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Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2008 - 10:45 pm Title: Conversations

omg u sooooo love torture huh???? omg i soooo can't wait!! crappy freakin' library hours! u know i would've finished this WAYYYY before now!!! i don't wanna go home!! i wanna finish! i think there's gonna be a smackdown!!!

still love it! but i love all your work so....that's nothing new!! can't wait to read the new chapter!!

Monica

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2008 - 02:04 am Title: Conversations

Stunning. This chapter was brilliantly crafted. I’ve been busy with my summer job and have been away from this story for a bit, but this chapter unearthed all the hope for a really big pay-off. Spike was so a-dork-able with the whole photo booth/picture blow-up thing and so much like the twelve-year-old-girl I was framing picture of me and my crush. I just knew from the start that the ball would be something momentous. I’m hoping Spike says those three little words and that Buffy is ready for it. Your muse is totally awesome, as are you!

Author's Response: Oh wow, glad you came back to read several chapters in a row. Hee hee, yeah, Spike sort of turned into that teenager that just so in love he wants the picture. I think we've all done something similiar when we were younger and it was kinda fun to write him doing it. Ah yes, Spike is most definitely ready to say those 3 little words... as for Buffy, just wait and see, *winks*. THank you so much for the compliments darling and the stellar review - hugs you tight and a big fat kiss.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2008 - 04:53 am Title: Conversations

Quite the build up. So amazing everything they're going through, and I love Cordy for being the perceptive one that is working to make this work. And Willy chiming in was priceless. Looking forward to the ball. :)

Author's Response: So glad you like Cordy in this - she is indeed a no bullshit kinda gal, call it like she sees it. Willy is just so fun to write, all with the bartender attitude, hee hee. Thanks for the review boo - hope you like the ball as well. Kisses.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2008 - 09:02 pm Title: Conversations

Cordelia having Spike's number is a delight. He's a romantic little thing, isn't he? It's charming.

This made me laugh out loud: “Have to admit though… I kinda like this position. You. Grindin’ your heel into my chest. Kinky an-OUCH-okay-alright, I’ll stop.” Of course Buffy would take direction a little too well. I also love that it led to “S’pose `m young enough that you can train me to your likin’.” Whee! The flirting and shy smiles are reaching critical mass.

Finally broaching the subject of a relationship was a huge step, even if it left Spike confused. Buffy's obviously come to a decision, and I can't imagine a better time to bring this relationship to a new level. Formal wear and dancing are an excellent way to ramp up the sexual tension. I'm looking forward to it.

Author's Response: Hehehehehe, glad you enjoyed the little comedic moments - I love including humor as a way of keeping things light. Indeed emotions are starting to run high between our couple and Buffy took a brave step in having that conversation with Spike. You can bet, despite Spike's confusion, he's determined to make the ball a night to remember, *winks*. Thank you so much for the awesome review sweety - huggles and kisses.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2008 - 10:25 am Title: Conversations

Oh, I loved the photo :) I really like your Cordy, our favourite couple could need some more help, but it's up to them now ;) Looking forward to the ball, darling! *hugs*

Author's Response: Isn't the photo awesome? It was love at first sight when I saw it and I so did the snoopy dance when Mel said I could use it. And yay for you liking my Cordy - she can be so funny to write, all with the quips but a heart of gold at the same time. Thank you so very much for the review darling - snuggles.

Reviewer: quirks Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 - 08:27 pm Title: Conversations

Dude! That's the best kind of cliffhanger. As always, Cordy is hilarious. I love that Buffy had the courage to start the conversation - even if she didn't actually say much, it was huge for her to even attempt it. But then she just walked away! I just sat here and glared at my monitor for a bit after reading that. *shakes head* But Spike will figure out what to do next. I'm SO looking forward to The Ball.

