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Date: 11/20/2013 - 01:03 am Title: Second

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Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2008 - 10:02 pm Title: Second

Very intriguing story , so well written and beta'd, gonna read chappt3 &4 tonite, but I really like it .

Reviewer: notwhomever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2008 - 10:07 pm Title: Second

boring? not at all, every good mystery has a slow build up and yours was intriguing, bringing me back for the next chapter.
hope your muse is kind and the chapters keep coming

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2008 - 11:16 pm Title: Second

Spike has a good instinct; that's important for his job too. I'll bet it saved his life before.
And maybe this time Buffy's life.
If I guessed right Faith should have been back by now? Maybe she got in trouble too because she found something out.
~ Looking forward to more of this.

Reviewer: missus_grace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2008 - 02:14 am Title: Second

Only 2 chapters? What does your muse want in order to produce more? Chocolate...flowers...wine...I'll do whatever it takes to get more of this wonderful story ASAP.

I am so in love with Det. Pratt. Like Mabel Marsters, I loved the description of his gun and badge in the hospital.

Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 08:16 pm Title: Second

Sorry I din't review chapter one - not boring at all by the way!! I think this is extremely well written - for some reason I found the description of Spike with his badge around his neck v hot!! Tee hee!! intrigued and will eagerly await more! :)

Reviewer: javelina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 04:45 pm Title: Second

This is a great story! (And no, neither chapter is "boring")

Please keep going, I'm totally in suspense already!

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 04:31 pm Title: Second

Mysteriouser and mysteriouser. Good job making everything angsty and kind of scary. Hope he gets her out of there safely and manages to protect her. Nice work : )

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 04:08 pm Title: Second

This is intriguing and a different direction for you. The dialogue between Spike and Gunn is natural and I'm looking forward to this story unfolding.

Reviewer: Feydruss Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 03:43 pm Title: Second

Keep going! You're really making this come alive, and I want to see where it goes next!

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 02:54 pm Title: Second

I want MORE!!!!! do i have to threaten your muse to get it to start talking??? couse i'll do it... LOL I love your fics sooo much and I specially love this one!!! I don't like this whole not being able to write thing.....feedbacks your addiction....your stories are mine!!!

Reviewer: mikim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 01:18 pm Title: Second

hey luv
just to let you know how much i'm starting to enjoy this story!! the mystery is still so thick and the tension is almost palpable! you're going a marvellous job and i'm so looking for the rest of the story as well as the spuffy!! Spike ogling is good too!
anyway, i've been reading your stories for a long time now and i really feel that your writing style has deepenned with this one. The tension is stronger, the pace is so easy to fall into and the plots, well, the plots have always been your strong point (in my view) and they've just gotten even better. So thank you
cheers
mikim

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 10:17 am Title: Second

started by mistake and I am so glad I did. this is a brilliant piece of work so far. please keep going. i really want to read the end

Reviewer: Rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 08:41 am Title: Second

I'm still very much intrigued and I was waiting eagerly for an update , so thank you!
Don't let mean people ruin your fun. Saying the first part was boring obviously comes from someone who just needs to be nasty.
Your writing is superb and enthralling.

I liked the turns of events in this second part. Spike protector of the innocents ,it's lovely.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 07:22 am Title: Second

Reviewer: Chris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 06:52 am Title: Second

Wonderful stuff -I hope your muse stays because i'd hate for you to give up on this one...looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Darkezza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 04:00 am Title: Second

Oh, I am so liking this so far! Carry on soon, please!

Reviewer: Kate Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 02:27 am Title: Second

Fantastic! I particularly loved this last chapter. You've manged to create/find an AU world that fits the "Buffy" characters perfectly. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 01:42 am Title: Second

I don't know how anyone could have said it was boring. You've got a bonafide Grade A mystery developing here!! (And as someone that's tried, they're not easy to write!)

15/16, a puncture wound scar, runaway from CA.....what else is your story, Buffy Summers? I can't wait until you get into her details. Obviously, this won't be an easy match-up, since she's so young and Spike's the honorable sort still.

I'm guessing he called an OC, since Faith is supposed to be busy still, or is she good with favors?

Love the details you've given into Spike's character already. We already know a lot about him just from a few things. Making him more than just a detective really spices it up a notch.

Reviewer: Francine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 01:38 am Title: Second

I don't have any idea where you are taking this story but so far I am beyond intrigued. My only hope is that Buffy doesn't stay 15 for long. As a diehard Spuffy I just can't go there with him an adult and her a child.

Reviewer: Veronica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 01:34 am Title: Second

This story is awesome and I really like how natural it flows. Don't about how often you update. It'll come to you

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 12:52 am Title: Second

I love your writing and really am happy with anything you put to paper... err computer. The muse will do when it does, don't sweat it.

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