[Report This]Date: 05/15/2008 - 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
Such a great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.
I hope you have a great time at DragonCon! I had been planning on going for months, until it came time for me to get my tickets when my Aunt asked me if I'd like to go with them to visit my cousin in Texas instead. Needless to say, my money is going to be used on my trip to Texas instead. But, I hope you have a great time and meet a lot of interesting people!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm already working on the next chapter, so maybe it will be ready soon! Too bad about DragonCon! I'll take lots of pics to show you guys!
[Report This]Date: 05/15/2008 - 10:09 am Title: Chapter 3
Enjoying,...
Been a while...
Had a huge storm come through last night caused some damage around us and no electricity for a while.. 7 inches of rain.. in a couple of hours.. And this morning it is coming again.. I am sure it is heading in your direction.. And our Quarterback is gone ..lets see what happens with him in Florida..
Author's Response: Yep, been a long time...too long for my tastes. Thanks for sticking around, Pam! Forecast predicted more rain, don't really care since the bad weather generally keeps the idiots inside...but, we'll see. As long as its clear by Saturday to go camping, I don't mind. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 05/15/2008 - 08:53 am Title: Chapter 3
I liked this look into Buffy's life, I think you did a great of of capturing her lonliness, and despair. I can't wait for Spike to run into Joan, that should be one interesting reunion. Fantastic update!
Author's Response: Oh it will be. I've got the meeting all planned out in my wicked mind! Thank you so much for the review, I was really stressing about this chapter. I think that may be why it took so long to write?!
[Report This]Date: 05/15/2008 - 08:37 am Title: Chapter 3
Great work. But no Buffy and Spike seeing each other :(. Thats sad. He goes away, she wants to remember. But they will cross path, or? They have to :)
Continue your great work!
Author's Response: Hey Julia! Thanks for the review! They should find their way back to one another soon, just have to satisfy my angst-need first! Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 05/15/2008 - 08:32 am Title: Chapter 3
YAYYYY, UPDATE!!!
Loved it hun, though I can't wait for the two to get together (you know me, SO not angst-girl) Now bring on the Spike/Willow confrontation, please? And I do hope Jenny manages to help 'Joan' get her memory back!!!
*bounces* MOOOOORE!!!!
*huggles and smooches*
Author's Response: Yes, I updated. Next, the world is going to start spinning backwards. It's a day full of strangeness. I'm thinking maybe next chapter to have those two crazy kids get together, or maybe the one after that. It'll be soon, though....shortly after Willow is dust in the wind. Thanks for the read thru and the review! **smooches**
[Report This]Date: 05/09/2008 - 02:48 am Title: Chapter 2
ooooh u wicked bitoch u!! i was racking my pea brain trying to figure out what guy hasn't showed up yet! Oz is gonna kick ass!! just don't give him the 'Faith' complex. can really only deal w/ her once! but great chappy! loved it!!
Author's Response: I am a wicked, wicked lil girl. Can't be helped. So happy to see you back on the site! **happy dance** And, no worries, can't deal with a Faith-like Oz. Creepy and annoying, really. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 04/21/2008 - 07:20 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh, a new slayer! I never expected it to be Oz... You really surprised me! ;) What about Buffy? Looking forward to read more! / Ariadne
Author's Response: Yep, a new Slayer...just popped into my head and I had to do it! Thank you so much for the review and I promise you will be hearing from Buffy in the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 04/21/2008 - 04:09 am Title: Chapter 2
Oz as a slayer. I'd imagine the arrival of Buffy would have something to do with the weird temporal shift, and Spike almost dying of a broken heart. Love all the different layers at the beginning of this. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Yep, the shift was most definitely the cause of the one Buffy and Spike's heart tried to give up since she "died". Thank you for the awesome review! Glad you like it so much!
[Report This]Date: 04/21/2008 - 04:00 am Title: Chapter 1
And she doesn't know anything! I suppose it isn't the nicest thing to be thrilled by her lack of memory, but That certainly adds a few bumps on the road to happiness. How long will it take Spike to find her, and how long will it then take him to get him to remember... I love it!
Author's Response: Hey there! Glad to see you've made it to the sequel! Nope, Buffy's memory has been wiped clean as far as life memories, but that should be explained further in the next chapter; which is when you guys will see what she's been up to since the "resurection". Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review, glad to have you back!
[Report This]Date: 04/20/2008 - 07:10 am Title: Chapter 2
Love It!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very happy to hear that you like it so much and have a new reader on board!
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2008 - 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
UNpleasant news??? WHY????
God woman, what's going on in that mind of yours? Loved it despite the darkness of it and need an update STAT!!!
*huggles*
Author's Response: Well, heck...I figured you would find some reason to yell at me! You always do! LoL! I'm shocked and pleased that you liked the chapter, what...with all the dying news and all around unpleasantness I'm happy that no one yelled at me. Thanks for the review, babe and I promise that the next update isn't too far away!
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2008 - 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
Nope, I had no idea about Oz. I think it's great that he's the other slayer. :D I can't wait to see how he and Spike play off each other. Wonderful chapter!
Author's Response: The Oz thing just sort of popped into my head one morning while getting ready for bed and liked it so much that I had to come up with some way to put it in, glad you guys seem to like the idea of him being the Slayer. Thanks for the review!!!
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2008 - 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ah right, Giles feared that Spike would try to kill himself again just by not wanting to live. That's why he didn't tell him.
And no, I didn't expect Oz to be the slayer. Congrats, you're surprised me :-D
~ Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Yep, Giles was playing the role of worried father and made a split second decision that has come back to bite him on the patookus! Glad to hear I finally surprised you, I do believe that's a first! LOL! Thanks so much for the review!
