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Reviewer: Tanit Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 07:36 pm Title: Conversations

Thank you for the birthday wishes, you tease. :)

Enjoyed this chapter very much. Cordy's always appealed to me, and you really have her no nonsense personality down. Thank goodness she spoke with both Buffy and Spike - and that both their stubborn selves listened to her!

Looking forward to next week's update.

Author's Response: You're welcome sweety - and sorry, couldn't help the tease, giggles. YAY - thanks for the compliment on writing Cordy, it's getting easier for me to write her lately. Sooooooo happy you like the chappy hon and hope you like next weekends update just as much - thanks fo0r the review - snuggles.

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 06:12 pm Title: Conversations

Great chapter although somewhat dissapointing. I hope it is not too late. I can see problems arising with
Angel. Didn't Buffy agree to go to the Ball with Angel?
I am hoping that Angel's actions will make him declare his feelings for Buffy.

Author's Response: Oh heavens no - Buffy didn't agree to go to the ball with Angel. When they were on the phone and she broke up with him, he got cut off from any further dealing with her other than to be on friendly terms. As for things being too late... nope, not too late, which is exactly why next chapter is gonna be so intense, trust me. THanks for the review sweety - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 05:25 pm Title: Conversations

I love this chapter, Capiche? LMAO

I have to say, you SO nailed Cordy on the head (not literally or figuratively...cause eww!).

And the hot curlers! That's just so... comfortable, honestly, cause if a gal can wear hot curlers around a guy and he still thinks she's awesome then yeah... sigh, he's got it bad!

OMG, the piccy turned out wonderful! And I loved Buffy's reaction to it... "I don't like it... I love it!" awwwww you make my heart all mushy! (damn you)

SQUEEE! He's gonna tell her! OMG OMG *bounces up and down* ABOUT FREAKIN TIME! I would have done slapped the wench at this point, so Spike has a LOT more patience than I ever would. Harumph.

Tee Hee... awesome, awesome chapter dearest. Sorry you're tired and your brain is fried, but this chapter was worth it ;) Wuggles and love.

Author's Response: GIggles, Capiche - oh yeah, knew you'd luv that, it's all for you, baby. Glad I'm finally getting Cordy right - she was tough to write at first. And alas, SPike missed his moment BUT is determined now... giggles, can you guess what's going to happen next chapter? *evil laugh*. Thanks for al the help boo and every review you write that gets me rolling with laughter. Luv ya babes.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 03:44 pm Title: Conversations

Enjoyed the conversation although the did not hit the nail in the head yet.. Will Spike push too far too soon still?

Waiting for the dance and the NC17 chapter. And thank heaven for Cordelia and Willy. Wondering if you are going to get those two together.. good pair. Who is Cordelia going to take to the dance. Hopefully, not Angel. Haven't heard from him in a while.



Author's Response: Yup, the conversation happened, but of course Spike missed an opportunity and Buffy sort of went avoidy. As for SPike pushing too hard - well, no, not really. But I'll let you be the judge when i update next, *winks*. Giggles, as for Cordy and Willy - got a surprise coming concerning them... and for Angel, yup, he'll be making an appearance, too. Thanks for the awesome review sweety. Huggles.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 03:33 pm Title: Conversations

Clever comeback of Buffy to offer buying bleach ;)
Loved their banter especially S'pose 'm young enough that you can train me to your likin'. ~ I just might take you up on that offer, Mr. Giles.
Heh heh, Cordelia is clever. *googles* Ah to get the pics saved / laminated. This is indeed better. Oh I like what he had done with it. I hope he won't forget Cordelia's advice though.
Ah well. He almost did but only almost. Maybe he can still do after the dance.
Enjoyed :)

Author's Response: LOL - glad you liked that part - ever the snarky Buffy. And yes, she sort of slipped up - thinking out loud like that, giggles. So glad you liked the picie and Cordy as well - she's a hoot to write. Yup - Spike is pretty determined now - especially after realizing he missed his chance, *winks*. Hope you like next chapter boo and thanks for the review. Smooches.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 02:50 pm Title: Conversations

I swear, woman, you write the best fics! At this point I'm just holding my breath, biting my nails and edgily read towards the end of the chapter - is this the chapter, will they finally get together and then when I found out it wasn't (but close), it made it soooo much sweeter. Weird, but true. It only means the next one will be even sweeter!

You know I love it. Please continue!

