Reviews For A Loss Of Pride
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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2008 - 05:10 pm Title: More Shocks

Two chapters for me today... :)
I didn't expect that the blood Spike was given has such a nasty effect. Bad bad bad...
Hopefully the coven will get an inkling where Spike is.

Author's Response: couldn't resist the irony of him being addicted to blood!! :)

Reviewer: DawnofMe Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2008 - 04:18 pm Title: More Shocks

Getting caught up with this story. The ending with Angel showing Brad what his is was fun.

Author's Response: Hi there!!! Glad you liked the reveal to Brad - i was a little worried about the f word twice but decided that that was most probably anyone's reaction if they saw that!!! LOL!!

Reviewer: serinah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 09:29 pm Title: More Shocks

i hate s in that condition. i used to love everything to do with power and humiliation but somehow i have ground out of it (thank god). the whole thing is disgusting. you are not going to break him completely, a some authors do, are you? if you do i'm gonna... i honestly don't know what. but right now you are writing terrible things. i hate what is happening to him so much, that it almost made me stop reading and afterwards i didn't quite manage to enjoy the other parts of the story. i understand that you are going to write your story like it goes, not like readers want it to and i respect that. i would never give in to readers pleas o demands or blackmail, so that is not what my review is about. just letting you know how it made me feel.

Author's Response: Don't worry Serinah he won't be messed with too badly and it's not going to go on too long either! just wanted another aspect of loss of pride to add to the story. The next chapter is of a similar vein but then things happen!! So i hope you manage to keep reading even if you skip a few paragraphs! :) Trust me to make all well again *hugs*

Reviewer: Kandrin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 12:35 pm Title: More Shocks

Making Spike kiss that thing's feet and want to drink blood? Ewww! I can't wait til Buffy comes and kicks it's ass and gets our poor Spike out of there! Hope the rescue is coming soon!

Author's Response: I know!! Now that was evil of me!!! Tee hee!! Couldn't resist the irony of having him addicted to blood rather than a drug!! More soon! :)

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 12:25 pm Title: More Shocks

That little glimpse of what is going on with Spike was heartbreaking. I was hoping that he was resisting the blood, however I know that pain can be a terrible thing which can cause a person to do anything to abate it.

I am glad that Brad chastised Moira and Angel. Also his reaction to Angel being a vampire was amusing. Please update soon. Another good chapter but I am ready for Spike to get the upper hand. Please, please, please.

Author's Response: Hi Bridget! Glad you liked how Brad reacted to it all! Will update asap. As i mentioned in another response - the respite will be in chapter or so's time - the next one tells a bit more of what Spike is experiencing!! :)

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 11:59 am Title: More Shocks

OMG Mabel please let him be recued soon , this demon guy and this whole situation squicks me out terribly, i hope the coven locates him soon, I don't know if i could take anymore chapters with the feet kissing. Loved Brads reaction to Angel vamping out .

For my liver's sake GET THE POOR GUY OUT OF THERE.

Author's Response: Glad you liked Brad's reaction! I could just see it so closely in my head when I wrote it - then worried about it a bit! :) For the sake of your liver I shall let you know that the next chapter may be a bit 'squicky' but things will improve after that!! lol!! *hugs*

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 10:53 am Title: More Shocks

Yup, I like Brad too...

Hate what's happening to Spike, tho. I can't believe he is already so hooked on the drug *pouts* What humiliations will he endure before they save him?

I think I'll start pulling on her hair now on!!! Fix this!!!

*hugs*

Author's Response: Just had scary vision of Sotia with no eyelashes or hair!!! Hurries away to type up next chapter for betaing!!! *big hugs* Won't be torturing you or Spike for too long I promise!! :)

Reviewer: Ivana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 08:20 am Title: More Shocks

I love this fic. At first I thought that it want be scary like this and that everything will end happy. Now....you completely changed direction and I love it.
you're really good at describing characters. love spike and his moods and his feelings. and I like how you portrait Angel. most of the writers of Spuffy realm (99%) make Angel bad person, but you did it different. you're creating a new family with Moira, Brad and Laura, hopefully staying after everything and helping.
and the apartment for Spike, OMG! the idea it self and Angel making it!...fabulous!
hope you're muse is with you and you'll continue to write fast...so ...next chapte PLEASE!!!!

Author's Response: Hi Ivana, it's getting reviews like yours that really keeps the old muse going!! I write the 'bad' stuff so much easier and quicker than the 'good'!! Tee hee!! Not sure what that says about me!! I chose the challenge to make me write Angel and they had to be firends in the fic for it to make sense. (in my other fics he's either dead, not mentioned or in one case bad!!! LOL) Will update asap - please keep letting me know!! :)

Reviewer: puska Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 06:27 am Title: More Shocks

Brad's reaction is priceless. They have to find Spike soon!! Nice work!

Author's Response: glad that you liked Brad's reaction! It made me chuckle a bit when I wrote it and then I wasn't sure by time I posted so I'm glad that it read okay! :)

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