisted sister, always. Ahhhhhh, so Dave has gotten the silent treatment huh? Works every time, hee hee. GLad you liked their little rough and tumble with the nasties being whispered in her ear - you KNOW I couldn't resist writing that.... hey, I'm evil. Thanks for the review hon - hope to chat with you soon - huggles.

Reviewer: Julia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 09:43 pm Title: Harmony and Discord

Would be fun seeing Spikes reaction if Buffy sleeps with another man in their home :).
Buf what was funny too was the fight scene :)... and what can I say... typical Spike. Hes horny as hell when he has Buffy under him.
Looking forward your next update and I'm curious which people they will meet!

Author's Response: Wouldn't it though??? Hee hee, he'll get something much worse than that, trust me, *winks*. Not saying Buffy is going to be bad, but she does something to really piss him off unknowingly, hee hee. I'm so happy you like the chapter hon and next update will of course come next weekend - thanks for the review, smoochies to you.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 09:39 pm Title: Harmony and Discord

brilliant update, Still think Spike needs to see himself as others see him, and leaving Buffy to do the work while he has fun is soo not on. glad she got her punches in. more soon please

Author's Response: Oh yes, he does - it comes in baby steps though. He's a 23 year old, spoilt rich boy, enough said, lol. GLad you liked the chapter hon and thanks for the review - now I have to go read your update, squeeeee. Huggles.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 09:32 pm Title: Harmony and Discord

Ah.. Buffy got her opportunity to get some steam off, fighting Spike. ~ But she still doesn't see why she is reacting so strong to Spike sleeping with another woman.
At last they have some rules now.
Have a great weekend yourself!

Author's Response: Giggles, she sure did, of course it did little good until they sat down and talked. And yes, she's clueless, queen of denial, lol. GLad you enjoyed the chapter sweets - thanks for the review.

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