Reviews For SunnyHell
Reviewer: Blazing Fire Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 10:52 pm Title: chapter 1: the beginning
Date: 03/13/2008 - 10:52 pm Title: chapter 1: the beginning
Please separate your paragraphs more. You need to create a new paragraph when a new person speaks.
Author's Response: thanks I am working on it