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Reviewer: Cate Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2009 - 12:38 pm Title: Eleven

Yay update! I'm glad you are feeling better! And no the story isn't crap, on the contrary it is one of my faves around at the moment, so don't lose faith :)

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Date: 09/12/2009 - 06:40 pm Title: Eleven

I love both stories. :)
Buffy is clever, figuring out whom Spike blames.
Emotional chapter. Enjoyed the read.
And hopefully Faith will be okay (and not working for the enemy).

Reviewer: Tigress Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2009 - 01:14 am Title: Eleven

I just wanted to let you know again that I love this story, and look forward to the updates. I think it's an intriguing storyline with plenty of mystery

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 - 11:26 pm Title: Eleven

You haven't updated for a while and yet this story is so memorable that I can get right back into it!! I absolutely love this story (even though it has me balling like a baby all the time) and I can't wait for the next update. FYI if this is your writing when your unwell then I may have to stay away from your stories when your better cause they are already setting my expectation really high!! :) GET WELL SOON!!!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 - 09:59 pm Title: Eleven

Haven't forgotten this. And it's not crap.
A lot of people don't read all-human stories, so that alone could count for the lesser reads than Origins.
My personal preference is not to see a sexual relationship with this Buffy, and it's only a little bit her age........she's not ready for that, in a healthy way, he could get in a lot of trouble, and her body has so much healing to do. I think this particular relationship could be so complex if if doesn't have sex involved for a while. Does that make sense?

Reviewer: Jewel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 - 03:53 pm Title: Eleven

I really like this story. I love grown up Spike and underaged Buffy though. Looking forward to seeing where you're going with it :o)

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 - 12:24 pm Title: Eleven

Hello. First of all I hope that you feel much better now. And about the story I just have to say that I like it, and I hope for a happy end. Bye.

P.D. Sorry if I made mistakes. I am Spanish and I understand English better than writing.

Reviewer: wendy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 - 11:55 am Title: Eleven

Thanks for the update. I really love this story.

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 - 11:34 am Title: Eleven

Emotionally rich chapter from both POVs and you're taking us down a winding path that is going to take some straightening out: both in their relationship and the criminal mess they are both caught up in.

Glad to hear you are feeling better. Your words have not escaped you.

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 - 11:25 am Title: Eleven

In response to your author's note--I can only speak for myself but yes, the age thing isn't something I ever like in Spuffy fics. But more than that is the unequal power dynamics. Buffy is young, helpless, without resources or power, and a victim of rape (never a good thing) while Spike is much older and in a power position over her. That kind of power relationship is never a particularly healthy component in any relationship. That said, obviously I have interest otherwise I wouldn't be reading this fic. I love your writing and will likely always read whatever you post. Though I absolutely love your Origins series and, now that the past has been "fixed" in that series Buffy's and Spike's relationship is one with healthy and strong ties. But please don't think that means that I don't want to see this fic continue to completion. It remains a strong story
and one I'd like to see finished.

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