Date: 03/30/2008 - 08:01 pm Title: Chapter Four
Oh, wow. How wonderfully dark and disturbing. I can see how it would be a hard chapter to write, Spike having to go through the pain of inflicting torture when it's such an antithesis to who he is at the core, and Buffy enduring that immense pain for what she thinks is love. Have to say, don't think Angelus will be taking very good care of her, and it breaks my heart. Can't wait to see how the story progresses further, this is shaping up to be an incredible read.
Date: 03/30/2008 - 07:27 pm Title: Chapter Four
Poor Buffy. Doesn't know Angelus won't care and will probably call her weak and unfit for him. I really hate Spike right now though. That was just cruel. She didn't do anything to Dru. She didn't deserve torture, even being a demon and vampire. Hopefully Buffy won't suffer too much longer.
Date: 03/30/2008 - 07:23 pm Title: Chapter Four
Magnificent hun - I can well understand why that was difficult for you to write, it was difficult to read! I can't tell you how much I admire you for managing to write it. I could feel Spikes disgust for himself and almost feel Buffy's burns and desperation to just be put out of her misery.
Can't wait for more!
Sarah
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Date: 03/30/2008 - 07:18 pm Title: Chapter Four
Why do I think Angel will have a very different reaction to her return then relief? Loved it and can't wait for more.
Date: 03/30/2008 - 07:09 pm Title: Chapter Four
I symphatize , that had to be just as upsetting to write as to read. I wish she weren't so loyal to Angelus though, I hate Angel. Your so good at writing that I found myself cringing as I was reading and I actually feel a little queasey now . Looking forward to more .
Date: 03/30/2008 - 06:54 pm Title: Chapter Four
totally awesome chapter (that's in keeping with buffy's valley girl roots). but i'm thinking angelus isn't a natural born caregiver.
Date: 03/30/2008 - 06:43 pm Title: Chapter Four
Your story is incredible. The darkness of rightenous vengeance against the pain of a choiceless loving girl. I've always found your stories beautifull, but this is one of the best.
Thank you so mutch !!!
Date: 03/30/2008 - 05:35 pm Title: Chapter Four
It was really intense >_< but in a really good way! i liked the chapter very very much!! I cant wait to see what happens!
Date: 03/30/2008 - 05:12 pm Title: Chapter Four
I saw your other story (Time After Time) on top of recently added and thought you had updated again but I've read it already :)
Spike torturing Buffy, no wonder it was hard to write. But he felt sorry for doing it (made him like Angelus, torturing his victims in a way).
He let her go though... I wonder if the burnings will be permanent (have done permanent damage) and how Angelus will react to see her hurt and not so pretty as before.
Date: 03/30/2008 - 05:11 pm Title: Chapter Four
It was a visceral, moving chapter. Good job. Keep going! (But don't forget about Time After Time)
Date: 03/30/2008 - 05:01 pm Title: Chapter Four
really fresh stuff look foward to more
Date: 03/30/2008 - 04:39 pm Title: Chapter Four
Wow! That was some heavy stuff. Excellent visuals. This story is getting more and more intriguing. I look forward to more.
Date: 03/30/2008 - 04:14 pm Title: Chapter Four
wow. really good. terrifyingly painful, but good.