lol I loved your response to the Angels soul comment, Artisitic lisc. No fan fic author could right a story without it! I loved the bit witj Natalia telling Buffy that the angel would be mean 'cause he lost his shoes!! That had me spitting my drink out laughing! Too precious! Thanks for the updates, hope there is more soon. You still have my attention very much caught up in the story.

I takes a moment of perfect happiness for Angel to lose his sole. Not just sexual release. He lost his sole with Buffy cause they were all in love and sharing a special thing together, not just cause he was getting his rocks off. Other than that one big glaring error this is an interesting take. I have wanted to see a story where Buffy stayed, here you are writing one. Can't wait to read on, and try to ignore the whole angel/soul thing. I love ur version of purgatory, with the Beetljuice reference thrown in!

Author's Response: He does have a moment of bliss though...in the form of revenge. He's broken-hearted about Buffy and Spike, takes solace in the closest warm body, gets his rocks off (teehee on that description), and in that act loses his soul. I know its a stretch, but I'm taking it.

Loved them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Two execellent chapters.