Author's Response: Squeeeeeeeee, glad you liked the cliffy. My muse can either be evil, or good - depends on his mood, hee hee. It took a lot of courage on Buffy's part to have that conversation with SPike, but of course it means that she's getting ready to take that plunge. As for her walking away, well - typical thinky Buffy had to process what Spike told her - she's still gunshy despite her feelings. And yes, SPike will know what to do in next week's update at the ball, *winks*. Thanks for the awesome review my friend. Huggles and snuggles you tight.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 - 12:00 pm Title: Conversations

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I LOVE DETERMINED SPIKE!!!! *does happy dance twirling round and round till she's dizzy*

God, I never know what to put in my reviews on ML; all your chapters are so full of funny parts and deep parts and hot parts and GAH! You're amazing boo!!! You managed to take a playboy and gradually put a soul in him never once letting the story become anything less than believable. You managed to take a woman that's obviously been hurt and let her open up bit by bit, and become more accepting of the fact she just may need someone... may need Spike. I bow to you my boo! Love you!!! *smooches*

Author's Response: Hahahahahaha, so do I. Love when he gets something in his head and just goes for it. Awwwww, you're so sweet to me boo with the compliments and of course your fics hold lots and lots of humor, MAJOR hotness and I've a feeling in MBWP, we're gonna see some deep emotional parts soon - can't wait for that darling. It's funny how I took a playboy Spike and made him into a man and you've taken a dormant spike beneath Will and made him come forward, hehheehehehhhe. Lve you my darling sister - big hugs and kisses boo.

Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 09:30 pm Title: Conversations

Still loving this story. I usually prefer Spike the Vamp but this is a wonderful exception.

Author's Response: Thank you so much boo, I mean it. I know a lot of readers prefer vamp-Spike, and I suppose someday I should try writing one... alas, I'm so addicted to the endless possibilities all-human fics provide, that I just need to think of a vamp-Spike plot that's original, and its a hard thing to do with so many out there that are so wonderfully written. Thanks again for the review darling - hugs.

Reviewer: Vanilla Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 09:23 pm Title: Conversations

Aww. He's fallen so hard, so fast, as has she. Looking forward to the intense Spuffyness! They're going to spontaneously combust if they have to wait much longer. As will I. ;) So fantastic! *hugs*

Author's Response: Indeed they have, now for them to get their act together and 'get-together', lol. But soon, I promise, *winks* - can't have them exploding from the UST, lol.. So glad you enjoyed the update my friend, thanks for the fab review - huggles you tight.

Reviewer: astrodex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 07:53 pm Title: Conversations

I can do intense. I like intense. I can't wait for intense.

Bring on the intense.

Great chapter.

Author's Response: LMAO - ROFL.... I so love your review darling, omg... so what you're saying is, you're okay with intense? heheheheheheheheh. Love you boo and thanks for the awesome review - kisses.

Reviewer: Tanit Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 07:36 pm Title: Conversations

Thank you for the birthday wishes, you tease. :)

Enjoyed this chapter very much. Cordy's always appealed to me, and you really have her no nonsense personality down. Thank goodness she spoke with both Buffy and Spike - and that both their stubborn selves listened to her!

Looking forward to next week's update.

Author's Response: You're welcome sweety - and sorry, couldn't help the tease, giggles. YAY - thanks for the compliment on writing Cordy, it's getting easier for me to write her lately. Sooooooo happy you like the chappy hon and hope you like next weekends update just as much - thanks fo0r the review - snuggles.

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 06:12 pm Title: Conversations

Great chapter although somewhat dissapointing. I hope it is not too late. I can see problems arising with
Angel. Didn't Buffy agree to go to the Ball with Angel?
I am hoping that Angel's actions will make him declare his feelings for Buffy.

Author's Response: Oh heavens no - Buffy didn't agree to go to the ball with Angel. When they were on the phone and she broke up with him, he got cut off from any further dealing with her other than to be on friendly terms. As for things being too late... nope, not too late, which is exactly why next chapter is gonna be so intense, trust me. THanks for the review sweety - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 05:25 pm Title: Conversations

I love this chapter, Capiche? LMAO

I have to say, you SO nailed Cordy on the head (not literally or figuratively...cause eww!).

And the hot curlers! That's just so... comfortable, honestly, cause if a gal can wear hot curlers around a guy and he still thinks she's awesome then yeah... sigh, he's got it bad!

