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Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 - 03:49 am Title: Star-light, Star-bright…

make the freakin' wishes come true!! Buffy needs to dump the sleazy Irishman and side with the British and his long boat Armada! this was a great, feely chapter and i can't wait for the sparks to fly brighter. and i learned something about the stars. who'd a thought? going to the next chapter!

XXX
Monica

p.s. wishes to ur family

Author's Response: lol - oh, I wil, you can count on that, *winks*. And of course Buffy will get rid of Angel all in due time. Glad you liked the star-story, I thought it was rather romantic myself. Thanks for the review boo, smooches.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2008 - 02:09 pm Title: Star-light, Star-bright…

Loved how both Buffy & Spike's feelings are changing for the other! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Yes indeed, their feelings are definitely changing for the better, glad you enjoed the chappy. THanks for the wonderful review boo - huggles.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2008 - 09:12 am Title: Star-light, Star-bright…

Absolutely wonderful chapter, honey! :) May their wishes come true ;)

Author's Response: YAY - so glad you liked it hon, and yes, may their wishes come true, giggles. Thanks for the review darling - luv u.

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2008 - 05:57 am Title: Star-light, Star-bright…

As juvenile as it seems…I just shouted “YES!” when I read that part about Buffy “breaking-up” with Angel. Just can’t wait for it to happen. Spike is definitely a woman-devouring-monster-no-more and a flesh-and-heart-filled man. I’m enjoying the continued character development.

My mind is a-whirling with future relationship stepping stones:
1) first comes friendship;
2) next, falling into “like”;
3) later, a charity ball fit for a Cinderella and her prince;
4) some genius concocted by your talented brain;
5) …and then, mondo-amazing love-making!

The times Spike catches Buffy in her gray/in-between moments are increasing. I’m looking forward to Angel’s reaction to “losing”-out to Spike and seeing if that sets our couple back a bit. Hopefully, Buffy will see that a tiger can change its stripes. Great chapter, yet again!


Author's Response: Hhahahahhhaha - yeah, it's time to get rid of the great poof. Oooo, I like you're little list of events. You're definitely close, just remember this is Murphy's Law and it isn't done wreaking havoc yet, As for Angel, well, you'll be surprised at what an ass he can still be, *winks*. Thanks for the review darling - snuggles.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2008 - 05:37 am Title: Star-light, Star-bright…

So glad that it's not a fluke, that they are actually enjoying time spent together. So very, very touching, and I loved her wish, the fact that she's actually acknowledging what she's feeling. Truly beautiful, looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Yup - they're equally enjoying their time together and of course struggling with their emotions at the same time but at least they can admit it, *winks*. THanks for the fab review boo - hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2008 - 10:39 pm Title: Star-light, Star-bright…

Buffy is warming up believably, and her hesitation is understandable. Spike was a womanizing ass, it's difficult to adjust to this new, improved model. She's right to wonder if he's playing some new game to get into her pants.

The star gazing huddled together under the electric blanket was very romantic, and I love how comfortable and companionable they are. Here's hoping this companionable trend continues. It's a delight to read.

Author's Response: Oh indeed it is an adjustment for her in her thinking - she has every right to be hesitant. Glad you enjoyed the stargazing - nothing like a little romantic moment to bring them together even closer. Thank you for the wonderful review my friend - smooches to you.

Reviewer: quirks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2008 - 09:57 pm Title: Star-light, Star-bright…

yay! this chapter was awesome and sweet and lovely! the line about spike wanting buffy to see the real him, and then realising that he's becoming a new real him. :D
shiny!

Author's Response: Giggles - yup, he at least recognizes he has changed and doesn't mind a bit. He's slowly turning into love's bitch, but that's ok - especially when compared to what he used to be. I'm so happy you liked the update darling - thank you for the review. Huggles.

