This chapter is okay (without scrolling).
Such a sad begin; but good to know that there will be changes (Buffy changing the time line).
I can't remember exactly what the first chapter was like / what changes you've made.
Looking forward to more (well not everything, there was one chapter I didn't like so much when Spike was 'raped').

Author's Response: I know, from your previous review, you didn't like a chapter with Spike and Ember with the issue of 'raped'. That said....I want to say I am cleaning it up or taking it out...But I can't. It's crucial to my story. I think I was trying to make it softer...Yes, I know, a Spike/other-- and in fact very explicit. I needed a scene for Ember and Buffy. Trust me I had to envision Spuffy in that scene...It wasn't easy. But Ember is close to my heart. I may seem like I am putting all stops on her making her out to be evil and cunning...but she's not...She has layers... I will let you know when it comes up and Red Flag it. But, I'm up to Chapter 3 revisions then sending it to a beta...So I have some time. I really love your reviews, and thank you for sticking it out! I promise to forewarn! Thanks again Cordykitten!