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Reviewer: Suzee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2008 - 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 14

I want so, so much to go read the next chapter now but I'm using these little fic reading breaks as a way to not die from all the yard work so I'm going to save it-hard as that's going to be ;). Thanks for updating though (even if 15 is technically what you updated with recently) :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing, Suzee! Yardwork eh? Yuck. hehe. Glad I could help with a little break. : )

Reviewer: Thundercat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2008 - 05:03 am Title: Chapter 14

Oh Yikes! And of course there's no more to read right now..... drat and blast! I loathe the dreaded cliffhanger, but I will try my utmost to be patient until your next update.

The creature reminds me of the Beast from AtS S4. I wouldn't leave the (supposedly) protective circle of salt if I were them. Oh wait, they didn't use salt, they used ashes. Huh. William could be sending Elizabeth running headlong into the critter's clutches but I suppose they've got to do *something*. Can't wait to find out more about this mystery monster.

Author's Response: I'm sorry for the suckiness of that cliffhanger--I'll try to update soon! The Beast parallel was intentional...this creature is quite similar. Actually they did use salt--the "ash" was in reference to the soil or lack thereof. But that's definitely confusing the way it's worded...Thank you so much for all the feedback, Thundercat! You rock!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2008 - 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 14

Loved that the misunderstanding is now out of the way; and that they had some time for themselves, even only limited time. She didn't tell about her dream so we have to wait what it means, huh?
But what a cliffhanger.... hope you can update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, Cordy! The dream will eventually make more sense...soon. : )

Reviewer: gemma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2008 - 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 14

loved it please let there be more am hook please please

Author's Response: Aw thank you so much, Gemma! I'm really excited that you're hooked! I'll update soon. : )

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2008 - 10:47 am Title: Chapter 14

You did a wonderful job with the chilling closing scene. The William/Elizabeth interactions were also great, I'm so glad they found a bit of happiness before this new threat began. Loved the update!

Author's Response: Thanks again for reviewing, Midnightgirl! Glad you enjoyed their peaceful interlude and I'm happy to hear that the last scene was creepy!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2008 - 03:52 am Title: Chapter 14

OMG I CANT BELIEVE THAT SOMETHINGS ATTACKING THEM!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. im so glad that theyre getting closer and that he doesnt care about wat giles thinks. i really hope that spike and buffy are ok and that everything works out well. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX

Author's Response: Thanks Sarah! I'm glad you're still liking the story! Update coming soon! : )

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2008 - 03:19 am Title: Chapter 14

You're horrid and mean for leaving it here!!!!!!!!! I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter. Can't help but wonder when Slayer Elizabeth is going to make an appearance. :) Can't WAIT for it, I should say. Update soon!

Author's Response: *hides* that was kind of a mean place to leave it, but I'll try to update soon. Thank you so much for the review--I'm so happy to hear that you're still enjoying it! As for slayer Elizabeth...my lips are sealed : )

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2008 - 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 14

Loved the beginning of this chapter, glad their together now , but the way you describe the entity and the fear Elizabeth fells and william too , had my spine tingling , and I don't scare easily. Yor really a very ,very good writer, kudos.

Author's Response: Thank you so much Jo! Awesome! I creeped you out--that makes me really happy lol.

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