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Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2008 - 02:15 am Title: Needing You

Poor Xander. And Anya, and everyone. But Ilike how complicated things are with Spike, he's really growing up.

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Date: 06/27/2008 - 10:00 am Title: Needing You

Awwww, what a great last sentence. I'm so glad that Spike is there to support Buffy. I can see how this will have a big impact on their relationship.

Author's Response: YAY - I'm so glad you see the potential this situation provides for our couple to realy come together. THanks for the awesome review sweety - huggles.

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2008 - 04:58 pm Title: Needing You

Looks like a little trip (even though sad trip) is in order back to Buffy's hometown. Can I suspect a certain Agent Jerk to be in Sunnydale while our lovely couple is there? Update soon.

Author's Response: Yes indeed - its off to Sunnydale. And to answer your question... hellllll no Riley won't be there, LOL. Never much cared for him. THanks for the review darling, next update will be this weekend - smoochies to you.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2008 - 06:50 am Title: Needing You

It's so sweet of him to take care of her and for going with her to the funeral, taking care of everything, this has brought them closer :) The fact that she said he was her friend meant a lot. I can't say I'll miss Xander, I've never liked him...
Looking forward to read more, honey ;) *kisses*


Author's Response: Oh yes, by Spike stepping in to try and take care of things has gone a long way in Buffy's mind - and of course Spike is thrilled to bits with her calling him her firend... one more major step towards spuffiness, lol. Thanks for the review boo - huggles and kisses.

Reviewer: quirks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2008 - 04:27 am Title: Needing You

this was a sad chapter, but i can definitely see how it's helping their relationship grow. i wonder whether being back in sunnydale will prompt buffy to share more about her traumatic past. spike is being such a sweetie!
thanks for the awesome fic

Author's Response: THanks sweety - it is the reason why I chose to go this route. There's nothing that brings out a person's true character more than a situation involving death. Thank you so much for the fab review boo - snuggles.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2008 - 02:33 pm Title: Needing You

Spike has certainly grown in this story, and his show of support in this tragedy should show Buffy that he is well and truly there for her. Spike took charge, did what Buffy was unable to do. Xander was a peripheral character in the story, but his role in canon makes his death hit harder. This chapter was emotional and taut, and it pulled them together even further.

Author's Response: Indeed Spike will be showing her what he's really made of with no thought to himself. I did hate to kill off Xander, but I'm glad he wasn't included as a character here - made it a bit easier. I so hope you enjoy next chapter as our couple will become even closer. Thans so much for the review boo - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: SpikesGoddess Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2008 - 11:10 am Title: Needing You

ok I'm all caught up on their antics now, and feeling sorry for Buffy, the poor thing loosing a friend like that, I know how sad it is, I'm just glad she has Spike there to help her in her time of need. Also I'm so glad they've set their differences aside and become friends, it's obvious now how they really feel, I just hope one of them doesn't screw it up by being silly and petty. I'm really loving this story and can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I know, I really hated to do this to Buffy, but it will help bringo out the best in them both, their real selves and to see that in one another. I'[m so happy you enjoyed it darling and got caught up. As for one of them screwing it up... I can say no, that won't happen. Thanks for such a lovely review hon - kisses.

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2008 - 01:31 am Title: Needing You

First I am so sorry about your mother-in-law, for you and your family, but I am glad you got to spend some quality time with your dad. Sorry I didn't review last chapter, I actually got to read it today, as I have had my dad in the hospital, he is doing better, but I do understand when given a reprive.
I was really touched as to how Spike was there for her in a true way, having someone to lean on in times of losing a love one can be so hard, and to have someone there to help, to do and provide some comfort is so meaningful. It really shows greater depth to a relationship. So I must say great job. This story shows so much evolement of characters, and I love it. My thoughts continue to be with you and as always thanks.........take care Debbie

Author's Response: THank you darling, it was sad to let her go, nbut it was time and she's no longer suffering. I do hope your dad will get better, its never easy to see a loved one go through pain and suffering. - my prayers are with you and I'm happy he is recovering. Glad you liked how Spike responded to the situation with Buffy. He really does care for her a great dedal and it will continue to show in the next chapter as well. THank you for the lovely review sweety, many hugs/kisses and warm thoughts sent your way.

