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Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 12:12 am Title: Needing You

Poor Buffy and Spike! Buffy that one of her close friends died... and Spike for being the only person present that has no ties to the man who died (it's extremely unconfortable at first to go to the funeral of a person you had no relations with, except to support the person your with...at least it was for me).

But I agree, this will allow for a greater bonding to occuring between our favorite blondes. It's good to see Spike really mending his playboy ways, and Buffy realizing the change that is happening to him. And yes, friendship is the best thing to have with your partner - my husband is my best friend and I couldn't love him more! I just hope Spike and Buffy don't let this oppertunity to grow closer pass them by! But I have faith in you - you wouldn't screw us over now...would you? *hint hint...wink wink*

Wonderful as always, my lovely butcher! And many thanks for the kudos - you KNOW it's my favorite past time - all that wordsmithing... LOL! My hats off to ya! Wuggles

Author's Response: Oh yes, I agree - it's going to be awkward for Spike, but of course what choice does he have? He wants to be there for her. Giggles - of course I'm not gonna screw you over with next chapter - there will be much bondage, I mean bonding, hee hee. And yes, my hubby and I, like you and yours are the best of friends - makes for a super marriage, squeee. Giggles - all our wordsmithing has made for some, AHEM, HOLY - somethings and others, LMAO. Thanks a mil sweety - luv ya.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2008 - 10:03 pm Title: Needing You

I'm all sniffly and grinning at the same time! Totally love this chapter, as you already know; Spike did all the right things, and Buffy gave him hope, even in the direst of circumstances. The ending was beautiful hun, another exceptional chapter!

Love you lots and lots! *huggles*

Author's Response: Awww, thank you honey - I'm glad it moved you to feel for them both. I hated to bring about the sad circumstances, but it will bring out the best in both of them. Luv you to ittie-bittie pieces boo.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2008 - 09:49 pm Title: Needing You

Excellent chapter but then again they are never anything else!! Spike really is a changed man isn't he? Taking care of Buffy with no thought of what he had to gain, just because she needed him. It's a beautiful thing seeing how close they are becoming. Loved it.

Author's Response: YAY, I'm so glad you enjoyed it sweety. Spike is indeed a changed man, his phiklandering ways and days are over - he's in love, giggles. Thanks for the review darling - kisses.

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2008 - 09:42 pm Title: Needing You

This must have been a difficult chapter for you to write due to death.

So good of William to step in and take care of Buffy this way. Being in her home town may open up some of her issues so that he will get to understand her a bit better. Small town America is so different than a big city or for a person raised in England. Small town America and small town in England are very different. Not so much the people, but the way of life. Different pace and local ways.

Author's Response: It really was - and funny enough, I'd written most of it before my m-i-l was given her diagnosis. But of course I wanted to plug ahead with it anyway because it does serve an important purpose in the fic. And indeed small town anywhere is different than cities. I hope you'll like the next chapter as they do bond some more sweety - thanks so much for the wonderful review. Hugs.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2008 - 09:34 pm Title: Needing You

Oh it was Xander that died. Must be a shock for Buffy, being one so young. Loved Spike taking care of Buffy, thinking of calling Cordelia and getting them both off of work. Sad chapter in a way (the background, the feeling) and yet not. Because like you said it brought Buffy and Spike nearer together.

Author's Response: Yeah, I turly hated to do that to Buffy and Xander, but it will bring out Spike's true character This experience will definitely help them to grow closer to one another and I'm so glad you liked it boo. Thank you for the great review - huggles.

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2008 - 09:33 pm Title: Needing You

Wonderful update---sad, yes but an excellent opportunity to let their relationship develop. Warmed my heart to see how Spike stepped in and took care of things for her; as well as how she allowed it. This story just gets better with each chapter!

Author's Response: Yes, and that's exactly what it's meant to do - serve as a catalyst for their growing relationship. Buffy will be facing a difficult time when she goes to CA and of course to have someone there to support her who cares for her - well, it won't go unnocitced by her, *winks*. THanks for the fab review darling, I'm elated that you liked it. Kisses.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2008 - 08:12 pm Title: Needing You

Enjoyed... but sad. And now another step in the development of their relationship.. Someone she can depend upon to take charge when she needs it... and honestly cares..

Not quite the chapters you want to write.. at this time.. understandable.

Author's Response: Indeed this will make for great leaps and bounds in their relationship. It was sort of difficult to write this chapter given what I went through recently, but I had this planned in my outline already and wasn't going to change it - this needs to happen for our fav couple to grow closer together. THank yu so much for the wonderful review darling. Snuggles.

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2008 - 07:40 pm Title: Needing You

Loved the chapter, loved the emotional depth you managed with it. The way Spike stepped up and took care of Buffy, showed her how he really wants to be there for her in the good and bad times. *happy sigh* I loved that Cordy told him that he's the one Buffy wants and that Buffy allowed him in enough to be there for her. It was a pleasure as always to read and to help you in any way I can, sweetie! *hugs*

Author's Response: Thank you carino, for all your help on this one. Yes, as sad as it is to lose a friend, it will show what Buffy and Spike are really made of when it comes to dealing with it. I couldn't have gotten through this chappy without your help mi hermna, muchas gracias darling - luv u.

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