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Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2008 - 02:50 am Title: The English Patient

spike is growing up. Though I'm surprised Buffy doesn't know what fellatio and cunnilinguis is. But it might be because she is drunk.

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2008 - 02:31 am Title: Home Sweet Home

hee, Buffy was evil.

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Date: 09/06/2008 - 02:19 am Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

Hmm, I was wondering why Spike left early the day before. Still wondering. Evil he is.

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2008 - 02:05 am Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

I figured Spike would move her closer to him, but not to his office.

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Date: 09/06/2008 - 01:45 am Title: Who's the Boss

great chap.

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2008 - 01:32 am Title: Beneath Me

I was trying to see how Spike might get Buffy's job in the last chap (since hi-jinks dictate that she does't get the promotion) but once I found out in this chap that it was a London based business that bought out Buffy's company, it made sense. Though I also expected that Buffy would have to shar her apt. with Spike...that's going to happen, huh?
And I liked Buffy thinking about the use of the paper shredder. Ok, not nice, but hee.

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2008 - 01:21 am Title: First Impressions are Everything

this is the first time I'm reading the story. Nice use of Fool for Love. It's pretty funny, esp. Buffy being a tough bird. It is kind of creepy when a guy doesn't understand "no" but except for the beer spill, at least Spike kept his hands to himself.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2008 - 11:41 pm Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

Great virgin Buffy chapter. Liked the way is was a tiny thing and not her reason for being, too. Much more believable that way. Truly enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2008 - 11:13 pm Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 1

Well, that is quite a twist. Started reading this back when it first posted, but appearently I never finished, and then I forgot, and never got around to telling you how amazing your chapter was. Sorry for your personal problems, but I know that the Spuffy community will always be there for you. Deal with your life, and we'll be here when you are.

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2008 - 08:56 pm Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

Well sweetie, I just had a smoke, and I have to say I sure as hell wish my first went that well........you may not think you have a flair for virgin Buffy, but you nailed every girl's dream. So disappoint? Gaaaaaaaa NO. Great writing as usual.
I am hoping things are looking up. You know we all are keeping you in our thoughts and prayers. I hope you and the kiddies get everything and then some. What ever Bozo brain's deal is, he is a jerk. Take care, I send you hugs and warm feelings Debbie

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2008 - 08:55 pm Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

Well sweetie, I just had a smoke, and I have to say I sure as hell wish my first went that well........you may not think you have a flair for virgin Buffy, but you nailed every girl's dream. So disappoint? Gaaaaaaaa NO. Great writing as usual.
I am hoping things are looking up. You know we all are keeping you in our thoughts and prayers. I hope you and the kiddies get everything and then some. What ever Bozo brain's deal is, he is a jerk. Take care, I send you hugs and warm feelings Debbie

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2008 - 08:54 pm Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

Well sweetie, I just had a smoke, and I have to say I sure as hell wish my first went that well........you may not think you have a flair for virgin Buffy, but you nailed every girl's dream. So disappoint? Gaaaaaaaa NO. Great writing as usual.
I am hoping things are looking up. You know we all are keeping you in our thoughts and prayers. I hope you and the kiddies get everything and then some. What ever Bozo brain's deal is, he is a jerk. Take care, I send you hugs and warm feelings Debbie

Reviewer: Braydie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2008 - 07:50 pm Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

I think you write a wonderfully realistic virgin Buffy. Altho' she is going to be sore as hell in the morning... ;)*

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2008 - 06:15 pm Title: When Love and Death Embrace

i'm soooooo glad i finally found my place again! i have to say, i really liked this chapter, but then again, didn't. really didn't want to see Xander's memorial service. i do like the fact that Spike had an Anya moment about mortality. i love how deep you make these characters. i really, truely love this Spike. almost as much as Sotia's I.T. William. can't say Willy. reminds me of Dru and i started cracking up. but i love how you got them to connect deeper and i know i'm a sap, but when Spike bares his soul, it's so awesome. you just want to hug him and kiss him and cuddle. those are the best scenes. now just let him beat up Angel!! "ggrrrr" Spike is still sexy as hell too!! i also liked how they've become sort of dependent on each other. them sleeping together is sweet and you make it very intimate. i also loved the photo booth! lol i could just see those pics in my head. can't wait to get to ch. 24!!! u so rule! i'm gonna buy you a crown and scepter!

