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Date: 07/22/2008 - 05:37 am Title: Madness, Mayhem and Moonlight

YAY!!! They Finally seem to be on the same page!! Poor Spike in the hospital though, from walking around all angry and depressed. (Loved Fred!) So he gets his eyebrow scar here? Great chapter, and looking forward to Buffy's talk.

Author's Response: Hehehehe, guess I got Spike pretty banged up but in the end, he did get what he wanted most. So glad you enjoyed Fred - I needed a bit of comic relief from the suturing scene and she's so quirky and funny to work with. Yup - Spike get's his scar here, I figured why not, lol. Thanks for the review sweetheart, I'm very happy you liked the update - smooches to you.

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Date: 07/22/2008 - 05:34 am Title: Explicit Intentions

Ooh, evil Angel, making Buffy doubt things... Though, I'm still wondering if she's a virgin or something....

Author's Response: Hahahhahahahhahaaha, well, I supose you'll have to wait and see. As for Angelus, he's just a big gint ass, lol. THanks for the review hon.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2008 - 05:22 am Title: Madness, Mayhem and Moonlight

Way to go Tina, the chapter i've been waiting for. Now they both know how they feel and how cute was it that instead of having sex they just slept in each others arms , kudo's girl.

Author's Response: Squeeeeeeeeeeee, I'm uber glad you lied how they got together. Yeah, I really couldn't see them having sex that night, not with the emotional rollercoaster they'd been on AND the fact Spike is all sorts of F'ed up on meds, hee hee. THanks a million for the review darling - huggles.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2008 - 04:45 am Title: Madness, Mayhem and Moonlight

I saw this when you put it up, but it lost my review, so now I'm back.

no hating on Buffy, though she definitely did frustrate! But, there's no reason for them not to spill that past stuff now that the declarations are out of the way. Poor Spike, he's not going to want to look in the mirror for a couple days, lol. Hospitals don't exactly like to keep you pretty.

Yay for Cordy!

Author's Response: Oh good, glad to hear no hating Buffy, though she is quite frustrating, giggles. I roughed up SPike good, huh? Giggles - yeah, hospitals = no fun for anyone. Thanks for the review sweety - huggles.

Reviewer: Darkest Dream Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2008 - 03:21 am Title: Madness, Mayhem and Moonlight

Hell yes! Go Buffy!!
I love this story its so realistic,
You have a gift,
MORE!

Author's Response: Hahhahaahah, thanks for the awesome compliment sweety and the review - glad you liked it. Hugs.

Reviewer: dampersandspoons Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2008 - 03:07 am Title: Madness, Mayhem and Moonlight

YAAAAAAAAAY! And God, did you take me on an emotional ride on that one! I'm not hating on Buffy. I totally get her side, even if it is a bit irrational, but for the character you've created, it makes perfect sense for her to be apprehensive. And it's fitting that Spike would take such offense because he's so damn sensitive. I'm glad they managed to talk to each other and that things are seemingly looking hopeful for the two of them. Great chapter, Tina! Can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: Hi sweety... so glad you 'get' Buffy, even though she had her moments where everyone wanted to slap her upside the head, lol. Yeah, Spike was pretty pissed and I think he had every right to blow up at her, but in the end, with a little help from some drugs (lol), they finally got it together. I'm thrilled you liked the ride boo and thanks for the review - squishes you tight.

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2008 - 02:23 am Title: Madness, Mayhem and Moonlight

Well I m glad that turned out okay. I am glad that Buffy spoke to Cordelia about what happened with Angel. I am also happy that Buffy actually told Spike she loved him. Great chapter. I just hope that is the last we hear from Angel but I am worried about that bet. I am sure that Angel will find some way to twist things.

Author's Response: Good, I'm happy you liked how everything turned out despite the bumpy ride. As for Angel, well, one more interaction with him before the story is thru - but I think you'll actually enjoy it, *winks*. Got some tricks up my sleeve still left, lol. Thanks for the great review boo - hugs.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2008 - 01:55 am Title: Madness, Mayhem and Moonlight

OOPS! Forgot one thing. Something funny about the "oh shit" reference. During one particularly boring road trip, my late brother-in-law & I came up with an acronym for it: Overhead Strategic Handle for Intense Turns. So, ya see! So, the next time someone threatens to wash your mouth out for saying that, just tell 'em it's an acronym, not a curse word.

