[Report This]Date: 05/09/2008 - 04:35 am Title: Chapter 9
Lovely interlude, despite Giles' unfortunate timing.
Elizabeth is just blasting through all types of boundaries ~ her own and William's. Hard to imagine her going back to live within the strictures and mores of the town.
Author's Response: Indeed--she's entered her own world now--lengthening the gap between herself and her family. There might be some rough times ahead...
[Report This]Date: 03/30/2008 - 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 9
Really lovely new chapter. I'm enjoying the development between William and Elizabeth and learning even more about the characters as they get to know one another as well.
I'm curious how those back in the village are reacting to Elizabeth's disappearance. Then again, they are used to these disappearances at this point and I can see them writing it off as well. Even if Jenny and Dawn want to search her out, it's not as if they have more say in it. As Elizabeth thought, there would probably be no one looking for her and if she wants to get back, it would be up to her. Though, it doesn't look as if that's her priority right now.
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, Albie! I'm glad to hear you liked the chapter. You will eventually discover what the townsfolk have been up to. Nice insight into Jenny and Dawn's situation.
[Report This]Date: 03/30/2008 - 05:03 am Title: Chapter 9
Wonderful story. You have a great talent. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you, Francine! I'm so happy you're enjoying the story! More to come soon. : )
[Report This]Date: 03/29/2008 - 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 9
NOOOO WHY DID GILES HAVE TO INTERRUPT!! THEY WERE ABOUT TO KISS, THEY SHOULD HAVE!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. im so glad that spike and her got closer and that theyre bonding, i just wish that they had kissed. i hope that they dont brush it off and get together soon. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX
Author's Response: Don't worry, more kisses on the way. : ) I'll update as soon as I can. Thanks for the review, Sarah!
[Report This]Date: 03/29/2008 - 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 9
AH!!! John Donne is my absolute FAVORITE poet of all time!!!!!!!!!!!!! You have no idea how much I adored this chapter. Every single bit of the literature mentioned is something I hold dear. But most especially John Donne!!!!!!!!! Forgive me my excitement, but I just started squealing uncontrollably the second John Donne was brough up. :) Adoring this fic, I knew it would be excellent the moment I read the summary. Can't wait for another update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Devin! I love Donne's work as well, and I thought he would be an appropriate favorite of William's. I'm so happy you enjoyed the literature discussion!
[Report This]Date: 03/29/2008 - 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 9
Damn , did he have to walk in just then , I like the gradual way William and Elizabeth are getting closer, but that flashback at the beginning was a bit disturbing. Update again soon,
Author's Response: Oh stupid Giles...he won't walk in next time. : ) The flashback in the beginning is a disturbing situation...more details to come. I'm glad you liked the chapter! Thank you so much for the feedback!
[Report This]Date: 03/29/2008 - 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 9
*shudder* Too cold for a swim. But it's more kind of a training for William, huh? But a little challenge can do a lot ;-)
But they go along really well :) It's a bit outside the world though, at the moment at last.
Bad timing for Giles to arrive (but this will cause more UST) ;-)
Rain, huh? Quick thinking but not true *gg*
More soon I hope :)
Author's Response: Definitely too cold! William is a little crazy and Elizabeth's just stubborn. : ) Rain...Indeed, he's such a bad liar...Yep, I had to linger a little on the UST before the ST. lol. More soon--I promise! Thanks for the review, Cordy!
[Report This]Date: 03/29/2008 - 11:44 am Title: Chapter 9
Wow!
I'm astonished! ..and MAD at you for leaving it there and for breaking the most beautiful moment - it had my whole body buzzing.
I just started reading your story today, I can't believe what I'd missed! Now I can't wait for the next chapter to come.
Sincerely, Ann
Author's Response: *hides* I'm sorry for leaving it there--I know it was a bit evil. But I'm so happy to hear that you were moved by that scene. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! More Spuffiness is on the way!
[Report This]Date: 03/29/2008 - 10:08 am Title: Chapter 9
Ha, giles is classic. This is really good. I love William and Buffy's interaction at the pond, very good. Nice!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Puska! Great to hear from you! Lol, oh Giles and his cluelessness...I'm glad you enjoyed their banter : )
[Report This]Date: 03/29/2008 - 07:16 am Title: Chapter 9
Loved watching them get closer and learning more about each other. They could have a good life together.
Too bad Giles came in when he did. We could have seen a lot of Spuffy heat coming to that cozy little cabin.
And Buffy would have had all the proof she needs to know where she belongs.
Please update quicker. It kills me to wait so long for the next chapter.
Author's Response: hehe in time. A cabin in the woods without Spuffy luvin' is just a waste of space. : ) I think a weekly update is all I can do for the time being, but I'm so happy to hear that you're really enjoying the story! I'll get back to it as soon as I can. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 03/29/2008 - 06:14 am Title: Chapter 9
Aww, it's a pity Giles ruined such a beautiful moment. Loved the Spuffy interaction throughout the chapter. Great update! :D
Author's Response: *slaps Giles* haha. I couldn't resiste a "Daddy's home" moment. More uninterrupted Spuffy to come. I'm gald you enjoyed the update! Thanks for the review!
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