[Report This]Date: 12/17/2008 - 05:43 am Title: Chapter 3
I loved it==I don't care a fig that you telegraphed your punch with the Elvis bit. I'm an older and I've seen Touch of Mink with Rock Hudson, Doris Day too many times not to totally love the conceit. You write the dialouge perf, you have a charming presentation--love the idea of them meeting at a convention--love the whole slightly drunken slayer interaction and love Buffy being all stutter-y. This is proving to be an interesting and clever read. Thanks.
Author's Response: I loved Touch of Mink! And, I just couldn't help myself, had to add the drive thru Elvis. What else could I do with the random Vegas wedding? LoL Thank you so much for the wonderful review!
[Report This]Date: 05/04/2008 - 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh babes - I just GOTTA see where this one ends up - on to the next chapter now
Author's Response: **Snoopy Dance** My Gillypod has graced another one of my stories with her lovely presence. Woohoo! Thanks for the review, glad you likey.
[Report This]Date: 04/21/2008 - 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
Funny how she seems to have forgotten their wedding ;) After all Buffy's wearing the ring now :)
Author's Response: Well, sometimes alcohol has a way of wiping out a perfectly good night if you drink too much. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 04/13/2008 - 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh I wondered about that
Author's Response: Glad that was cleared up for you then! Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 04/10/2008 - 05:52 am Title: Chapter 3
love it soo far hope there more to it coz the wife bit just got it more intresting
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Gemma! Yep, there will be plenty more, no worries.
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2008 - 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 3
Definitely didn't expect that. Wouldn't have guessed it in a million years if I had to. That's a very original twist and I'm enjoying reading this story immensely. I can't wait to find out how it all will play out now that they're face to face again. Fantastic chapter, more please? *bats eyelashes*
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you are enjoying the story, it's a new avenue to me to write a more lighthearted and funny story; usually focus on the angsty stuff. Really pleased to see that the story is taking off so well! **Squee** Thanks again and I plan to update sometime before the weekend if possible!
[Report This]Date: 04/07/2008 - 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 3
I really loved this chapter. It wasn't that predictable. I thought it was great. I can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks, Tammy! I loved writing it! As I typed I could just imagine my readers faces and it was really cool. Glad to hear there are still some of you guys that didn't find the marriage thing predictable. Some figured it out, some didn't....Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 04/07/2008 - 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks Nicki!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 04/07/2008 - 11:35 am Title: Chapter 3
OH, no, they did the drive-thru window wedding with an Elvis presiding, didn't they!!!!
LOL! Funny!
Happily awaiting more!
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~
Author's Response: Yes they did! There is actually a drive thru wedding chapel in Vegas, don't know if Elvis works there or not. I saw the place on TV during a show and couldn't help putting it in my story. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 04/07/2008 - 01:32 am Title: Chapter 3
Love the new development... it's like an old Doris Day/Rock Hudson movie... lol! Can't wait to see how things unfold from here. Great chapter! :D
Author's Response: Hey, thanks! I'm aiming to keep this on the funny/lighter side of the relationship (maybe a bit of angst here and there), which will prove to be difficult for me since I love dragging my characters thru mud first. Glad you like it, hope it will continue to meet your expectations!
[Report This]Date: 04/06/2008 - 07:40 am Title: Chapter 3
OMG! didn't see that coming, oh what a brilliant story lol. It's gonna be ace to keep reading, buffy having to fit in with his life, and vice-versa. Brilliant fic so far . UPDATE Soon!!! :D
Author's Response: Thanks, Xtina! Yep, life should be really interesting for Buffy and Spike. Glad you like the fic, thanks again for the review!
[Report This]Date: 04/06/2008 - 05:34 am Title: Chapter 3
i, for one, love the predictable and funny so please do hurry and update again soon. i can't wait for the drunken sex and marriage part of this story to unfold.
Author's Response: Thanks, Dee! The funny and predictable thing is new to me, I generally write angsty and confusing! LoL! So, I am really pleased to know that you like this story! Thanks so much for the review and the drunken sex, etc parts will unfold as the story does. A little bit here, a little bit there....
[Report This]Date: 04/06/2008 - 02:26 am Title: Chapter 3
Elvis at a drive through window, hee; I guess Elvis wasn't dishing out fries.