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2008 - 05:29 pm Title: Star-light, Star-bright…

I have to tell you I love your stories for many reasons. One, it is a story, and each chapter is a build on the total story, like a simmer, the more you simmer the more flavors you can taste.. Your chapters a long and invloved, they show more into each character, gives us more insight...... I like long chapters, I want to feel what the characters feel and I do. Each chapter is a work of art, that we savor and enjoy. I love the way Spike is changing, the warm fuzzies, the stars, and blanket the intimacy on a deeper level. So on that note, great job and thanks.....Debbie

Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much for saying what you said. It's one thing to try and weave a story just right, but another to draw the readers in and make them see and feel what the characters do. I can't tell you how very happy I am to hear I've been able to do that. And of course I'm ecstatic over your reaction to Spike's changes and the romance that ensued over their weekend. You've really, really, really made my day sweetheart, thank you so very much. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: GoldenUsagi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2008 - 02:13 pm Title: Star-light, Star-bright…

Oh, stargazing! I love it!

Author's Response: Glad you liked their little moment hon - thanks for the review - smooches.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2008 - 09:13 am Title: Star-light, Star-bright…

Oh I hope Angel does not do anything when she breaks up with him.

Author's Response: Bah - he's harmless enough in that dept, but his attitude will surprise you, hee hee hee. Thanks for the fab review hon - kisses.

Reviewer: flibble Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2008 - 03:38 am Title: Star-light, Star-bright…

Yay! What a great chapter. I can't help thinking that the moment something really does happen between them Buffy is going to royally balk and claim he's the same old Spike. Ahhhh, fun times ahead. Love every minute of this story, and I really do envy you your stamina regarding regular posting. I wish I could manage to write half as much as you do. *hugs*

Author's Response: Hahahahahaha, well, all I can say to your first statement is it's half correct, *winks*. And oh god - as far as updating regularly, that's only because I have a few chapters already written ahead of time and I am constantly going over them before posting while finishing up the story. I just made sure I had enough in reserves to last in case something came up and I couldn't post. THanks for the review darling, luv u.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2008 - 01:41 am Title: Star-light, Star-bright…

Awesome chapter! Loved it!

Author's Response: YAY, glad you did boo and thanks for the review, kisses.

Reviewer: Deb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2008 - 12:30 am Title: Star-light, Star-bright…

Another lovely chapter. I think you've done a wonderful job of really fleshing out the characters rather than just pitting them against each other with their wanton lust bunnies. I've loved every other fic that you've created, but this one takes the honors. There's lust and love created between them. It's palpable. Excellent writing. Just love it. Please continue on...

Author's Response: WOW - thank you so much for the compliment, I truly appreciate it, it's made my day, my WEEK. And I'm so glad you're enjoying it this much boo - thank you again - huggles.

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2008 - 10:42 pm Title: Star-light, Star-bright…

Eeeeeeeee!!! I can't wait until the next chapter!!! I'm loving the development, the wishes, and the way Spike is realizing just how empty his life was before. :) Congratulations on your awards-- this fic TRULY deserves them!

Author's Response: Giggles, glad you like the development so far and of course Spike's more grown up attitude and realizations. Thank you so much for the lovely review hon - smooches.

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2008 - 10:21 pm Title: Star-light, Star-bright…

The last bit was so sweet. I don't want to nitpick but Zeus is a greek name and Pluto is a roman one. Pluto in greek would be Hades.

Author's Response: omg - see, I went and researched it on the web and took what I found from a certain site and merely re-wrote it into Spike-speak. So I'm sorta not to blame for the mix up, but now I wish I'd remembered or kept track of which site it was. Oh well, can't fault for faulty research, giggles. GLad you liked the chappy darling and thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Avalon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2008 - 10:08 pm Title: Star-light, Star-bright…

Yay!!! we got more!!! *does happy dance*

I always did love greek mythology and how some constellations came into existance. My favourite was always Orion.



Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked the update hon and the little story SPike told - couldn't resist, giggles. THanks for the review darling - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2008 - 07:54 pm Title: Star-light, Star-bright…

wonderful update, love the more thoughtful spike. looking forward to more

Author's Response: GLad you like the thoughtful Spike, he's falling hard and fast, poor thing and Buffy? WELL, GOT A FEW WALLS TO KNOCK DOWN, BUT AT LEAST SHE CAN SEE WHAT'S GOING ON. Oooops, hate when i accidentaly hit that stupid caps button, sorry. Thanks for the review my dear - I hope to see you update soon too. Hugs.