Reviewer: NeomeBuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2008 - 01:09 am Title: Needing You

What a good emotional complex chapter. The reactions of people in this kind of situation are not easy to write and you've done a beautiful job here. I like the continued progression of the relationship. Thank you for this chapter

Author's Response: WOW, thank you for the compliment sweety. It's never easy trying to write something like this - an issue of death and reactions from people. I'm so glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the wonderful review. Hugs.

Reviewer: burnkitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 10:33 pm Title: Needing You

OMG! *Mouth drops open* I so didn't see Xander dying coming. Very riviting chapter though, kept me glued to my chair till the end. It nice to see Buffy n Spike growing closer on a more deeper level.

I hope everything is going well in RL. *hugs* And thank you for still taking the time to write and post.

Author's Response: I know - I don't think anyone saw it coming, but I felt it woud provide the perfect opportunity to bring our couple closer together. It seems that so far, things in my own RL have sowed down a bit gratefully, thank you boo. ANd thanks for the wonderful reivew - huggles.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 05:36 pm Title: Needing You

A very beautiful yet sad chapter. It's very realistic. It's usually during times like these that you find out who your true friends are, what they're made of. I think it's only proving to Buffy what he already meant to her without her realizing it before, and the reaffirming the decision she'd already made to let whatever this is between them grow. Great chapter. Looking forward to the next.

Author's Response: Yes, and that's so true - a person really does find out who their true friends re when the cards are down. It will go a long way in Buffy's mind. I'm glad to hear you say it felt realistic - this kind of chapter wasn't easy to write, so thanks for that compkiment sweety and for the review - hug you tight.

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 02:52 pm Title: Needing You

Loved it!

Author's Response: THank yo9u darling - hugs.

Reviewer: astrodex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 02:52 pm Title: Needing You

I do love where you are going with this.

Author's Response: Thank you boo - glad you're enjoying it. SNuggles.

Reviewer: Sarah Aless Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 02:19 pm Title: Needing You

Hey hun,
Sorry, I have been really absent for a while and am just catching up! I did try mail you to offer support from a distance but it got returned - guess I've been gone so much i missed an email change!!
Anyhoo - this chapter was great hun. The emotions are captured so well and I'm glad that at least amidst all the tragedy there is something positive emerging in terms of their developing relationship!
Thank you so much for everything you put into the story hun, take care.
Sarah
x

Author's Response: Oh sweety, it's good to see you again and I'm glad you got a chance to get caught up - and past my evil cliffy, lol. Huh - that's weird abut my email address, I didn't get anything from you but thank you so much for trying - snuggles you. Yeah, there had to be a bit of a tradegy, but it will bring forth better things in their relationship and help them in moving forwards. I'm so happy you enjoyed it al boo - hugs you tight and a big huge cyber kiss.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 11:44 am Title: Needing You

What a horrible tragedy, poor Xander. :( I liked that Spike was Buffy's rock through all of this though, Cordy was a great friend too. Good update.

~Congrats on your new wins! :)

Author's Response: I know - I felt bad doing it to him, but I needed someone whose job would be believable in a an accident - sorry Xander. Thanks for the congrats darling and the fab review - smooches to you.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 08:40 am Title: Needing You

okay, yeah, seriously gonna stop now!!! just wanted to drop this one by ya too!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y75cHzFMVaM

really nice vid!.......u've started something reallly bad!

Monica

Author's Response: Oh that was a cute video, thanks. Giggles, youtube is addicting isn't it?

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 08:29 am Title: Needing You

okay, i'm back. yep. that's right. i read it 3 times. 3! times! i finally stopped my little sniffles and had to go back and reread the last part again. NOW we're getting deep!! i like it when it gets like this! goes to show that all that cockiness and swagger doesn't make up for everything! and u do depth so well Tina! i can't wait for the next chapter!!! now i'm gonna go reread ARMY! after THIS, i just feel like a little swagger and jingle-jangle dogtags! :oD

Monica

Author's Response: # timess, omg - I'm sorry for the sniffles darling. But yes, now we're getting deep - into the stuff our couple is really made of. And I'm so happy to hear you like how I write it - God knows I try and its not always easy. LMFAO, jingle-jangle dog tags and cock and swagger army spike.... hope you like it the second time around boo. THanks fr the awesome review. Snuggles.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 08:18 am Title: Needing You

here's another one!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rRPS1xk9wVw

SOOOO don't like Kenny Rogers but the song works for them and the vid is good so.....still wish someone else would've sang it!

