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Reviewer: Diebirchen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2015 - 12:23 am Title: Chapter 24

Plato -- :-)

 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2008 - 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 24

Wow- I just started reading this yesterday and I couldn't wait to get through all 24 chapters! The story is so original; I'm just loving the plot thus far. Also, I wanted to give you credit for how well-written the story is. Your grammar and spelling are superb, the editing is crisp, and your dialogue blends seamlessly into the text. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so happy that you're enjoying the plot and that you were able to get through it so quickly! And thank you for the comment about the editing--I've tried to be a stickler about grammar and such. Really appreciate the review! : )

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2008 - 07:02 am Title: Chapter 24

Fabulously intense chapter! I'm so going to reread that to try to make sense of the... intensity! Haha. :) I say it again, this fic is fabulous. Thank you EVER so much for not naming the child William, by the way-- it's a cliche in any Spuffy pregnancy stories to name the son after Spike, especially if he's absent during the pregnancy/birth. Bleh. Sweet sometimes, nauseating at others. Much love, Annie! You truly deserve the best new author nom. :) After this one you have to get more of your fabulously (there's that word again!) imaginative stories out! I'd love to read more of your writing. So.. update soon!

Author's Response: Ha it was a bit heavy on the intensity there. My next fic wil be something modern and comedic!...maybe. lolo you're welcome on the "William"--that name is just overused in general...*see X-Files. Thank you so much for the kind words, Devin! And I appreciate the usage of "fabulously" .

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2008 - 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 24

Too bad William wasn't there for the birth. Hoping he gets to her soon.

Author's Response: Reunion is coming up, txjmfan! Thanks so much for reviewing! : )

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2008 - 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 24

Oh that's bad. Didn't expect that from Giles now. He knows very well that Elizabeth is pregnant and yet he refuses to help. What a coward. Even if he meant well it smells like betrayal/treason.
I hope the seers are wrong, underestimating the will of William and Elizabeth to be together. Seems as if they will at some point but without the baby?
*phew* I feared Elizabeth would be dying during the birth. Relieved to know she did make it.
But it means that the trial will start now.....
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Giles is defintely acting selfishly in his decision to "protect" William. I meant it as sort of a juxtaposition to his betrayal in LMPTM...The trial is indeed imminent. Thank you so much for the review, Cordy! : )

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2008 - 07:43 am Title: Chapter 24

Amazing story, I can't wait for your next update.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Nicka!! I'm glad you're enjoying it! : )

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2008 - 12:15 am Title: Chapter 24

I knew it ,that friggin Giles, how evil to do that to them, the all powerful coven said so,so of course it's so. I hope they both spit in his face, i don't care what his reasons were. I hope you know i'm gonna be angry now for at least a few hours, spare me further pain and update ( with a reunion ? mebbe? ) soon.

Author's Response: Definitely a crappy decision on Giles's part. It will indeed get handed to him. Haha glad I could inspire some anger! Thank you for the review, JO! Reunion coming up!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2008 - 12:02 am Title: Chapter 24

OMFG I CANT BELIEVE THAT SHE GAVE BIRTH AND I REALLY HOPE THAT WILLIAMS COMING FOR HER!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. im so glad that he finally found out the truth and that she made it through the birth. i feel so bad that buffy had to give birth without william and her better come soon. i really hope that he comes to get her soon and that everything works out well and they end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX

Author's Response: William is coming soon! I'm glad that you're still enjoying the story, Sarah! Thank you so much for the review! : )

Reviewer: dampersandspoons Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2008 - 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 24

Ok...so now I'm freaking bawling. This chapter was gorgeous and yes, it was filled with so much heart ache and hope and desperation, but it was so wonderfully written that I'm in awe and crying like an idiot. Oh, you HAVE to update soon. I'm just in love with this! Bravo, bravo!!

Author's Response: Thank you so very much, dampersandspoons! I'm so happy that you were moved by the chapter! Your kind words inspire the muse : )

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2008 - 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 24

William's journal entry was very insightful, darn that Giles and his so-called good intentions. I'm glad William sees things clearly now.
Wow! Elizabeth's labor was definitely harrowing, a real nailbiter to the end, thank goodness Elijah made it. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you, MidnightGirl! Giles is defintely obtuse in his good intentions. Glad you enjoyed the chapter!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2008 - 07:25 am Title: Chapter 24

Poor Buffy - that was a hard labour! And no William! He has to get there soon. I hope they can hide the fact that the baby has been born for a few days. Give her some time to recover before anything happens. And the baby needs her, not a wet-nurse.

More soon, please!!

Author's Response: Buffy certainly had it rough--but you know, makes for better drama. : ) William's on his way! Thanks for the review, IT!

Reviewer: Thundercat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2008 - 04:26 am Title: Chapter 24

Oh! That was killer. What a chapter! Thankfully ending with a live birth, but now I'm scared of how quickly Elizabeth will be forced to meet her fate.

I'm unsure if the visions in her dreams mean that William is enroute or that he somehow is still in England, unable to find passage. And the flashes of Spike in Elizabeth's visions are just heartbreaking.

Moving to L.A. ~ I wish I had the balls (and the bucks) to do that. Safe travels and I'll wait as patiently as possible for the next update.

Author's Response: Thanks, Thundercat! Glad you liked the chap! As far as William being en route...that's explained in the next update...haha maybe I have the balls (or it could also be reckless stupidity) but the bucks, hmm not so much lol. Always glad to hear from you!

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