So somebody sent a warning to William. If he won't hurry he'll be too late anyway. It looks bad for Buffy.
Fred is a bit of help, that's right. Especially for the baby. Being in that prison is bad for it.
Hopefully things will get better; and good luck for you.

Author's Response: Very true--William needs to get his butt over there! : ) Fred will definitely be a big help. Thanks so much for the review and for the luck!

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Date: 07/14/2008 - 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 23

AWW HOW SWEET, IM SO GLAD THAT FRED HELPED HER!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i CANT believe that william hasnt come to get her yet and i hope that it happens soon. also i hope that william and her and the baby are able to live together and are happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX

Author's Response: Aw thanks Sarah! I'm happy you like Fred. William will be back soon : )

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked

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Date: 07/14/2008 - 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 23

Hmm... Fred is really an interesting character, her attitude and manner of speech make me very curious to learn more about her. I'm extremely glad she showed up. Good update!

Author's Response: Fred has a different background--you'll learn more about her next chapter. I'm glad you're curious! Thanks so much for reviewing! : )

Reviewer: Edgehead Anonymous Liked

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Date: 07/14/2008 - 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 23

Damn...where is he?...He can't leave her all alone in this terrible town...!!!!!
I hope you fix this soon...I can't stand this any longer!

Author's Response: He's detained, but he'll be back soon--I promise! Thanks for the review, Edgehead! : )

Reviewer: Francine Anonymous Liked

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Date: 07/14/2008 - 03:32 am Title: Chapter 23

Wow, I really hate Tara. Love Fred though and curious as to what is holding up William and Giles. Quite shocked with what Aunt Jenny told about Buffy's dad. Poor Buffy, things just keep getting piled on her.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, Francine! Some info on the William/Giles situation is coming up. Thanks for mentioning the Jenny conversation--that was defintely quite a turning point for Elizabeth.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked

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Date: 07/14/2008 - 12:21 am Title: Chapter 23

Poor Buffy. There's some hope, though, right? I will be easier for William to help her escape from a house than from a jail. But that could also put Winnifred in a very dangerous position. Keep Fred safe, please!

It sounds like William has to listen to the beggar woman instead of Giles. I hope he gets there soon! He will probably need Giles' help, though; escaping with a heavily pregnant Buffy will not be easy or quick!

Thanks for the update. Hope you can get in one more update before apartment hunting. If not, good luck with finding something nice!

Author's Response: Buffy's defintely in a crappy situation--but there's always hope! Don't worry, I'll protect Fred : ) Thanks so much for the review and for the good luck! It's much appreciated!

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Date: 07/13/2008 - 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 23

Good luck with apartment hunting! May I ask what city you're moving to?

Yay, Fred makes an appearance! So glad that Elizabeth will get a respite from the jail cell. Will they post a guard on the Burkle house or how will they ensure she doesn't escape?

And William, what are you doing out strolling the banks of the Thames with your mates? Get your butt back on a ship and across the pond ASAP! Glad that Elizabeth is pissed at Giles ~ what has *he* been up to in London and has he forgotten all about the plan to return for Elizabeth?

Author's Response: Thanks for the good luck, Thundercat! I'm moving to Los Angeles, which will be a big change for an east coast girl. : ) Basically, Fred is going to be completely responsible for Elizabeth--so if she were to escape, the Burkle family would face the consequences...After reading your comment about William's stroll (lol) I realized that the situation sounded more callous than it actually is. William is working on the Thames--so I went back and threw that in there. : ) Thanks for the review!

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