Reviewer: nat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2008 - 07:31 pm Title: Star-light, Star-bright…

This was a lovely chapter, thank you. I'm glad Buffy has decided to dump Angel. I love their growing closeness. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed their weekend of bonding and yeah, it was time for her to get rid of the great poof, after all the chemistry she feels with Spike.... she'd be insane not to, giggles. Thanks for the fab review darling - hope you enjoy next update just as much - smoochies to you.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2008 - 07:21 pm Title: Star-light, Star-bright…

Oooooo, Valentine's, huh?

Nice cozy weekend. Too bad Buffy's so gunshy. It's probably written all over Spike's face how sincere he is.

Author's Response: Yup, the V-day. And yeah, couldn't help but write a totally cozy weekend for two, all with the snugglies and sleepy moments - a bit of fluff to get our couple to come around a bit more. Thanks for the lovely review boo, huggles.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2008 - 07:21 pm Title: Star-light, Star-bright…

Oooooo, Valentine's, huh?

Nice cozy weekend. Too bad Buffy's so gunshy. It's probably written all over Spike's face how sincere he is.

Author's Response: Indeed, very cozy - thanks hon - kisses.

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2008 - 06:40 pm Title: Star-light, Star-bright…

OMG! Yummm.... (several dreamy sighs later)

I love Astronomy and Astrology - perfect mix dearest! And snuggle bunnies under the electric blanket - I'll have to remember that one next time!

And here you are teasing again with a "JUICY" chapter for next time...just not right (shakes head, but keeps reading like a fool) heheheh.

Great job my sista

Author's Response: Hee hee, a beautiful night sky a warm blanket and hot to trot man - can't ask for anything better. Juicy, ah the word conjures up many an image, no??? Giggles, remember, I'm evil here, *winks*. Thanks for the review my twisted sista - luv ya.

Reviewer: tammy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2008 - 06:23 pm Title: Star-light, Star-bright…

loved the update. Things are going in a better direction.Thanks

Author's Response: You're welcome and thank you for the review darling. Indeed things are looking up now.

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2008 - 06:04 pm Title: Star-light, Star-bright…

what a wonderful evening with the stargazing and the electric blankie and the two of them getting closer. I for one am holding my breath until they also get it ON - hope you let me breathe soon ; )

Author's Response: Hahahahhaha, welllllllllll, hold your breath a little while longer, sorry - don't hate me, I do have a plan. I'm just glad you enjoyed their romantic weekend sweety, thanks so much for the review. Huggles.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2008 - 04:47 pm Title: Star-light, Star-bright…

Moonlight is cancelled BTW, I hope blood ties are more lucky. Do you check your inbox? The same place when you get notified for "tag" updates? If you want a spoiler I'll send you a message later / in the next days. You'll get an email that you have a message to read (at last that's what I get). I'm a bit weary of thunderstorms right now but maybe the worst is over *knocks on wood* & congrats for your win.
Spike is very smitten right now with Buffy. A pout and he'll do what she wants :)
Clever to get an electric blanket :) ~ I like the wish they made.
Enjoyed the chapter, them slowly 'moving a bit nearer' together, being more open.
Till next time.

Author's Response: I know, that sucks big time. I mean Moonlight isn't all that and a bag of chips but I do enjoy watching it. I can't believe they chose the other show, ghost whisperer or wahtever over it, sighs. No matter what, I just want another season of BT or I may implode, lol. Thanks for the LJ mail sweety, I appreciate it. We've been having a lot of rain here too lately, but I gues tis the season and hopefully my flowers will continue to grow b/c of it. Yup - our Spike is well and truly smitten while Buffy holds out a little hope but gaurds herself. GLad you liked the electric blanket - a definite must in NY, lol. Thanks for the review my friend - snuggles.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2008 - 03:35 pm Title: Star-light, Star-bright…

Aww, this chapter had so much sweet Spuffy interaction in it. :D I especially loved reading Buffy's thoughts. Wonderful update!
Thanks for the birthday wishes, it was so sweet of you to remember! *hugs* Mary

Author's Response: So glad you liked Bufy's thoughts and their little romantic weekend, and of course I remembered it was your birthday, that stuck in my head so I thought I'd wish you a great day boo. Thanks for the review hon - huggles.

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