OMG, the piccy turned out wonderful! And I loved Buffy's reaction to it... "I don't like it... I love it!" awwwww you make my heart all mushy! (damn you)

SQUEEE! He's gonna tell her! OMG OMG *bounces up and down* ABOUT FREAKIN TIME! I would have done slapped the wench at this point, so Spike has a LOT more patience than I ever would. Harumph.

Tee Hee... awesome, awesome chapter dearest. Sorry you're tired and your brain is fried, but this chapter was worth it ;) Wuggles and love.

Author's Response: GIggles, Capiche - oh yeah, knew you'd luv that, it's all for you, baby. Glad I'm finally getting Cordy right - she was tough to write at first. And alas, SPike missed his moment BUT is determined now... giggles, can you guess what's going to happen next chapter? *evil laugh*. Thanks for al the help boo and every review you write that gets me rolling with laughter. Luv ya babes.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 03:44 pm Title: Conversations

Enjoyed the conversation although the did not hit the nail in the head yet.. Will Spike push too far too soon still?

Waiting for the dance and the NC17 chapter. And thank heaven for Cordelia and Willy. Wondering if you are going to get those two together.. good pair. Who is Cordelia going to take to the dance. Hopefully, not Angel. Haven't heard from him in a while.



Author's Response: Yup, the conversation happened, but of course Spike missed an opportunity and Buffy sort of went avoidy. As for SPike pushing too hard - well, no, not really. But I'll let you be the judge when i update next, *winks*. Giggles, as for Cordy and Willy - got a surprise coming concerning them... and for Angel, yup, he'll be making an appearance, too. Thanks for the awesome review sweety. Huggles.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 03:33 pm Title: Conversations

Clever comeback of Buffy to offer buying bleach ;)
Loved their banter especially S'pose 'm young enough that you can train me to your likin'. ~ I just might take you up on that offer, Mr. Giles.
Heh heh, Cordelia is clever. *googles* Ah to get the pics saved / laminated. This is indeed better. Oh I like what he had done with it. I hope he won't forget Cordelia's advice though.
Ah well. He almost did but only almost. Maybe he can still do after the dance.
Enjoyed :)

Author's Response: LOL - glad you liked that part - ever the snarky Buffy. And yes, she sort of slipped up - thinking out loud like that, giggles. So glad you liked the picie and Cordy as well - she's a hoot to write. Yup - Spike is pretty determined now - especially after realizing he missed his chance, *winks*. Hope you like next chapter boo and thanks for the review. Smooches.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 02:50 pm Title: Conversations

I swear, woman, you write the best fics! At this point I'm just holding my breath, biting my nails and edgily read towards the end of the chapter - is this the chapter, will they finally get together and then when I found out it wasn't (but close), it made it soooo much sweeter. Weird, but true. It only means the next one will be even sweeter!

You know I love it. Please continue!

Author's Response: Awwwwwwww, *blushes*, thank you darling. And I'm glad I was able to do my job as an author and get you on pins and needles, salivating and wondering. And yes - I do get what you mean - sometimes cliffies serve a purpose that are hard to ignore as good even if a person is dying to know what happens next... blame my muse, lol. Thanks so very much for the fabulous review my friend - hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: Blackoberst Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 02:48 pm Title: Conversations

Great update. Really liked the interaction between the two. They're almost on the same wavelength. Looking forward to next week.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed how they got along in this update hon - they're well on their way to spuffyness, *winks*. Thanks for the great review darling - hope you enjoy next chapter. Huggles.

Reviewer: burnkitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 11:37 am Title: Conversations

Ok all I can say is whoh! This chapter was awesome! I loved the pic in the middle of the fic, it was totally almost like what I imagined in my head when I was reading. Very unexpected too might I add. Love the cliffie very intense, Im all with the wanting more now.

Human relations, is it ever simple? *chuckles*

Author's Response: Squeeee, glad you liked it that much boo. GAH - that pic is one of my all time favs, it just seems so them in this fic that I did the snoopy dance when Mel gave me permission to use it. LMAO - nope, HR is never as simple as it should be, but I'm glad I have you looking forwrd to next chapter. THanks for the awesome review sweets - luv ya.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 10:43 am Title: Conversations

Reading your stories is always such a joy, I love how you include little extras like the photogragh. :D And I liked the Cordy/Spike scene, it was nice to see Cordy watching Buffy back. Buffy's talk with Cordy and Willy was also great, as was the Spuffy talk. Fantastic chapter!

