Date: 09/10/2009 - 11:34 am Title: Eleven
Emotionally rich chapter from both POVs and you're taking us down a winding path that is going to take some straightening out: both in their relationship and the criminal mess they are both caught up in.
Glad to hear you are feeling better. Your words have not escaped you.
Date: 09/10/2009 - 11:25 am Title: Eleven
In response to your author's note--I can only speak for myself but yes, the age thing isn't something I ever like in Spuffy fics. But more than that is the unequal power dynamics. Buffy is young, helpless, without resources or power, and a victim of rape (never a good thing) while Spike is much older and in a power position over her. That kind of power relationship is never a particularly healthy component in any relationship. That said, obviously I have interest otherwise I wouldn't be reading this fic. I love your writing and will likely always read whatever you post. Though I absolutely love your Origins series and, now that the past has been "fixed" in that series Buffy's and Spike's relationship is one with healthy and strong ties. But please don't think that means that I don't want to see this fic continue to completion. It remains a strong story
and one I'd like to see finished.
Date: 04/10/2009 - 12:05 am Title: Ten
Oh, an evil place to leave it! But Origins next week, hooray! I was just commenting on c-box that I was sad that it hadn't been updated since Feb. Thanks for sharing your awesome fics! :)
P.S. I'm sad that you killed of Nikki. :(
Date: 04/09/2009 - 06:08 pm Title: Ten
Oh no...
first Spike worried Buffy because he wasn't there and then the news about Nikki. Not a good day.
Even if Nikki as a cop knew about the risks it's still terrible that she is dead.
No wonder Spike feels terrible....
Me, I enjoyed the update :)
Date: 04/09/2009 - 10:26 am Title: Ten
Thank you very much for this update !
Date: 04/08/2009 - 11:38 pm Title: Ten
Oh, no! How horrible for him.....everytime they relax, something newly bad comes up. Poor Will.....
Date: 04/08/2009 - 07:09 pm Title: Ten
just a note on the "chipper" englishism- as far as I know (as being engish), it's a chippie, and this normally only refers to a fish and chip shop.
Great chappie, though, looking forward to more!
Date: 04/08/2009 - 06:46 pm Title: Ten
Niamh, I'm sorry this story is troublesome for you as a writer - but as a reader I've got to say that it's really, really compelling and interesting,and I do SO hope you are able to keep going with it! Both the characters and plot work so well!
Date: 03/24/2009 - 06:26 pm Title: Nine
Neat if you're able to get what you want even if it's late (not the same in my country when it comes to shopping). Simple and cheap to just change your hair color. Will buy the some time.
~ Still here, reading :)
Date: 03/24/2009 - 01:03 pm Title: Nine
Still following and enjoying it very much. I love how you're building their relationships there.
Date: 03/24/2009 - 05:09 am Title: Nine
Weeeee! So happy to see an update from you :o) :o)
I love this story, please stick with it! xx
Date: 03/24/2009 - 02:27 am Title: Nine
LOL, her slip about him being hotter blond is so cute.
Date: 03/23/2009 - 10:12 pm Title: Nine
Thanks for the update. Hope they stay safe for a while - Buffy really needs to heal.
Date: 03/23/2009 - 12:55 am Title: Eight
"Sorry's" accepted, but not necessary! I'm just so very glad to see an update! And no "Thank's" needed for reading this---am glad to! Am enjoying it even! And am definitely still following it, and will continue to do so. You just keep on cranking out the words, and we'll keep on reading 'em and be grateful for you.
~~Kara
Date: 03/16/2009 - 10:53 pm Title: Seven
Please don't give up on this story! I think you are doing a great job. Your characterizations are right on track and there is good suspense about who to trust. The only fault I have is that Buffy is so young but it does fit I guess.
Date: 03/14/2009 - 10:24 pm Title: Eight
There is no blame - there is only love :-) And true appreciation (and a wee leetle bit of coveting) of your gift and talent. Please continue this and Resolutions, and continue to heed your muse. You brighten my grey, wintry, lovelorn world. Thanks ever so.
Date: 03/12/2009 - 09:22 pm Title: Eight
It's good, keep at it!
Date: 03/12/2009 - 07:15 pm Title: Eight
Whew, that was close, with the tail.
Aww, poor Will has so much doubt......At least Niki is smart enough not to chew his head off in front of Buffy.
Date: 03/12/2009 - 07:01 pm Title: Eight
Darn... neat to track them via the cell phones - but annoying too. Because they had to threw it away. I hope that will pay them a way out.
Won't stop reading this story - I enjoy the reed too much to do it :)
Date: 03/12/2009 - 07:53 am Title: Eight
Can't wait for more. Great story!
Date: 03/12/2009 - 07:31 am Title: Eight
Your updates are like gifts. I'm positive that anyone who"s read anything you wrote feels this way . Please don't be so hard on yourself, ok?
Date: 03/12/2009 - 04:11 am Title: Eight
I care! I love this story :o) Hope you manage to update more often. xx
Date: 03/12/2009 - 04:10 am Title: Eight
I care! I love this story :o) Hope you manage to update more often. xx
Date: 03/12/2009 - 12:58 am Title: Eight
I hope it wasn't Gun that sold them out. If he did then maybe it was because he thought he was doing the right thing if he was reporting it to someone higher up in the chain of command?
Looking forward to reading more. I love all of your stories!
Date: 03/12/2009 - 12:52 am Title: Eight
I love this story, and I will read this story whenever you find the time to update it!