Author's Response: Nope, Elvis was dishing out the vows instead! LoL! Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 04/06/2008 - 01:05 am Title: Chapter 3
oooh u evil freakin' witch!!! u didn't tell me u had updated! i loved this chapter! and i KNEW IT! I FREAKIN KNEW IT! when u put in "Elvis" and "drive-thru", i knew they'd gotten hitched! when else do u see Elvis??? he's always the minister! i didn't expect him to find her that fast though. ahhh to be married to Spike! even drunk! ::dreaming:: oooooh can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Aw, Mon! You knew I'd leave an evil cliffhanger and well, be all witchy. I'm so glad you liked the chapter, I had a great time writing it! Thanks for the review!!!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 3
You say predictable, I say that was the last thing I was expecting. I know you said cliffhanger but OMGG - they got married!!!! This is so great and I hope you are feeling heaps better and ARE WRITING MORE.
Author's Response: Well, you know how much I love sticking you guys with an evil cliffhanger! I am feeling much better now, thanks for asking! The next update should be up this weekend!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 3
OMFG! They got married! That's hilarious! And a great way to keep them together! yay you! lol! Cant wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: I couldn't help myself! I mean, who wouldn't want to end up hitched to Spike? Sign me up! Thanks so much for the review, hun! I'm heading back over to the chat box to talk to you in a few!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
I LOVE this story!!!!! It's Awesome!!!!! You nail the characters, especially Buffy and Spike!!!!! I can't believe they got married, and you left the chapter ending there!!!!!! Ahhhh, Can't Wait to see Buffy's reaction!!!!! Your a Wonderful writer, and again Awesome job so far!!!! I Can't Wait for more, so please post more as soon as possible!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for sharing!! :)
Take Care,
Amber :)
Author's Response: Hey Amber, thank you so much for the wonderfully enthusiastic review! I always love to hear what my readers think of my characters, don't want to make them too far off from the original ones, so I am so stoked that you like them. Thank you so much and I hope you stick around for more!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow. That is way to funny. But I really can't wait till you update again soon so I can read what happens next. I am now officially hooked.
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear you are hooked, means I've got a nice new reader who leaves wonderful reviews!!! Thanks so much and I should be updating soon, like this weekend!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
Love it. Saw the marriage thing coming as soon as you mentioned Elvis at the drive thru. Looking forward to reading Buffy's reaction to the news.
Author's Response: I've been working on the next chapter over the weekend, I really want to make Buffy's reaction that of total shock and surprise! I plan on updating this weekend if all goes well, so check back! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
Huh??? OMG!!! LMAO!!!!
I want more Tori, need more, you can't leave it like that, PLEASE!!! I'm hurting, and I'm hungry, and I've run out of smokes and nobody here will go get me some, and you LEAVE IT LIKE THIS???
GAWD!
*takes deep breaths* More please! *bats eyelashes*
Author's Response: Aw, poor Sotia! I could say that I feel bad about leaving the mean, evil cliffhanger, but you know I'd be lying, right? Either way, thank you for the review and I hope you are feeling better. Thanks for the review! **Hugs back**
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
Well you may say it was predictable, but colour me surprised!! I really didn't see it coming - even though she was twisting her little ring (I was wondering if I had missed something from earlier). And yes, It was very funny!!! Absolutely loved the turn of events.
Hope you update soon!! ; ()
Author's Response: Yay! I've been pleased to find out that a lot of readers didn't see that twist coming. I threw the ring thing in as a little hint, but few figured it out. There will be more about the ring in the next update! Thanks for the review!!!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 3
OMG! I guess, I'm slow, cause I so didn't see that coming. I was so glad to see the update; sorry you haven't been well, hope you're better now. Looking forward to more soon!
Author's Response: About half of you guys got it and the other half didn't, no worries! I'm feeling much better now and hope to have an update up for you by the weekend! Thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 3
A-HA - they got married, thus the elvis flashback - hahahaahahahahahha. I don''t care if it's predictable, I like it sweety. - I love the plot ANd I like how SPike just hunted her down. Oh boy a re the sparks gonna fly in the next chapter, woo hoo. You simply must update soon - I can't take the tension - great clifie though. Hugs you tight and bravo on this chapter, *sings* loved it!!!
Author's Response: I've got the next chappie planned out mentally, just having a difficult time putting it into words. Want to make sure I get Buffy's reaction just right! Thank you for the review, I am so thrilled that you like the story!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
i didn't see that coming-good story-enjoying it
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, glad you like it so far!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
*jaw drops* OMG... *LOL* Poor Buffy! Never in a million years did I see that coming. Oooh... can't wait to see what's next. Update soon, sweets! Very, very nice so far. :D
Author's Response: Wow! It's cool that some of my readers truly were surprised by the drunken marriage. Really cool! Think Ross-Rachel's nuptials on Friends...that's what I imagine the Spuffy one to be like. Thanks for the review!
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