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Reviewer: Zaira Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2008 - 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 17

Holy f***ing! What a rollercoaster ride this chapter has been. Waking up at night in the cabin - scary! William being back - what a relief! This horrible dream - oh hopefully not too prophetic... He proposed! God he proposed and he did it so adorable so utterly sweet and she said yes without hesitation. Then of course the puritan bastards had to show up to arrest him for murder and rape!? Let's hope Elizabeth gets the chance to rise to the defence! But honestly, great twist! I was so waiting for the evil preacher to show up again.
Pretty, pretty please update soon?

Author's Response: hee hee glad you liked the chappie, Zaira! Thanks so much for reviewing! Yep Nathaniel's back in all his annoying puritanness. But William will definitely have some defenders...An update's on the way--possibly later tonight! : )

Reviewer: Thundercat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2008 - 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 17

Holy hell.... What a powerhouse chapter! Brava!

Where do I start with my thoughts and praise on this? *Loved* the references in Giles' books that helped Elizabeth decode Susan's cryptic message. It also reminded me that this entire story started in quite a different time and place (S6 Spike returning from Africa) and brought the two threads back together again.

William's opening diary entry and his heartfelt words of eternity during his proposal, which tie into Susan's "He'll remember for you" comment in Elizabeth's earlier dream. Wonderful.

The *dreams*! The terrifying glimpse of William the Bloody and Drusilla with commentary by future!Giles. The sick feeling of foreboding that preceded the entrance of the Wethersfield contingent. Oh Elizabeth! Yes, the sex was brilliant (and it always will be - lucky you!), but never let it blind you or allow you to fog out on those gut feelings of doom. I honestly can't blame her, she's new to the "seer" business and the sex *would* be quite distracting, but I just ached for them as it all fell apart when the thugs from Wethersfield broke in.

And finally, those Wethersfield folk! Couldya have made their re-entry into the story any more dramatic? I think not, and I both curse and praise your inventiveness. Hearing 'ole Uncle Nate telling her "not to fear".... yeah, good luck with that, Lizzy.

You'd better post again soon or I'll..... I'll..... Dammit! Don't leave us hanging like this!

Author's Response: Thank you for such a well thought-out review Thundercat! Always look forward to hearing from you! : ) I'm so happy the pieces are making sense and coming together. And it's so awesome to hear that you're finding the thematic connections with where Spike is at the beginning of the story leading to where he will be at the end. haha William!sex would distract me too...Next chapter's coming soon!

Reviewer: letitia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2008 - 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 17

What is happening with the dreams? Just love this and they make such a twist. I am so touched with the proposal. And in their hearts they are already married. And what a way for them to meet back up. Has her uncle been following her? There had to be a way that they knew their location? Awesome chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, Letitia! Nathaniel's knowledge and secrets will be coming up soon! Glad you liked the chapter! : )

Reviewer: Francine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2008 - 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 17

No, no, no, no!! My heart is already breaking for them. I realize that you are moving towards their future incarnations but I'm going to miss these incarnations terribly. I can't wait unitl you update again. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks, Francine! The Elizabeth/William story is far from over! I'm really happy that you liked the chapter!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2008 - 04:28 am Title: Chapter 17

OMFG WAT THE HELL IS GOING ON!!! FIRST WILLIAM IS GOING TO TURN INTO A VAMP, NOT GIVE A SHIT ABOUT BUFFY AND RAPE AND KILL INNOCENT GIRLS, THEN NATHAN COMES AND CHARGES WILLIAM WITH RAPE AND MURDER!! EVERYTHINGS UNRAVELING!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i cant believe that william is going to be evil and hurt girls and leave buffy. also i cant believe that nathans found them. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE dont have william turn evil and do such horrible things and second dont let nathan do anything to him. i REALLY hope that spike doesnt become a vamp, or if he does that his love for buffy keeps him away from dru. also i REALLY hope that everything works out well and that they end up together and happy(i no u said they will, but im worried about the angts). PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX

Author's Response: Aw it's gonna b okay! lol sort of...William the Bloody was pretty evil back in his glory days, so I think the dream fits with that. Since this is a past-life fic, it won't necessarily be this William that does those things. As always, thanks so much for reviewing, Sarah!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2008 - 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 17

Damn annie, wwhat happened , were they too happy for you? you had to throw in the Puritan morons, Where's giles , he needs to go in there with a pitchfork before they can take William, or have Elizabeth use it on them. Update soon please i love this fic.

Author's Response: ahahaha! Pitchfork! That would be amazing! Damn, I should've used it lol. Yes they were indeed too happy for me. : ) And Joss always peeved me for that very reason. Glad you're still liking it, and thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2008 - 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 17

Homer, huh? I would call it research (even if Elizabeth wasn't that lucky to find a lot). But she really really missed William.
Awe, loved William's proposal. Buffy's dream was scary though... William will become William again to be turned into Spike?
And if that wasn't enough... they are really in trouble now. *bites nails*

Author's Response: hehe Elizabeth's a sly one. Glad you enjoyed the proposal--and you're on the right track there with William. And yep, crazy Puritan times coming up! As always, I really appreciate the review, Cordy! Thank you!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2008 - 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 17

I'm feeling so bad for William and Buffy right now, looks like pain and tragedy are hot on their heels. :( After reading this chapter and re-reading the prologue suddenly everything seems a bit clearer, can't wait to see where you take this next. Great chapter as always!

Author's Response: Thank you MidnightGirl! Some rough times ahead, though it won't all be painful...Yep, the little tidbits in the prologue should all come together by the end of the story...So happy to hear that you enjoyed the chapter! : )

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2008 - 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 17

Oh goodness. I KNEW that would happen this chapter, for some reason!! Grrrr you nasty wicked tricksy (sorry, too much LotR lately) writer, you!!! I'm enjoying this story like none other! The moments of romance and passion are so beautiful and lovely, but the mystery never ends! There's been such an amazing secrecy in this since the beginning chapters, and while the questions of those have been mostly answered, they bring with them more and more. :) AHHHH I love this! It's just been so much fun reading, and it will definitely be one of those fanfictions, once finished, that I'll enjoy many times. :)

Please please please don't abandon this fic ever!!! I don't think I could bear it. :)

Author's Response: haha yay LOTR!! That was my first geeky fandom : ) Seriously though, I can't tell you how much I appreciate your sweet comments! *hugs* It's so reassuring to know that you're really responding to the story. And not to worry, this fic will definitely not be abandoned! The end's in sight : )

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