Reviews For A Loss Of Pride
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Reviewer: Kandrin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 12:06 pm Title: Captive Audience

Oh great - now he's some kind of drug addict! Great way to move the healing process along and we finally know who the mystery stalker is. You are worse than evil, woman! But I still love you. *hugs* (And I have two more chapters to read!)

Author's Response: Funny how the word 'evil' keeps cropping up!!! Tee hee!!! just figured things were getting a little bland!!! lol!! thanks so much for letting me know! :)

Reviewer: serinah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2008 - 08:04 pm Title: Captive Audience

oh, god!!! whatta hell are you doing to my spike!!! that's terrible! I can't express my feelings of fear, disgust and excitement. I hope you will not be breaking him totally. Please let him off the drug soon! I really do hope that whoever buys him will not give it to him just to torture hi. Though the demony fighting ring WITH the drug use and abuse is more likely. I hate the bounty guy.

Author's Response: Glad that you hate Nemol! he's pretty vile!! hopefully can speed up with the updates this week as work is a little less frenetic! :) thanks for reviewing!!! :)

Reviewer: puska Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2008 - 07:10 am Title: Captive Audience

aww man! I just knew something had to go wrong. I've read enough of you're work now to know that once things are good, they're gonna get bad again.
Glad Spike is walking again, but not so much for the other stuff. Buffy and Angel will find him though.
Great stuff as always! Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Hey Puska!! glad you've got me sussed out!! It's sooo much more fun writing the bad!! lol!!!! thanks for letting me know! *hugs*

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2008 - 12:17 am Title: Captive Audience

ooh I can't look, hope Buffy gets to him before much longer, he's suffered enough

Author's Response: Hi there scaryscouse! I won't play too rough with him I promise!! lol!! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2008 - 05:34 pm Title: Captive Audience

The attacker wore gloves? Then they wouldn't have found fingerprints anyway.
limp body of Spike over his shoulder with very little effort No Xander then...
A bounty hunter? But who was the client that ordered him (charge him with the task to capture Spike). Ah, hadn't guessed this client. In a way Spike was lucky that he'll be healed soon. But that's no comfort, right now it looks very bad for him.

Author's Response: Hi Cordyk things are looking bad but with Buffy and the gang out to find him surely things will be okay....? :)

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2008 - 05:21 pm Title: Captive Audience

OH MY GOD, YOU JUST WENT TO A NEW LEVEL OF EVIL!!!

This... this is terrible, woman!!! How will he manage to escape? Oh, I know: HE PROBABLY WON'T!!! I hope Buffy and Angel get to him before he is sold! GUH, I wanna kick that half demon's ass!!!

No hugs today, I'm using my hands to pull on my hair!

Author's Response: Hey there Sotia! Was looking forward to your review!! LOL!! *bear hug* to trap arms and so stop pulling of said hair!!! :)

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2008 - 04:57 pm Title: Captive Audience

I don't really understand the point of this diversion but I guess it will be explained. I understand that Spike killed the Polgara demons but I don't understand why you are making him addicted to this concoction as well as making him obedient. I am trusting that this will turn out alright without Spike having to suffer more than he already has.

Author's Response: The point of this diversion is probably buried somewhere in my mind!! lol!! Seriously it's all about pride - it's loss and then it being regained. Your trust won't be misplaced I promise! Thanks for reviewing Bridget it's appreciated. :)

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2008 - 04:03 pm Title: Captive Audience

Poor, poor, poor Spike. My heart aches for him. I'm sure that is how Buffy feels too and maybe Angel as well. Just when things were looking good for him. Now he is probably going to become a slave and he knows what is going to be done to him. Also, I'm afraid that he is going to be addicted to those drugs. Which is never good.

I love this story and I'm glad that you took us down another road. We all thought now that life is going to be to good for Spike. I guess not yet. But I have faith that eventually things will be good for Spike.

Author's Response: Hi there Guesty!! I'll give you a capital letter as seems rude otherwise!! Tee hee! Glad youl liked the added drama of the fic - if you've read any of my other stuff you'll know that things going well don't generally last too long! Tee hee!! Your faith won't be misplaced I promise you that! :) Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: maddonna001 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2008 - 03:41 pm Title: Captive Audience

I was afraid it was Dru who captured him but now I am more afraid. This Nemol guy turning him to a slave, that`s something that doesn`t fit Spike and it would totally take away the pride he has left. Poor Spike. Mabel, I love you original plot idea, keep going!

Author's Response: Hi there!! Just wanted to invent someone nasty for a change, all my orig characters so far have been nice!! lol!! Glad you liked the litle twist!! tee hee!! more soon! :) and thanks for talking about PRIDE cos that's a theme of the fic - he lost it - he found it - now he's having it taken away!! :)

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2008 - 03:10 pm Title: Captive Audience

Damn it Mabel , I wished it haf been Dru that took him now. Come on , things were going so well, you can't let this happen to him , to be used and raped and sold into slavery? Please let them find him before it happens and i hate when Spike's enslaved and used like that. DAMN I'm so pissed (not drunk) off over this turn of events . Save him, right now , save him. Uggh !your not gonna I know it ,know you! damn, damn, damn.

I need a drink!

Author's Response: Hi Jo, God I just love your reviews!! Hope you got your drink!!! Can't say more except to say trust me and remember the rating of this fic!! lol!!! *hugs*

Reviewer: CarolM Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2008 - 03:08 pm Title: Captive Audience

This is continuing wonderfully Mabel, the pace is really hotting up.

Author's Response: Hi CarolM!! Glad you're liking it! I'm hoping to have it completed before Union Chapel! :)

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