Author's Response: OMG......... I about died reading this, that is sooooooooooo good, such a perfect acronym, I won't be forggeting it, hahahahaa. THanks for sharing boo.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2008 - 01:50 am Title: Madness, Mayhem and Moonlight

Hate on Buffy? Never! LOL! She's good in my book. I mean, she realized what a colossal idiot she was being (with a little help from a friend), held his hand while he was hurt and professed her love for him all in one night. Plus, she gets to spend a week nursing him back to health. If that's what you call "groveling", then I wouldn't mind doing some of it myself! (OOPS! Did I say that out loud?)

Author's Response: Oh good, glad you still like her. She may have needed a nudge, but she did the right thing in the end. LMAO - oh yeah, her week of playing nurse is going to be fun to say the least - i'm envious, giggles. THanks for the fab review darling - huggles.

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2008 - 01:02 am Title: Madness, Mayhem and Moonlight

You're such a damn tease ;)

hehehehe, THAT being said - AWESOME chapter - poor Spike! Bet you'll never let him get messed up again, will ya? LOL

And while you know i have the Buffy issues, I have hope that they'll resovle themselves. LMAO, in fact I KNOW they will. Loved the 'unnatural' quote (it just made me giggle, I don't know why!) and the OH SHIT handles!

You know what really got me about the hot tube scene? Spike laying there, looking at Buffy as snow fell on her hair... GAH, THAT's a tear jerker! And a sob caught in my throat when he thought he wasn't worthy enough.

Then you topped it off with Spike holding out his hand to have Buffy join him in his bed, to sleep....guh, what girl wouldn't melt at that??? And I swear to Andrew, if Buffy FOBAR's him, I WILL send Validus after you - no holds barred.

Have a happy day :D. heheheh Love ya my sista!

Author's Response: Moi? A tease? Yeah, hmm, little bit, HAHHAAHAHHAAH. But you love it and you know it. Squeeee, glad t make ya laugh with the ohshit handle and "Unnatural" - gotta have that comic relief even in a serious chapter - stupid angst anyway, lol. Ah yes, the hot tub scene with a doped up Spike at his lowest of lows...... I couldn't resist writing it and needed the imagery. EEEEEEEEP - no, no please don't send Validus after me.... send me Pax or Dorum, or hey, BOTH, giggles. Thanks for all the help on this chappy my twisted sista - luv ya.

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2008 - 12:57 am Title: Madness, Mayhem and Moonlight

Yeah, I still don't like Buffy much although I have to admit I liked her marginally better by the end of the chapter than say by the start or the middle, because then I just wanted to slap her silly for hurting my Spikey. *cuddles Spike* See how passionate you make me about your work? I actually want to slap a fictional character. ;) LOVED, LOVED, LOVED the chapter! It was filled with all kinds of angst, of little tidbits I'm really curious about (like Owen, for example), of me wanting to strangle Buffy and take care of Spike *g* (sorry , couldn't resist). It was truly a rollercoaster of emotions, and I adore that at least in the end, Buffy finally gave in to what she truly feels and let her fears to the side. Magnificent update, sweetie, I'm looking forward to what more you have in store for us after this. :D Love you, darling!

Author's Response: SHe does have a bit of redeeming to do, but she'll be MORE than happy to do it all, LOL. Ah yes, Owen, my little mystery man for Cordy, giggles - he'll be fun to toy with, *winks*. Thanks for all the help you gave me on this chapter darling - it was a toughie to pull off with so much going on. Love you mi hermna.

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2008 - 02:21 am Title: Explicit Intentions

Ahh! The great forehead still manages to prey on Buffy even after she gave him the kabbosh—just another sign of how well this story is going. The chapter showed great little couple-y moments, if only to fool the father-son creeps or point-out what’s absolutely great about Buffy and Spike’s relationship. Thanks again for bringing Cordy and Willy together. Even though they never shared a scene together in the Buffyverse, you’ve really flushed out the great snarking potential that would’ve been possible if Willy had wandered over to LA for the Angel series. That Angelus is so evil, that he doesn’t even need to mention the bet at this point.