Author's Response: Awwwwwwww, *blushes*, thank you darling. And I'm glad I was able to do my job as an author and get you on pins and needles, salivating and wondering. And yes - I do get what you mean - sometimes cliffies serve a purpose that are hard to ignore as good even if a person is dying to know what happens next... blame my muse, lol. Thanks so very much for the fabulous review my friend - hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: Blackoberst Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 02:48 pm Title: Conversations

Great update. Really liked the interaction between the two. They're almost on the same wavelength. Looking forward to next week.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed how they got along in this update hon - they're well on their way to spuffyness, *winks*. Thanks for the great review darling - hope you enjoy next chapter. Huggles.

Reviewer: burnkitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 11:37 am Title: Conversations

Ok all I can say is whoh! This chapter was awesome! I loved the pic in the middle of the fic, it was totally almost like what I imagined in my head when I was reading. Very unexpected too might I add. Love the cliffie very intense, Im all with the wanting more now.

Human relations, is it ever simple? *chuckles*

Author's Response: Squeeee, glad you liked it that much boo. GAH - that pic is one of my all time favs, it just seems so them in this fic that I did the snoopy dance when Mel gave me permission to use it. LMAO - nope, HR is never as simple as it should be, but I'm glad I have you looking forwrd to next chapter. THanks for the awesome review sweets - luv ya.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 10:43 am Title: Conversations

Reading your stories is always such a joy, I love how you include little extras like the photogragh. :D And I liked the Cordy/Spike scene, it was nice to see Cordy watching Buffy back. Buffy's talk with Cordy and Willy was also great, as was the Spuffy talk. Fantastic chapter!

Author's Response: Awww, thank you boo. I do have n affinity for including pics, especially when 'a picture is worth a 1000 words', giggles. Despite Cordy's nature - she's got a heart of gold, and making sure her friends are safe and happy is definitely a priority for her. Glad you enjoyed the whole chapter darling and thanks for the fab review. Snuggles.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 10:05 am Title: Conversations

wonderful tale and thanks for the update, Spike did miss a chance there, silly man.
looking forward to next week's instalment

Author's Response: Hahahahah, indeed he did miss a chance, but then again, he never saw this conversation coming. THanks for the review boo - hugs.

Reviewer: dampersandspoons Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 07:10 am Title: Conversations

Time to take off them dancin' shoes, buddy! We're strollin' now! And that means droppin' the L-train! You had me on the edge of my seat, holdin' on to my pant legs!!! THE SUSPENSE! I don't know if I can hold out much longer, but damn you and your addictive story, i know I'll wait until the friggin' end. Because I like torture. A lot. I also cry myself to sleep. I mean, if you want to take the word of a sleep-crier, be my guest...but it'll be on YOUR conscience when this ship goes down. Got me? < /delusional sarcasm >

Author's Response: LMAO - yu are so funny girl. A true sadist, giggles. But that's why I love you, *winks*. Thanks for everything my twisted sista - luv ya.

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 07:04 am Title: Conversations

So very good I can't wait till this ball.

Author's Response: THank you sweety - I do hope you like next weekends update as well - snuggles.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 05:52 am Title: Conversations

It's a good thing I love you therefore I can't kill you or muse!?!!!! THE TALK and NO KISSING at the end. You are truly evil....in only the best way! Wow! What a chap! I was like leaning into the laptop at a minimum of 5 places, just waiting for some large revelation to happen and you ...... didn't revelate! Evil Evil Evil and so damn good at what you do.

So now, I'm hoping (pleading) for a crumb in the next chapter.... perhaps a sensual dance....a moonlit stroll in the garden....a quite shadowy alcove.....a big hot Spuffy SEX SCENE! Oh I know. You'll just string us along. Bait us and leave us high and dry, merrily laughing away with muse sipping a vanilla bean latte!

Got my motor reving sweety and I can't wait to see what you, muse and murphy come up with next for this highly entertaining, spectacular tale.

Sweet Hugs and Spuffy Kisses my friend!

Author's Response: Runs and hides... lol. Just trying to build the story, the tension, honest. As for your guesses to next chapter, there'll be a few of the things you mentioned - that's all I can say, *winks*. Hugs you tight my friend for the fab and funny review. Snuggles.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 05:14 am Title: Conversations

Thanks for the awesome update - again! I don't know how you keep doing it, but that muse of yours must be one hell of a man. :)

Ok, so not only did Spike miss the moment, but you're telling us to be prepared for intense ... I sure hope Angel doesn't get in the way at the ball and say something he shouldn't about that stupid bet he thinks is still on! Argh! You and your cliffies and hints!

