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Reviewer: dawnofme Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2008 - 03:20 am Title: Where's The Key?

Yay. He's safe. For now. I wouldn't put it past you to put him through more before the happy ending. : ) I loved the suspense of this chapter.

Author's Response: You know me too well my beloved cyber-sister!! Tee hee!! :)

Reviewer: Kandrin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2008 - 03:40 pm Title: Where's The Key?

Disturbing chapter. (I was right about Brad saving Spike in the nick of time though.) Good on me! :)
Liked the progression of the rescue. I will be interested to see how Spike deals with the issues of his helplessness during the ordeal and especially during this chapter. Spike's pride vs. being forced to submit in front of his loved ones during this chapter is what made it so disturbing to me (almost like a rape scene). Sometimes I think too much....

Author's Response: I like that my words make you think too much!!! *hugs* I feel the same way about Spike being under someone else's control. Will be tough for him mentally.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2008 - 07:29 pm Title: Where's The Key?

*phew* Just in time...
She'd gotten him back and he was healed.
But he's still addicted to this special blood ... I hope it will wear off (?)

Author's Response: Good old Brad!! Tee hee!! I just had to put that last line in!! :)

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2008 - 04:56 pm Title: Where's The Key?

Ok, now I've been catching up, although I have to admit I skipped a couple of chapters that seemed too angsty for my poor heart to handle. *lol* But from now on, I won't miss a single chapter of this story. :) I really loved this last chapter, so happy they got rid of that damn collar. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Yes I thought I'd better warn you of the darker chapters!! So glad you're reading tho! :) The worst is over for our beloved Spike!! :)

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2008 - 11:01 pm Title: Where's The Key?

So Ms. Mabel, you finally decided to get him the heck out of there! The only thing i'm sorry for is you didn't describe in detail what she did to Nemol, but Carol might have gotten squicked reading that , who by the way is doing a fantastic beta job . I really am enjoy this fic though and can't wait to see what you have in store for my poor liver next.

Author's Response: Hi Jo, I'm pretty sure that your liver is safe from here on!! Tee hee!!! You'll get a bit more of an idea of what Buffy did to Nemol in a couple of chapters time!! Getting close to the end now. :)

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2008 - 05:49 pm Title: Where's The Key?

*sighs with relief* Now to get him off the blasted drug and all will be well again!

Thank you so much for this update, I needed it!
*huggles*

Author's Response: hi hun! that's the darkest stuff over and done with so I think your hair and eyelashes will be safe!! *big hugs*

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2008 - 05:42 pm Title: Where's The Key?

I lifted my hands to the sky and shouted thank god for Brad when I read this chapter. It was well done. Now Spike's hard work begins. I am doing the happy dance.

Author's Response: Hi Bridget!! Glad you liked it! And that you thought it was well done! That makes me do the happy dance!! thanks so much for letting me know! :)

Reviewer: serinah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2008 - 04:27 pm Title: Where's The Key?

*She’d gotten him back and he was healed.* Yeah, right, you keep telling yourself that. Spike's a mess. I love how you finished this ch. I hope that now things will get better. Can't wait to read how you'll pull it off.

Author's Response: Thanks for saying you liked the end of the chapter!! I think everybody who read Buffy's thoughts will have gone - yeah, right!! Tee hee!!! We're on the home straight now - not many more chapters to go! :) x

Reviewer: jeanieofoz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2008 - 12:06 pm Title: Where's The Key?

healed, but yet a druggie....i hope they can safely detox him

Author's Response: hi Jeanieofoz! Yep, he's still got a ways to go but at least he's free!! :)

Reviewer: puska Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2008 - 12:04 pm Title: Where's The Key?

aww yay! So glad brad thought of the collar, we'd have a headless spike if he didn't. Glad they've resuced him. Awesome!

Author's Response: I'm mean to Spike but I couldn't kill him!!! Tee hee!!! thanks so much for saying awesome *huge grin*!! :)

Reviewer: Avalon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2008 - 10:42 am Title: Where's The Key?

Yay!!! He's saved!!!

Author's Response: Hi Avalon! The gang came through for him!!! :) Thanks for taking the time to review! :)

Reviewer: Ivana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2008 - 07:49 am Title: Where's The Key?

I'm in love with Brad! without him things would be....don't want to think about it! smart guy! and great idea with his character.
can't wait to read next chapters and Spike's struggle to get of the drugs!
love it!

Author's Response: Hi Ivana! I'm so glad that you like Brad - I love creating original characters and so it's great when people like them. Won't keep you too long I promise :)

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