Author's Response: YAY, glad you enjoyed the couply moments and of course Willy/Cordy. That really would have been neat to see those two interact on the series. And oh yes, I do love writing me some evil Angelus, hee hee. The bet will come out later as well, just when you least expect it, that's all I can say, *winks*. Thanks for the fab review darling - hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2008 - 02:04 am Title: Conversations

Stunning. This chapter was brilliantly crafted. I’ve been busy with my summer job and have been away from this story for a bit, but this chapter unearthed all the hope for a really big pay-off. Spike was so a-dork-able with the whole photo booth/picture blow-up thing and so much like the twelve-year-old-girl I was framing picture of me and my crush. I just knew from the start that the ball would be something momentous. I’m hoping Spike says those three little words and that Buffy is ready for it. Your muse is totally awesome, as are you!

Author's Response: Oh wow, glad you came back to read several chapters in a row. Hee hee, yeah, Spike sort of turned into that teenager that just so in love he wants the picture. I think we've all done something similiar when we were younger and it was kinda fun to write him doing it. Ah yes, Spike is most definitely ready to say those 3 little words... as for Buffy, just wait and see, *winks*. THank you so much for the compliments darling and the stellar review - hugs you tight and a big fat kiss.

Reviewer: Blackoberst Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2008 - 09:17 pm Title: Explicit Intentions

They really do song and dance a lot, don't they. Is there a part where Spike finally gets to tell his and Angelus' tale? And will there be fisticuffs?

Author's Response: LOL, yeah they do a lot of song and dance. As for Spike getting to tell her how he feels, well, I suppose its not a spoiler to tell you yes, this will be his chance. As for the O'Connor story, that's going to have to wait unfortunetly due to an unforseen set of events I have planned for next chapter. But it will come after that, I promise. Thanks for the lovely review swety - huggles.

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Date: 07/17/2008 - 03:48 am Title: Explicit Intentions

i am yelling at my screen 'DONT FALL FOR IT' when angel is trying to discredit spike. but i have a feeling buffy will have to learn the hardway that angel is full o'crap. cant wait for the next chappy, keep up the kickass work :)

Author's Response: LOL... yeah, she's gona learn the hard way for sure, sorry, but it will be over quickly so the spuffiness can begin, I promise boo. THanks for the fab review - huggles.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2008 - 05:23 am Title: Explicit Intentions

Glad that they've at least done away with one of the O'Connors. Not so convinced that Angel wasn't able to do a bit of damage. Doesn't seem like complete sabotage, but I am looking forward to that moment when they finally get to give in. Fire works I'm sure. Loved the two chapters. Really exciting to log on and find two waiting for me! Thanks for making my night!

Author's Response: That's evil Angelus for ya, always meddling. As for firedworks, it'll be soon, I promise, just have to get the angst out of the way. So glad you were able to read both updates at once hon and that you liked them. Thanks so very much for the great review - snuggles for you sweety.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2008 - 04:53 am Title: Conversations

Quite the build up. So amazing everything they're going through, and I love Cordy for being the perceptive one that is working to make this work. And Willy chiming in was priceless. Looking forward to the ball. :)

Author's Response: So glad you like Cordy in this - she is indeed a no bullshit kinda gal, call it like she sees it. Willy is just so fun to write, all with the bartender attitude, hee hee. Thanks for the review boo - hope you like the ball as well. Kisses.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2008 - 04:38 pm Title: Explicit Intentions

You did an excellent job setting up the ball, and I could picture the two of them before I got to the picture. Angel and Liam are both very creepy. I can't believe Liam was so wasted he'd forgotten having insulted Buffy with his advances. At least Spike was right that staking his claim on Buffy shut down a repeat performance.

The evening did not turn into the romance fest I was expecting, but I hadn't figured Angel would be able to manipulate Buffy's opinion so easily. The lingering bet is still making me uneasy. Is Buffy going to come clean about what Angel implied and allow Spike to defend himself?

I'm looking forward to next week's answers.

Author's Response: Awesome, I luv to hear that you could imagine the setting and the characters even without the pic, thank you for the compliment. I know the evening didn't turn into what you expected, but it's my picky muse that wasn't happy with the original ending, sorry. He'll be trying to rework the second half of the chapter for ya and god willing post this weekend sweety. Thanks so much for the review - smooches to you.

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Date: 07/15/2008 - 03:20 am Title: Explicit Intentions

I am so happy Buffy decided to trust Spike over Angel. Even if she does have some doubts about Spike I applaud her talking to him about Angel's accusations instead of keeping it to herself.