Loved Cordy again. If Angel does get in the way, I'm pretty sure she'll set him on his ear. :)

Looking forward to next week!


Author's Response: Hahahahahha, my muse can be so cooperative sometimes then run away the next, evil little creature he is. As for Angel getting in the way..... hmmmm, well, he'll be there, that's all I can say without siving away a spoiler. Glad you enjoed Cordy - she's fun to write. Thanks for the fab review darling - smoochies to you.

Reviewer: NeomeBuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 04:48 am Title: Conversations

man! that was an interesting attempt at a DTR (define the relationship) conversation for our two heroes. Hard to tell if they actually reached any kind of conclusion and then with that last line you've definitely got the drum roll a going!

Author's Response: HAHAHHAHA, I ike that acronym, that's a good one. They sort of did and sort of didn't reach a conclusion - more of a 'on-hold' sort f thing, I know - evil, right? Glad you liked the update and thanks so much for the great review - squishes you tight.

Reviewer: jeanieofoz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 04:27 am Title: Conversations

:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

Author's Response: giggles - thankee darling - hugs.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 03:23 am Title: Conversations

Stupid site. Had a nice long review that didn't go through.

That was mean, Buffy! How can she leave him without a response, a word to tell him where it goes next?! It's going to drive Spike insane wondering what she's thinking.

I'm sure the heat between them will be obvious to all at the ball. No way they could dance together and not have the chemistry be dead obvious.

More hints at her worries leftover from the last guy. But, is she worried she can't cut it as Buffy, or as a woman in bed......it would be natural to be intimidated by a guy that's been with many women, but Buffy seems to feel beyond that when she runs away from their heated moments. Very insecure, despite knowing exactly how to flaunt her assets. But I have a feeling that Spike's been more blunt and honest with her than Riley ever was.

Don't remember if you already descibed her dress....I'm sure Spike will be drooling.

Author's Response: LOL - welllllllll, that's Buffy for ya, she's always been WAY to over-thinky gal. She hasn't been with a man in 9 years though so it takes her awhile to process things - understandable when you're worried about giving your heart away. As for the ball... I agree with your assessment, *winks* - things will be fairly obvious to those around them. Buffy has worries about a lot of thing, and yes some of them include the very things you mentioned - accurately so. And just wait - I got a surprise over her dress and Spike's tux - hopefully something you'll be drooling over, giggles Thanks for the awesome review swety - huggles.

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 03:16 am Title: Conversations

Swoon, swoon........warm fuzzies, tingles, sighs and last but not least......a man that wants you to be pampered with thousand dollars......... my heart be still !!! That pretty much sums up my feelings with this chapter. that was just so sweet, and I loved it. It's funny, I save your story for last, even though it kills me to wait, but I have always been a person that wants to save the best for last, that's why dessert is always last. It leaves the best taste in your mouth to linger, savor, so I can go to bed with nice feelings, anticipating what is coming, anxious, but knowing it will be worth the wait.........so big gold star for you my dear. Great job and thanks so much..... Good thoughts to you Debbie

Author's Response: LOL - you had me rolling here with the beginning of your review. Yup - Spike is a changed man now - all with the spoiling of his girl and the tender commitment. And WOW, what a compliment - to save the best for last? I'm floored hon, truly floored and humbled, thank you - smoochies. And as always THANK YOU sooooooooo much for the wonderful review - now I have the warm fuzzies, giggles. Luv ya babes.

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 03:06 am Title: Conversations

Thanks for yet another lovely chapter -they're moving closer all the time! I can hardly wait! Hope you and the muse have a very productive week! *hugs you*

Author's Response: THank you boo - I do hope the muse continues on his path of productivness - I love it when he's like that, lol. So glad you enjoyed the update darling and thanks for the great review. Huggles.

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 02:51 am Title: Conversations

Lovely update. They are finally getting somewhere. Sweet Cordy is giving them the shove they both needed. Any chance Willie will be in Cordy's future? The photo of them is so sweet and cute.

