Reviews For A Loss Of Pride
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Reviewer: SinisterChic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2008 - 01:34 am Title: Consequences

Just want to say that I am enjoying the positive role you have placed Angel in. I enjoy the occasional Angel bashing like any other Spuffy fan but it gets old after so many. Love how Angel cares and wants to take care of Spike.

Author's Response: One of the main reasons I chose this challenge was that I had to write Angel. I made him how I think he should be!! LOL!!! I just figured after all they've been through he had to care about Spike! :)

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 05:49 pm Title: Consequences

Hi - I've just started reading this and have just gulped down the first chapters so far. This is really wonderful, but also horribly suspenseful. I will just have to keep on reading : )

Author's Response: Hi Heidi! Welcome aboard! thanks for giving the fic a go. And saying wonderful in a review is always going to make me happy!! lol

Reviewer: DawnofMe Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 11:13 pm Title: Consequences


""He turned to go but was stopped as a strong hand grasped his arm.""
I liked this line and the fact that later you write that he still had a hold on the man. Shows the emotions that Angel was feeling with out telling us.

Very good.

Author's Response: thanks for picking that out - means a lot when you do :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2008 - 01:39 pm Title: Consequences

I think Angel is wrong; Buffy would rather take the opportunity to say goodbye to Spike instead not seeing him again at all.
Oh my, think of how Angel must feel to know he has hurt Spike more, getting him paralyzed? Spike won't like to be in this state, trying to kill himself even more I fear.

Author's Response: angel isn't thinking straight about anything let alone about what to do with Buffy!! The fool!! :) but he's trying his best. thanks for taking the time to review :)

Reviewer: Francine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 04:42 pm Title: Consequences

:sob: This story is really pulling me in. Great chapter.

Author's Response: hi Francine, thanks for letting me know, there will be more tears to come....Really appreciate the review!! :)

Reviewer: Michelle D. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 04:17 pm Title: Consequences

I knew that wheelchair in the banner was not a good sign! ;) That house looks like a nice place to recuperate, though. I like the insight into Angel. Would he have cherished his humanity? I think Angel is lying to himself…

Great chapter as always! I’m sorry for not reviewing much – I’ve been exceptionally lazy this week.


Author's Response: Hi Michelle D, just glad you're still on board!! At least the chair is empty tee hee. Dawnofme did a great job with the banner and the one for Parallel Lives (CL's sequel) is just brilliant!! As for being lazy - you're forgiven!! I was peed off at work and so sneakily managed to write a chapter of PL while i was there!! LOL!!

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 03:03 pm Title: Consequences

OH MY GOD!!! How could you leave it here??? Mabel you seriously have to update soon! What will happen to Spike? If he's confined to a wheelchair again he won't stop trying ot take his own life!

Please update soon,
xxx

PS. Loving this so much I just now remembered the 'no smut thing' ;-)

Author's Response: *chuckle* "remembered the no smut thing!! Thank you so much ofr your support - really appreciate it and there will be smoochies i promise!! As for the quick update for wish is my command..... *hugs* xx

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