Monica

p.s. as i finished reading this chapter, the song "Good Night Sweet Girl" finished on my music list. kind of eerie but awesome with this chapter!

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Date: 09/04/2008 - 02:46 am Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

Dang, now I need a smoke. That was, well, just hot. If this is what happens when your muse isn't working, I can't wait till he opens up.

Reviewer: astrodex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2008 - 12:46 am Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

How perfect was that? Absolutely.

So worth the wait. If that is what your muse does while on hiatus, no wonder I think you're a Spuffy Goddess.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2008 - 07:49 pm Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

What on earth are you on about, woman? This is FANTASTIC! For the most part I love it, sometimes I feel it was kinda awkward but I was thinking it's just your nervousness showing through? I don't know. But you have no reason to be. You're an accomplished writer and I have enjoyed and loved all your fics so far - and I think this fic is one of your best ones yet. I'm a little saddened though - I can feel the ending drawing closer and I hate to part with this fic.

Love the chapter, IBE. It's pretty amazing!

Reviewer: dampersandspoons Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2008 - 01:50 am Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

So...I'm trying to figure out WHY you don't want to write a virgin Buffy again when you clearly handled it with gusto here. All I kept thinking while reading this, and I hope you find this as amusing as I do, was, "And on the 28th chapter...there was sex. And there was much rejoicing."

I'm glad Spike was so tender here, not wanting to make any part of it uncomfortable for her and even brought her off before hand. What a guy! We can't all say that for our first times, can we? That is the beauty of fan fic, and the reason I heart you like a long lost sibling that looks nothing like my family but has the same kind of awesome that we look for in a family member. Thank you for a wonderful, beautiful chapter that made me go squee in my pants, but not literally because that would have been a serious mess to clean up. Well done, yet again!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2008 - 01:30 pm Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

Spike's need to make Buffy's first time as easy and wonderful as possible seemed a gargantuan taks, but this chapter certainly delivered. He was conscience of her every step of the way, never losing himself to lust. It was erotic and romantic for them both. Buffy's virginity added a level of tension that was lovely to read.


Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2008 - 09:24 am Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

You certainly didn't need to worry about this chapter, you did a perfect job of de-virginizing Buffy... lol! Spike was sweet, tender and caring and Buffy was very lucky to have him. :D Excellent update!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2008 - 05:49 am Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

Oh. my. god!!!!!! I'm panting!!! :) That was just frickin' awesome, babe!!! Don't know how you do it, but please keep on writing. Have to go and change my undies now... and maybe find a cigarette somewhere, but I don't smoke, so not sure where I'll get one... and I might even need a cold shower... or a vibrating friend....

Reviewer: Taylormaid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2008 - 04:40 am Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

HOT DAMN!!!! The muse is on hiatus and you still came up with THAT!!! Sweetie, you don't NEED to lure him back, you're doing just fine on your own!!!!

Reviewer: GoldenUsagi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2008 - 12:22 am Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

And they do it! Excellent chapter! Spike was unbelievably sweet and patient, and Buffy was nervous but excited... We all need Spikes for our first time (and the time after that, and the time after that, etc. :) I think you did virgin Buffy just fine!

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2008 - 11:12 pm Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

oh goodness, what can this surprise be? I've got to run (kept getting interrupted when I was trying to read the smut, damn it!) but I shall eagerly be awaiting more!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2008 - 10:58 pm Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

Very hot and sweet! Loved how concerned Spike was for Buffy because it was her first time! Can't wait to read more!

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