Author's Response: ol - leave it to Cordy to intervene with her own brand of wisdom. But yes, they are definitely on the path now. As for a Willy/Cordy futuenjoyed the update sweety, thanks for the fab review - snuggles.re.... well, have a surprise up my sleeve on that one - that's all I can say, *winks*.I'm so happy you liked the pic and

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 02:18 am Title: Conversations

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!
Oh lord, I just made a Sotia-like squee. **shakes head** Oh well, it was a grrreat chapter and does deserve a good squeal of excitement because Buffy is finally removing her head from her arse. Cannot wait for the next update, the ball, right? Should be interesting, plus...Spike in a tux. Me-yow.

Hope you're having a great weekend.

Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHAHHA - that was so Sotia, but GOd luv her she's SUCH a doll and a great friend, I adore her personality. Hee hee, Buffy is getting there, she really is. It's taking a lot of courage from her especially after 9 years of no men. Yup - the next update is the ball, *winks*, and what a ball it will be, full of lots of surprises and laughs. As for Spike in a tux... gotta a surprise for you on that as wel that I think you'll REALLY squee over, *win-wink*. Thank you so much for the awesome review sweets - huggles and snuggles.

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 01:58 am Title: When Love and Death Embrace

OMG! I have no idea how I managed to do it, but I missed this update! Stupid, sill me! Loved loved loved this chapter. The funeral was sad, but I am so happy that the experience has drawn Buffy and Spike together. The picture idea was so sweet and I loved how she wasn't instantly smiling in the first couple of pictures; I could so visualize Buffy glaring at Spike's attempts to make her smile. And, it was just so cute that she couldn't sleep and snuck in to snuggle with Spike, especially since he didn't seem to have trouble dropping off into slumber withouth him. Too cute for words. Great work as always.

Also, on a more personal note. Thank you so much for all the sweet and caring words you have sent my way on the reviews of Forward In Reverse. They have meant so much to me, knowing that someone out there understands what I am going through. Thanks so much. BTW, my mom is getting out of the hospital on Monday morning. They can't seem to find a reason for the pain and severe nausea she's experiencing, but they've ran tests and even though there are two small spots on her liver, the organ itself is running at 100%; which is good news for now.

Thanks again and great work on this story, very emotional and written beautifully, as always. Ok, onto today's update. :)

Author's Response: oh that's alright hon - I'm just glad you found it and enjoyed. Yeah - I hated to have such a sad atmosphere, but I felt it was the best to be able to bring out the true Buffy and Spike - bring them closer together. Hee hee, poor Buffy - she can't resist Spike's charm when it comes to getting her to smile, AND of course now she's addicted to sleeping next to him - hell, I would be too, lol.
I can't tell you how happy I am to hear your mom is coming home hon. It's always a relief and a good sign. I know it can be frustrating when she has pain that tests can't seem to find and it usually leads to more tests sadly. I just hope it's something that will pass for her and she has more 'good' days than bad. Coming home will help her spirits greatly. My own m-i-l always hated having to stay in the hospital, it brings a sick person down mentally. I hope the spots on her liver is nothing more than something benign - a good sign that it's running at 100%. I really to do feel for you and her honey, it's so tough to watch a person go through these things and know there's not much you can do but to be there for them. Which honestly, raising her spirits in that way is often a better medicine than any doctor could prescribe. You're still in my prayers darling and will be until your mom gets through this - hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 01:46 am Title: Conversations

While Buffy was asking Spike THE speach, I'm sitting on the edge of my seat hoping she would get it out already! Loved it! Can't wait to read more!!

Author's Response: Hahahahhaha, of course Buffy was a bit floored by what she heard and as usual did the running thing - well, sort of - to process everything that was said. Glad you liked the chappy and thanks for the review sweety - kisses.

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 01:32 am Title: Conversations

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm loving the build-up. So much has happened, though it really HASN'T been that long of a time. But the time period was perfect. :) Can't wait for more from this! You write the absolute BEST Buffy and Spike. :)

Author's Response: LOL - and I'm super glad you like the build up... it's often times what makes the kill sweeter - although kill may be the wrong choice of word here, lol. You're right, there really hasn't been a ton of time that's passed, in fact, not much at all. That's why what happens in those few, short days is so important - thanks for recognizing that. And of course your review and compliments are turning my cheeks a brilliant shade of red - thank you sooooooo much boo. Squishes you tight.

Reviewer: Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 01:13 am Title: Conversations

Love love love this chapter! and especially the picture! It was exactly how I imagined it to be! I can't wait to read more!!!!!!

Author's Response: YAY - glad you like the pic - I fell in love with it the first time I saw it and was so happy Mel let me use it. Thanks for the fab reivew hon - smoochies.

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