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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2009 - 11:30 am Title: Twelve

Poor Spike. At the moment he doesn't know what Buffy wants and because she is so young he thinks it won't function. No wonder he must be heartbroken after he noticed he's already in love with her.
But Buffy isn't unaffected by him either; he just doesn't know it.
Sounds as if the ball is rolling now. Looking eagerly forward to more!
(The only thing I've spotted was the closing tag for italics at the end of the chapter. And because it was the last sentence it didn't do any harm.

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2009 - 10:17 pm Title: Twelve

Hello. I just want to ask you to keep writing and updating this story as soon as you can. i can't give you any ideas because I'm not very creative. I would like just one thing: a happy end. Bye.

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2009 - 09:57 pm Title: Twelve

Very Very okay!! I can't tell what way your going to take this and I love it!!

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