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Reviewer: dampersandspoons Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2008 - 06:49 am Title: Chapter 21

I knew it! I just knew Nathan was behind that guardian! *clenches fists* Such a heartbreaking chapter and I'm so sad for Elizabeth. What a difficult choice for her to make, I only hope it doesn't come back to torture her more than she's already endured. Lovely ending with the blood, however bitter sweet it may have been. It was a nice nod to who they are and the bond they share. Still enjoying the hell out of this! And now I have to sleep before I pass out. It is well past my bed time! Look what you did to me, haha!

Author's Response: haha yep--evil Reverend all along! I'm glad you enjoyed the bonding scene. Also flattered to hear that you lost some sleep lol. Thank you so much for reviewing! It really is a pleasure to hear from you : )

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2008 - 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 21

No prob, that was nothing. It was Edgehead that did the work. :) And a good one.
OH! Didn't expect that (Nathan and Giles = brothers).
*sigh* It sounds like a good plan and I'm glad William and Giles got away. But I fear thinks won't be that easy for Elizabeth. Especially when the others get to know that she is pregnant.
More soon I hope.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, Cordy! Glad you were surprised by the brothers bit. Elizabeth is in for some more trying times unfortunately. I'll update sooner next time : )

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2008 - 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 21

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW COULD GILES TELL HER TO KEEP THE PREGNANCY FROM WILLIAM!! HE BETTER NOT BE TURNED AND NOT COME BACK FOR HER! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i CANT believe that giles made her stay and they BETTER come back for her. i really hope that william and buffy end up together and that he comes back for her and they can be a happy family. also i hope that nothing happens to william and that hes not turned and that nothing happens to buffy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, im DYING like aways to read wat happens next. THANX

Author's Response: Lol I like your emphatic response! Giles defintely has some of his own issues going on, which will come out a bit later. As far as your hopes...I can neither confirm nor deny : ) I'm so happy you're still enjoying, and thank you muchly for the review!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2008 - 11:00 am Title: Chapter 21

Wow! I meant to just start reading this fic earlier tonight, no, last night, and I couldn't stop. It's now 3:49 a.m. and I'm just praying the kids will sleep in!! lol

This fic is AWESOME!!! I love it. I love the slayer dreams, the characters, the vivid descriptions and the story line.

When Elizabeth first reacted to her uncle at the beginning of the story, I wondered why you'd named him Nathaniel instead of Ethan, but you've made that one of his aliases. You must have hit his creapiness on the head, because Ethan always gave me the wiggings. :)

Well, must go to sleep now! Looking forward to your next update.

Author's Response: Aw thank you so much!! I'm flattered that you lost the time, though hopefully the kiddies let you sleep : ) I'm so glad to hear that you're enjoying the story! Yep, Ethan became Nathan because I didn't want him to be completely obviously evil from the beginning, though I guess he was anyway lol. I'm happy he creeped you out. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2008 - 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 21

I would never have guessed the reverend would turn out to be Giles brother , you smacked me in the face with that revelation, but I don't think leaving her there was a good idea, especially pregnant, those Puritans could be pretty harsh. OHH hurry with the next chapter and reunite them soon please , i can' stand the anticipation.

Author's Response: Thanks Jo! I'm happy you were surprised!! Leaving her was definitely not the best idea, but Giles has motives that he's not sharing. hehe ok I'm hurrying! : )

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2008 - 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 21

Ohhhh my goodness what is happening in this tale? You're an amazing storyteller, one that would make Andrew proud. Although I wanna freaking KNOW what's happening next, I hope not an ounce of this suspense is sacrificed for a quicker conclusion. Which means I'll be waiting. Patiently. If it KILLS me. Update soon! Or... not. Either way I'll be thrilled when I get to read Chapter 22. :)

Author's Response: lol thank you for the Andrew comment! He's my fav after our blonde duo, so it's good to know that he would approve : ) Don't worry, the conclusion won't be simple or quick. Several chaps and an epilogue still to go. Hopefully the next update will be much quicker, but my silly beta insists on having a life, which is lame hehe. So happy you're still enjoying, and thank you so much for the kind review!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2008 - 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 21

