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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2008 - 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 15

Glad that the barn kept the demon away.
Oh and I see they found a way to kill some time *ggg*
Looking forward to more (like what that thing was that attacked them).

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Cordy! Killing time is always nice. : ) More info on the beastie coming up.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2008 - 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 15

From terrifying fear, to grief and anguish, to love and passion, I think you did a great job of expressing all the different emotions that William and Elizabeth went through in this chapter. The journal entry has me a bit worried though, William's dream was definitely troubling. Wonderful update as always!

Author's Response: Thank you, Midnightgirl! Indeed, things are looking slightly ominous, but it'll basically be okay. Round-aboutly. lol. Really happy you enjoyed the chapter and a pleasure to hear back from you as always!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2008 - 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 15

Loved this chapter Annie, love this story ,update again soon.

Author's Response: Thanks Jo! Love hearing from you! I'm so glad you're still enjoying! : )

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2008 - 04:09 am Title: Chapter 15

Oh my! Is this "difference" she feels... slayer-y? Hehehe. I can't wait for more! Loving every second of this. Seriously, I just ADORE it! And kudos to your writing-- last chapter terrified me, and when William told of Susan's death I must admit I cried... And fanfiction NEVER gets me going like that. I love this story!!!!

Author's Response: Slayer-y? Well...hmm. lol. It means so much to hear that you were moved by that scene. I cried over it too. : ) Thanks so much for all your feedback, Devin! *hugs*

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2008 - 03:46 am Title: Chapter 15

YES!!! IM SO GLAD THAT THEY ADMITTED THEIR FEELINGS AND THEY MADE LOVE!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. im so glad that things are working out well, but i DONT like his journal entry, i dont want him to be a vampire and not want her. i REALLY hope that everything works out well and that they end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX

Author's Response: Thank you, Sarah! Don't worry about badness--there will be some angst and difficulties along the way; but things will pretty much turn out okay in the grand scheme. So happy that you're continuing to enjoy the story!

Reviewer: albie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2008 - 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 15

I hadn't thought about the title of the story until it was mentioned in passing in this chapter. Dream time, stolen time, divorced from reality and all the harshness of it and it's true. Away in that cabin, away from the real, judgmental world or rules and propriety and dealing with things that Elizabeth had thought were only make-believe. This was a beautiful chapter and the way you've evolved the relationship with William and Buffy wonderfully. I look forward to more, even though I worry about these two when they are forced to wake up.

Author's Response: Hi Albie! Thank you for the insight into the title. That is indeed what I intended. Also dreamtime as one word is an aboriginal concept meaning past, present, and future existing in one time and place. Thanks for the lovely review! I'm really happy that you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: Thundercat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2008 - 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 15

Argh! Hopefully *this* time the review will post. Anyway.....

Thank you for revealing William's age in this time! I was very curious.

Lovely, lovely chapter -- despite the terrifying beginning. Seriously, my heart was in my throat the whole time they were being chased by the demon. Very strange that it just vanished.

William's present & future lives collide in his nightmares, as do Elizabeth's in her dreams. I relly appreciate the insight the diary excerpts provide and the clues they offer as to where the story night be going.

Thanks so much for the update. I didn't have to wait long at all for the evil cliffhanger from chapter 14 to be resolved!


Author's Response: Thank you, Thundercat! Yes, the age...I think I mentioned somewhere the year that he was fourteen, but I figured that'd be hard to catch...Yay! Always happy to scare you. : ) Thanks, I'm really glad to hear you've enjoyed William's litle excerpts. Trying to give him a voice in a predominantly Elizabeth story.

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