I'm not sure what will happen (how William will become what he writes) but I like the start.
(You should fix the chapter though: close the center and the Link tag) < * /center * > and (without the spaces and * ; I hope it shows when I post it.

Author's Response: I'm not sure what you mean. I'm not very good with the coding a lot of these sites use, if you don't mind explaining or can direct me to a website that can do so email me at unbreakably_me at Yahoo. Thanks for your help ~ZLB