Author's Response: True - she at least did that much, even if Spike should have let her continue to talk instead of cutting er off, lol. So glad you liked the update darling and thanks so much for the review. Kisses.

Reviewer: quirks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 09:53 pm Title: Explicit Intentions

Woah! Wasn't expecting that turn of events. But I'm really curious about the Big OConnor secret that you've hinted at. Hmmm this is gonna set our Buffy back a great deal, isn't it? Though she has some hinted at secrets that she hasn't told. Maybe there can be a cleansing truth-telling thing? Angel is a total cad. And what's up with Willy? So many questions! That just means this fic has to keep going for a looooong time. *bats eyelashes*

Author's Response: The O'Connor thing is a bit of a twisted history, but then it wouldn't be Murphy's law without it, *winks*. That'll come out juuuuuuuuuuust a wee bit later... got a few plans up my sleeve first - mainly to do with revealing Buffy's source of insecurities/secrets first, *winks*. I know, I've created many questions here for this fic, but that's also part of the fub - to get readers thinking, guessing, theorizing... I'm so thrilled you liked the update hon and thanks so much for the awesome review. Smooches to you babe.

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Date: 07/14/2008 - 04:01 pm Title: Explicit Intentions

Angel and his father are both jerks, I'm just glad Angel didn't bring up the bet. Loved the romantic hand kissage. And Cordy was really rockin' this chapter, I liked Willy too. :D Great update!

Author's Response: Yes they are - a real pair there huh? Nope, Angelus wouldn't dare bring up the bet, not now at least, not when he thinks he still has a chance to win. I'nm so happy you liked the hand kiss, willy & cordy and the chapter as a whole darling. I do hope to post this weekend but we'll see, a bit of RL stuff interfering with my time lately. THanks for the great reiew - snuggles.

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 03:24 pm Title: Explicit Intentions

WOW, you DID cut it!

I really like what you did though, with switching some reactions and such, cause you know me - something like a WHAM BAM THANK YOU MA"AM just doesn't do it for me. Glad you took it this direction, even with your medicated self! (still think you need to self medicate more often to get way AWESOME results!) tee hee!

Sotia did an AWESOME job on that piccy, hun - They are very drool worthy!

And I LOVED the line: "And the Oscar goes to..." LMAO! I could SO hear that in my head with Angel's voice. Yes, I think Buffy can trust him with her heart - but I foresee (yeah right, Carrie, foresight? think not) trouble on the horizon...dum dum dummmm!

Great update hun and I can't wait to see what happens next! Thanks for the shout out, means a lot! Wuggles and love.

Author's Response: Yup - I butchered it from the original version, but of course you know why, *winks*. And hey, maybe my meds helped, lol. Sotia's manip was the shiznit, huh? Someday I'd like to learn how to manip - if I could squeeze more hours into my day and grow an extra set of hands that is, hee hee. Touble on the horizon you say.... hmmmm, maybe a bit, yeah, but alls well that ends well, right? GIggles - thanks for all your help on this hon and for reviewing - luv ya my twisted sista.

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Date: 07/14/2008 - 01:16 pm Title: Explicit Intentions

Loved the updates and I hope RL is going better for you.

Author's Response: THank you hon, glad you liked it. Yeah, things are just getting a bit busy around here lately, cutting into my free time, poo. But hopefully it'll calm down by the end of th week. Thanks again for the review sweety - hugs.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 11:35 am Title: Explicit Intentions

You know what I would love to do to that lying,manipulative rotten bastard, well you can't print what I would like to do to horrible. Great chapter TIna, good work.

Author's Response: HAHAHHAHAHHAA, that means I wrote just the right amount of evilness in there if you can't type the ass-kickage you have planned for Angelus, hee hee. THanks for the review darling - many hugs and kisses your way.

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Date: 07/14/2008 - 07:20 am Title: Explicit Intentions

Eep! Angel pouncing again. Grrrr! It's a good thing Buffy doesn't seem to be buying it, but she has something to think about. Great chapter, as always. :)

Author's Response: Glad you liked the update hon. I couldn't resist throwing in a little angst, a little something for Buffy to think about - bad muse, giggles. THanks for the review - smoochies.

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