Reviews For A Loss Of Pride
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Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 06:36 pm Title: I've Never Been Average

Your hair grows straight up - that was funny, that. Good rapport between them now, but still with little hints of animosity.

Author's Response: Am I sad if I say that that line made me smile when I wrote it? Tee hee!

Reviewer: DawnofMe Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 12:14 am Title: I've Never Been Average

I really enjoyed this whole chapter with Angel and Spike talking. Made me smile, but below, I've highlighted some of what I liked. Great chapter!

“Well…I’m not anymore, am I? I’m just…”

“Freaking irritating, that’s what you are,” interrupted Angel, “You’re family. Just because some prophecy made you human, it doesn’t mean that you’re not still my grandchilde. Although I’ve never really forgiven Dru for siring you in the first place, little dork that you were.”

“I was not,” protested Spike.

“Oh no? ‘Course you weren’t, with your little books of poetry and your fluffy hair…”

“Your sodding hair grows straight up!”

Author's Response: glad you liked it - the reason I picked this challenge was to make me write Angel as I didn't know whether I'd capture him as well as Spike! :)

Reviewer: serinah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2008 - 07:35 am Title: I've Never Been Average

oi yeah!! superhuman spike! i like it! thanks for updating again.I wonder if B goes peeking at her blond love in a chair?

Author's Response: Hi Serinah! Can't have him just average can we? tee hee!! You may be reading my mind about Buffy? lol! Will post as soon as it's back from my hardworking beta! :)

Reviewer: Michelle D. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2008 - 12:46 am Title: I've Never Been Average

Interesting chapter! I forgot about his eyesight before he became a vampire. Ugh, it would be a bummer to have to go back to glasses. There’s some stuff to be positive about – faster healing (possibly) and good vision.

I love the detail you are putting into his recovery process.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! and thanks for letting me know!! :) more soon!

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2008 - 09:41 pm Title: I've Never Been Average

Thank you for that glimmer of hope, hun, much appreciated :-D

I can't wait to see how his next meeting with Buffy will go! (though I still believe Angel could tell him she didn't know!!! :-P)

*hugs*

Author's Response: what can i say? Angel's a chicken!! LOL!!! plus i can't do what i'm going to do if he did tell!! LOL! xx

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2008 - 09:18 pm Title: I've Never Been Average

Does he know Buffy is there? I loved it though and the guy bonding was cute. More please soon.

Author's Response: He doesn't know she's there ...yet!! thanks for reviewing and will be as quick as I can!! :) I work my poor beta sooo hard!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2008 - 09:09 pm Title: I've Never Been Average

I like the mission impossible *gg* Not sure what you meant but glad to help.
So Spike is healing quicker then normal (when it comes to therapy); one good thing at last.
If you hadn't mentioned it I wouldn't have stumbled upon 'the glasses'. How much human Spike is now, he isn't the same one he was before when being human.
Human Spike ... that's a thought.
Looking forward to what Buffy will say to this development.

Author's Response: meant that getting spike to listen was like a 'mission impossible' mission!! LOL! Well i totally got the idea that the fact that he wasn't wearing glasses to be a sign of not being back to William from you!! *bows gracefully in your direction* Thanks!!

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