Author's Response: Awww, thank you boo. I do have n affinity for including pics, especially when 'a picture is worth a 1000 words', giggles. Despite Cordy's nature - she's got a heart of gold, and making sure her friends are safe and happy is definitely a priority for her. Glad you enjoyed the whole chapter darling and thanks for the fab review. Snuggles.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 10:05 am Title: Conversations

wonderful tale and thanks for the update, Spike did miss a chance there, silly man.
looking forward to next week's instalment

Author's Response: Hahahahah, indeed he did miss a chance, but then again, he never saw this conversation coming. THanks for the review boo - hugs.

Reviewer: dampersandspoons Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 07:10 am Title: Conversations

Time to take off them dancin' shoes, buddy! We're strollin' now! And that means droppin' the L-train! You had me on the edge of my seat, holdin' on to my pant legs!!! THE SUSPENSE! I don't know if I can hold out much longer, but damn you and your addictive story, i know I'll wait until the friggin' end. Because I like torture. A lot. I also cry myself to sleep. I mean, if you want to take the word of a sleep-crier, be my guest...but it'll be on YOUR conscience when this ship goes down. Got me? < /delusional sarcasm >

Author's Response: LMAO - yu are so funny girl. A true sadist, giggles. But that's why I love you, *winks*. Thanks for everything my twisted sista - luv ya.

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 07:04 am Title: Conversations

So very good I can't wait till this ball.

Author's Response: THank you sweety - I do hope you like next weekends update as well - snuggles.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 05:52 am Title: Conversations

It's a good thing I love you therefore I can't kill you or muse!?!!!! THE TALK and NO KISSING at the end. You are truly evil....in only the best way! Wow! What a chap! I was like leaning into the laptop at a minimum of 5 places, just waiting for some large revelation to happen and you ...... didn't revelate! Evil Evil Evil and so damn good at what you do.

So now, I'm hoping (pleading) for a crumb in the next chapter.... perhaps a sensual dance....a moonlit stroll in the garden....a quite shadowy alcove.....a big hot Spuffy SEX SCENE! Oh I know. You'll just string us along. Bait us and leave us high and dry, merrily laughing away with muse sipping a vanilla bean latte!

Got my motor reving sweety and I can't wait to see what you, muse and murphy come up with next for this highly entertaining, spectacular tale.

Sweet Hugs and Spuffy Kisses my friend!

Author's Response: Runs and hides... lol. Just trying to build the story, the tension, honest. As for your guesses to next chapter, there'll be a few of the things you mentioned - that's all I can say, *winks*. Hugs you tight my friend for the fab and funny review. Snuggles.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 05:14 am Title: Conversations

Thanks for the awesome update - again! I don't know how you keep doing it, but that muse of yours must be one hell of a man. :)

Ok, so not only did Spike miss the moment, but you're telling us to be prepared for intense ... I sure hope Angel doesn't get in the way at the ball and say something he shouldn't about that stupid bet he thinks is still on! Argh! You and your cliffies and hints!

Loved Cordy again. If Angel does get in the way, I'm pretty sure she'll set him on his ear. :)

Looking forward to next week!


Author's Response: Hahahahahha, my muse can be so cooperative sometimes then run away the next, evil little creature he is. As for Angel getting in the way..... hmmmm, well, he'll be there, that's all I can say without siving away a spoiler. Glad you enjoed Cordy - she's fun to write. Thanks for the fab review darling - smoochies to you.

Reviewer: NeomeBuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 04:48 am Title: Conversations

man! that was an interesting attempt at a DTR (define the relationship) conversation for our two heroes. Hard to tell if they actually reached any kind of conclusion and then with that last line you've definitely got the drum roll a going!

Author's Response: HAHAHHAHA, I ike that acronym, that's a good one. They sort of did and sort of didn't reach a conclusion - more of a 'on-hold' sort f thing, I know - evil, right? Glad you liked the update and thanks so much for the great review - squishes you tight.

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