Date: 09/05/2012 - 11:49 pm Title: Seven
This story is phenomenal! I think the lack of feedback is in the fact that it leaves you on the edge of your seat.
Date: 01/25/2011 - 02:52 am Title: Seven
Don't worry, Nia, you're just setting the ground work, it's fine, we're all just waiting for the denouement.
Date: 03/17/2009 - 02:53 am Title: Seven
Please don't give up on this story! I think you are doing a great job. Your characterizations are right on track and there is good suspense about who to trust. The only fault I have is that Buffy is so young but it does fit I guess.
Date: 10/13/2008 - 01:10 am Title: Seven
I've been one of those irritating readers who doesn't review, but I'll try to correct that now! I really like this story. It's not pleasant; it's dark, and gritty, and there's an (almost?) insurmountable age difference. But it's great to have some darkness in with all the fluff. I've got to go back and reread to recall the plot details, but there's nothing wrong with having plot, either! I think some people don't have the patience for plot, especially if there's a while between updates.
Hope things get better for you and your muse!
Date: 10/10/2008 - 02:48 am Title: Seven
Don't you dare take it down! I love this story even if there is such a long time between updates.
I know that was a dirty trick to bring lazy lurkers out of the woodwork but it worked.
Date: 10/09/2008 - 05:18 pm Title: Seven
I like this story a lot. Maybe the reason you're not getting much feedback is the wait time in between updates. It makes the story feel like it's moving really slowly, even though it's not. Maybe waiting and putting up a couple of chapters in a row would help?
Date: 10/09/2008 - 06:01 am Title: Seven
I just found the story and I'm enjoying it. I would like to read more and I like the way you've got so many characters in it. It'll be interesting to see where it goes.
Cheers
Date: 10/09/2008 - 05:30 am Title: Seven
I like this story a lot. Sorry I don't comment more often. Keep it coming!
Date: 10/09/2008 - 04:28 am Title: Seven
PLEASE don't take down this story. Your stories are fabulous and I try to read everything you write. You are one of my favorite writers on this site.
Unfortunately, my comments seem to get eatten more often than not. Now that I finally realize what's happening, I have taken to highlighting and copying my reviews and then going to the review page to be sure they posted. If they don't I'll at least be able to paste it back in and keep trying until they post.
Date: 10/08/2008 - 08:00 pm Title: Seven
Don't you dare stop there!!
Your story telling is fantastic!! All I can assume is that lack of reviews is down to the dark nature of the story, although for me personally it's right up my alley!! And with just the right amount of mystery and suspense to go along with it too!!
I've always look forward to your next post, so keep going girl!!!!!
xxx
Date: 10/08/2008 - 06:08 pm Title: Seven
I really hope you won't take this one down; I'm looking forward to new chapters.
I hope too that 2009 will turn out to be a better year. That last two weren't so good.
In this situation Buffy gets attached to Spike now (when she feared he had left her and was searching for him).
At last monitored phones sounds better than looking for a traitor (but it could be both).
Mmm I wonder where Spike will take Buffy to now. Hopefully indeed it will be safe.
And I'm really looking forward to more, not to see this story down. :)
Date: 10/08/2008 - 05:37 pm Title: Seven
I love this story! There's a lot of things unsolved and I would love to read it till the end!
Date: 10/08/2008 - 12:01 pm Title: Seven
Great story! Can't wait for more.
Date: 10/08/2008 - 08:25 am Title: Seven
Sorry your work isn't getting the love. It's not 'bad' - don't be scared of that - but it is unpleasant subject matter and makes grim reading in places. I just read the first 7 chapters in a lump and it seemed to have a long way to go. so much plot! I will be reading this as it / if it updates and there are precious few AU stories I do that for. Of course there is the whole Buffy = 15 thing that will squick a lot of people. It squicks me really even though all he has done so far is bath the girl.
Date: 10/08/2008 - 06:29 am Title: Seven
I think your story is awesome, and no I don't think you should take it down. I finally read up on the last couple chapters I missed, and I think you're doing a great job. The story is progressing at a believable pace. I think I'm going to like the dynamic between the two of them in this fic. Sometimes life gets in the way and you don't have time to post, shit happens. But don't you dare take it down, it's really starting to get good. I'm incredibly curious about who is onto them... Guess I'll find out later. Keep Going!!
Date: 10/08/2008 - 06:16 am Title: Seven
It really Does NOT suck!
You know, I don't think you should worry too much, cuz a lot of people just like fluff stories.....but that doesn't mean for a second that this story sucks. People just have short attention spans these days......
I love the mystery and danger of this fic.
Date: 10/08/2008 - 04:50 am Title: Seven
It isn't horrible and doesn't suck, I love this story! I don't mind it taking a while to get there or anything, an involved story doesn't happen in just a few chapters.
Date: 10/08/2008 - 03:31 am Title: Seven
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 10/08/2008 - 01:24 am Title: Seven
This story rocks so I'm not sure why you are uncertain about its reception. It's one of the ones I look for eagerly. My only complaint is that it isn't updated fast enough. LOL Please please update this story more frequently. I promise to review if you do. Pretty please? :-)
Date: 10/08/2008 - 01:06 am Title: Seven
Since you ask...I'm actually quite intrigued by this story but it isn't a "likeable" story in the sense that it deals with some pretty awful issues. I personally don't care much for stories where Buffy is a streetwalker because it is both unpleasant and doesn't fit in with the TV Buffy's character. That said, as I mentioned before, this is intriguing both character-wise and plot-wise. I'd like to see where you take the story. Just because the story isn't "likable" doesn't mean that it isn't an interesting and worthwhile story. I'd like to see you continue!
Date: 10/08/2008 - 12:30 am Title: Seven
I love that both Spike and Buffy are developing feelings but are doubting them.
And btw, this story does NOT suck. I'm experiencing a similar lack of feedback. I wanted to ask the same question you did! It would be nice to know if something sucks - most people who do bother to leave feedback almost always have positive things to say.
I think many readers want to get to the sex/story climax/whatever right away. There's not a lot of paitence anymore for a slow burn.
Keep writing, love!