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2008 - 10:44 am Title: Chapter 2
So Oz.. is the next slayer..
Waiting for Buffy..
Author's Response: Hey! Buffy will be making an appearance in the next chapter, I promise! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 04/16/2008 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love your start and can't wait for more, can it please be soon. I can't wait to find out the rest.
Author's Response: Thanks Celia! I'm hard at work on the next update. Having a little trouble getting it started, but I know what I want to happen! Always happens to me! LoL! Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 04/14/2008 - 11:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Great beginning! I hope he finds her soon-ish though I'm sure you're going to make her not remember him or something mean like that! ^_^
Author's Response: Hey there! I see you finished up the first part! LoL! And, me? Do something evil? Never. (Note the sarcasm.) Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 04/06/2008 - 12:57 am Title: Chapter 1
awww poor Spikey! i wish he'd stayed awake too! lol and Jonathan sure is getting his story huh? so is Buffy human? and making Harmony and Cordy vengence demons is awesome! Cordy would've made a good vengence demon after what Xander did to her. i can't wait for the next chapter!! good work Tori!
Mon
Author's Response: Hey Mon! Now you know that it'd be too nice of me to leave Spike awake and alert and have them find one another! There's no angst in that! :) Yes, Buffy is now human and how that came to be will be explained at some point. I have a big thing planned towards the end. I decided to make Cordy a vengeance demon after watching The Wish episode, cause she would have made an excellent one for what Xander did to her. Wonder why Joss didn't think of that? Thanks for the review, hun! BTW get whatever you need to get fixed because I miss chatting with you!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
So, it took me about two days to read all of "Lose Control" and I loved every nail-biting minute of it! When I saw that the first chapter of the sequel was up, I had to pinch myself 'cause I was sure I was dreaming!
Cordy and Harmony as Vengeance Demons?! Love it! And is there still a possibility of Anyanka making an appearance? So many questions...so much love for this story!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hi Tuesday! It's always so exciting to gain a new reader, especially one that likes the story! Yep, the sequel was up fairly quick because my faithful readers (especially Sotia) were insisting on a speedy reunion! LoL! I have a great deal planned for Cordy that should prove to be both interesting and funny. I don't know if you already know this, but I am the type of writer that sits down, writes and posts...no waiting for a beta or anything. Therefore, my plot lines tend to change some by the time they enter my brain to the time the update is posted. So, I have no idea if Anyanka will make an appearance, probably not, but you never know. Thank you so much for the review! It's great having you aboard!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
The use of Kate made me grin. Other than that I sooo wanna choke you right now! I will refrain from screaming n frustration and trust you to make it better. Soon.
*hugs*
Author's Response: I sat there for a bit wondering if I should put her in or just make up some random officer and after consulting my "beta" (or bestfriend who just listens to my Buffyverse rants) he said go for it. I'm stoked that you liked it! This was an amazingly easy chapter to write. I had spent four hours already trying to write the FIR update with no luck and decided to work on this one and had it written...no lie...in under an hour and a half. Totally shocked me. Thanks for the review! **hugs back**
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2008 - 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Now that's what I'm talking about. I could so see you going in so many directions with this story. Love you and this story loads.
Author's Response: I have a lot of ideas for this story and really haven't hammered out all the details thus far, so yeah...there's lots of things I could do! Thanks so much for the review!!!!
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2008 - 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sequel, yay :)
Good to see it. You doesn't make it easy for them, huh? Buffy forgot everything. I wonder if she'll start to remember Spike... but I'll read and find out :)
Author's Response: See? I told you I wouldn't leave you hanging with an unhappy ending! No, I have no intention of making this journey easy for either one of them, but I promise it will all be worth it in the end. Thanks so much for the review, glad you're liking it!
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2008 - 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
A "good" wish that won't lead to all the craziness we saw on BtVS??
And now for the connection.. Jenny Calendar ..
Waiting to see what happens.. How are you feeling?
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And our QB is back.. even after more recent problems other than not going to practice or classes.. The guy is going to combust one day..
Author's Response: Yes, a good wish that will have good intentions in the end without all the insanity you normally find in the BtVS show. I am actually feeling better, still have a pretty nasty cough which the Dr says will probably hang around for a while, but better all around. Thanks for asking! So, your QB thinks he rules the world, too? Seems here in Ttown all of our starting line keeps getting thrown in jail for drinking in public and starting fights. Should be interesting once the season starts! So far, it seems like my boys down in Auburn are acting somewhat like humans, but you never know...they tend to let their ass lead them around instead of making decisions with their brain. Silly footballers. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2008 - 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
nice start. i actually like how you had her so close yet so far from Spike. the angst is good, but not too dramatic. it's normal.....for the Buffyverse anyway.
update soon
loved it
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought it would be a nice touch to have them so close in proximity, but still not be able to find one another. I'm evil! Thanks so much for the review!
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2008 - 11:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Hmm.... Buffy as a human. Interesting.. I thought she would come back as a vampire.
And.. Cordelia as a demon.. too funny I have to say. Don't exactly remember if you told the name at your last story.
Now only Spike has to find Buffy and I really hope she will not be together with someone when they find each other.
Great work!
Author's Response: I had toyed with the idea of keeping her a vampire, but there's another twist to the story coming up that will make it so much nicer for her to be human. Thanks so much for the review!
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2008 - 11:39 am Title: Chapter 1
The sequel is off to a wonderful start! Can't wait to read more! :D
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad to know you're still with me on this one.
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