From the Giles/Ethan confronation to the tearful goodbye between Elizabeth and William, the drama that played out in this chapter was awesome. I'm happy that William got away, yet my heart is breaking that Elizabeth got left behind... those two kids are the definition of star-crossed lovers. Can't wait to find out if William returns for Buffy. Wonderful update!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, MidnightGirl! I'm really glad you liked the chapter! Well, William defintely isn't gone forever, but he is out of trouble for awhile : )

Reviewer: Edgehead Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2008 - 10:54 am Title: Chapter 21

Wonderful....!
I hope that Spike and Giles come back soon...and that Ethan don't touch her and the Baby...!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, Edgehead! There will be some trying times ahead, but it'll all work out. : )

Reviewer: Veronica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2008 - 09:46 am Title: Chapter 21

fantastic update!!! wow nathaniel and giles are brothers?! now there's a twist. this is one of the few stories i have kept up with, and you never disappoint. i love the way you write and as always, anxious for more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the sweet review, Veronica!! I'm happy you enjoyed the twist, and it means a lot to know you've been keeping up with the story : )

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2008 - 07:58 am Title: Chapter 21

Goodness! I had no idea I had missed so many chapters. Work installed a net nanny on our computers, which blocked me from SR. After 5 whole weeks of agonizing torture, they removed the darned thing...so, Im back!

Oh, poor Buffy! Too be preggers and have to willingly let William go to save all of their lives. Poor thing! I cannot imagine what those horrid townfolk are going to do to her when they find out.

And you completely threw me for a loop with the Rupert/Nathaniel sibling thing! Wowzer! I knew there was something hinky, but I had no clue!

Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Hi Serenity! I'm so happy to hear from you again! No SR?! How did you survive? hehe. Buffy's situation does suck pretty bad at the moment...Glad I was able to surprise you there! I didn't know if it would be obvious or not. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: NeomeBuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2008 - 04:45 am Title: Chapter 21

this was absolutely heartwrenching. how painful and poignant. this was very well written and it opened up a whole world of possibilities for what could happen next.

Author's Response: Thank you, NeomeBuffy! I'm so happy to hear that the chapter was able to pull some heartstrings.

Reviewer: Thundercat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2008 - 01:11 am Title: Chapter 21

Heartbreaking!

So nice to see the new chapter, and of course it was Giles to the rescue!

Elizabeth played her role in the escape plan admirably ~ for a moment I feared she'd lose herself in William's embrace and allow them to be re-captured (as has happened in *so many* other tales!). I'm pleased that she agreed to Giles' plan without much argument.

I also love the blood bond they formed and of course, revisiting the symbolism of William's words regarding blood and their clasped hands ~ lovely.

I am worried about Elizabeth now. Will she wed Riley as a cover for her pregnancy or will she lay herself on the line and simply hope that Giles and William return in time to save?

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Thundercat! Yep--reliable Giles to the rescue! Elizabeth was indeed willing to give up her present happiness for WIlliam's sake and didn't lose her courage in follwing through...I'm happy you enjoyed their bond and the symbolism behind it--that was actually one of Spike's visions in the prologue, though not sure if anyone remembers that far back....Elizabeth is defintely in a tough situation now--she really is forced to be at the mercy of others.

Reviewer: Thundercat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2008 - 01:09 am Title: Chapter 21

Heartbreaking!

So nice to see the new chapter, and of course it was Giles to the rescue!

Elizabeth played her role in the escape plan admirably ~ for a moment I feared she'd lose herself in William's embrace and allow them to be re-captured (as has happened in *so many* other tales!). I'm pleased that she agreed to Giles' plan without much argument.

I also love the blood bond they formed and of course, revisiting the symbolism of William's words regarding blood and their clasped hands ~ lovely.

I am worried about Elizabeth now. Will she wed Riley as a cover for her pregnancy or will she lay herself on the line and simply hope that Giles and William return in time to save?

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2008 - 12:33 am Title: Chapter 21

No....she can't stay there. Ethan will force her to marry to protect his family's honor.
Elizabeth should run away to Giles cabin.

p.s.
The banner is beautiful!

Author's Response: Yep, staying was probably a bad idea...running away is a good suggestion : ) Thank you so much for the review, Shadowsbabe; and thanks--Mel is quite talented with the art!

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