Monica

Author's Response: Yeah, not a KR fan myself either but that's a great video. Thanks sweety.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 08:09 am Title: Needing You

okay stop stop STOOOPPPP!!!! Xander???? XANDER???? lovable SPIDOINKAL XANDER??? Why??? just....why???? he was the first one to show us that shaking a cross didn't fix it!! granted i didn't like him in seasons 5-6. he was an ass! but XANDER!!! okay...i'm going to take a HUGE breath here and go back and help Spike pick up the phone. BRB.....SOBS.....(see? didn't give any away. me smarty.)

btw, reading this made me go to youtube and....you know....i mean besides the Spike videos......

great X/W/B vid!-min.2:40!! aww lol
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IDpacinMr0s

great X/B vid!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BdgwDHQXLhs

this was basically W/X relationship!!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0FRM-NIlDSw

don't get mad! u're the one who caused it!!

:op

Monica

p.s. hope the last one makes u laugh! hope u're doing better!

Author's Response: WOW - great videos boo, thank you for sharing - the last one was brilliant btw. And I know, I feel shamed for killing Xander, but it had to be someone Buffy cared about to affect the way it did so SPike could step up to the plate and be there for her. Thanks for the fab review and all the lovlies at youtube my friend - huggles you tight.

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 05:04 am Title: Needing You

Wow. Once I moved past the shock and the tears—yeah, Xander wasn’t really part of the fic, but knowing the ‘heart’ of the Scoobies was gone, was a bit hard to take. I was moved by the way you ended the chapter. The nature of Spike and Buffy’s friendship is truly a meaningful development in their relationship. I can’t help but feel myself smile a bit to know that William has a friend in Buffy, first, and not a lover. It’s something that I missed seeing in canon. Thank you for a beautiful, heartbreaking chapter.

Author's Response: I know, I hated to have to do that to him - but its to serve a purpose, so it had to be someone Buffy cared about. And yes, it's always good to have a friend first before a lover - makes the relatioship that much more meangingful. You're most welcome for the chapter hon, and I thank you for the great review and for enjpoying it as it was meant to be, even the sadness. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: less Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 04:48 am Title: Needing You

wow reading this is so strange because my best friends boyfriend died yesterday in a brutal but instant accident reading this was supeingly emotional for me

Author's Response: OMG - I am so sorry sweety, I hope I didn't dredge up any bad feelings. My sincresct apologies boo. Death is never easy. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 04:04 am Title: Needing You

I'm speechless. As much as I want to whoop and cheer because of Spuffy, I couldn't too under these circumstances. I know it's a fic, and... it's not real. But the mood is there. You wrote everything so well, and really let the emotions jump off the page. Needless to say, I'll be looking forward to the next one. Love the chapter!

Author's Response: Oh wow, I'm glad I got the mood of the chapter right, I'm just sad you couldn't whoop for joy, but I suppose maybve I did my job as an author if it touched you on an emotional level. Thank you for the review boo - hugs and kisses darling.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 03:50 am Title: Needing You

Sometimes it takes a tragedy to show what you're made of, or even what the relationship is made of. And in terms of their relationship, I'd say it's heading in the right direction. Touching chapter, glad he's there to take care of her. Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response: Exactly! You hit the nail on the head. It's what will show through during their time spent in Sunnydale. They will make a major leap/bound b/c of what's happened and I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter sweety. Thanks for the review - smooches.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 01:47 am Title: Needing You

First you leave an evil cliffe, then you tear out the heart strings! I know Xander doesn't play an active role in the fic, but it's still sad to think about his death. *sigh* Beautifully written, though. Spike is showing some real maturity. Looking forward to next week.

Author's Response: Sorry - muse can be evil like that sometimes... but of course it's ll with a purpose. Glad you enjoyted Spike in this chappy hon and I think/hope you'll like him in the next one as well. Thanks for he review darling - kisses.

Reviewer: becky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 01:27 am Title: Needing You

oh wow! i loved / got depressed with this chapter! poor xander! but well okay mostly depressed but spike's revelation made it kinda happy

Author's Response: Sorry to leave you sad hon - I hated to kill someone here, but it's with a purpose in mind for our couple. Hopefully next chapter will have you smiling sweety - thanks so much for the review. Huggles.

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