Oh wow, this is an Amazing story, I'm LOVING It!!!!!! :) I love the Time Travel, and it's SO Funny to see Buffy trying to act all proper, LOL!!!! :) You nail the characters of William and Buffy, and everyone else too!!!!!! Awww.....I really Loved the picnic, it was SO Sweet!!!! And I especially LOVED the last chapter!!!! :) Your description of their feelings and kiss, was SO Beautiful and Breathtaking!!!!! :) I'm definitely hooked, and I Can't Wait to read more to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!! :)
Again, Awsome job/story so far and please keep up the Amazing work!!!!!!!!!! :) Thanks for sharing!! :)

Take Care,
Amber :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I hope you continue to enjoy the story. I've posted another chapter. Enjoy!

You may get bored with me constantly repeating myself, but I say again that I love this story. You're pacing it perfectly and I'm enjoying how they are getting to know each other without all of the baggage from their future life. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Bored? Pfff. I'm so grateful that you take the time to review and let me know how I'm doing. Thanks so much for always being so considerate. And once again, thanks for reading!

Awe, William is cute :) And has a lot of Spike in him, not only regarding the favorite color.
Enjoyed the chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks! I always like to think that Spike was just a bolder version of William (minus the killing that is). I sincerely doubt his line "I've always been bad" even when he was "bad." *giggles* Thanks so much for reading.

Every chapter is better than the last. This was beautiful. I just love this fic so much. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. You're terribly kind. I hope I can continue the trend.

That man could read me the phone book and I would be happy...lol! I love sweet William, so I'm really enjoying this story so far=)

Author's Response: Ditto and yep and pretty much yes. I would love to listen him...over and over again. Thanks for reading!

Looking forward to reading more of this story. I do like a William story. : )

Author's Response: Yea!!!!!!!!! William-love. He is SO adorable. I wish I could keep him. It's always a toss up for me..Spike or William...or, you know, both. And there could be oil of some kind involved. lol. Thanks for reading.

I glad you said that this scene was not following the storyline because I thought oh no the timeline is messed up. I liked there first meeting and I am looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thank you. More William and Buffy will be up soon.

Absolutely loved that part.
So glad that they've found each other. And this line- "While this reaction usually led them to a very adult version of whom could pin whom on the ground first" was brilliant and supplied me with the most delicious visuals! Wonderful.

Author's Response: Visuals are always of the good. Hehe. Thanks for the review and I'm glad that I'm keeping your imagination going....*smirk*

I loved this chap.The line where Buffy thought that she should have read more Austin because all she could come up with was 'Oh Rhett, I do love you, I do. I never loved Ashley' had me laughing so hard. You captured her quirky way of thinking so perfectly. Evil cliffe!! It would be unthinkable for William to have been turned already! Please say it isn't so! I'm really enjoying this fic. I"m on tenterhooks til the next chap! Guh!!

Author's Response: Thank you!!!! *Hugs* I'm glad you like the fic and that I could make you laugh as well. Thank you for the complement. Thanks for reading.

Oh good (at last Willow tried) to think of a solution that Spike won't remember that William met Buffy. Hopefully it will be enough.
Oh cliffhanger... it seems everything to point to the fact that Buffy is too late. I hope not...
Looking forward to find out.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'll post soon. :)

I really hope she isn't too late... I was looking forward to her wooing William!
I'm really loving this. I have such a soft spot for time travel fics, and this is shaping up to be a really lovely one.
Just a quick point that I thought I'd mention- I'm assuming that Bridget is supposed to be cockney, so if I'm wrong ignore this, but generally speaking she wouldn't miss out her h's, eg. "t’ings". She'd be more likely to pronounce her "th's" as f's, and to miss of t's and g's when they come at the end of words. Sorry for being so annoyingly picky, but being English, I thought it might be helpful for future reference.

Love this story. Hope there's more to come!


Author's Response: No worries at all. I appreciate all comments. I'm not really sure what accent I was going for...but I'll keep your comments in mind if I write more Bridget dialogue. Thanks so much for reading.

No...didn't expect William! Definitely looking forward to more of this story. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Will post as soon as I can. Keep reading. :)

Willow jumped to conclusions... and against casting spells. I wonder if Buffy (how Buffy) can convince her to do the spell.
William? No, didn't expect him. Makes me wonder what she will achieve with going to William.
So bring it on :)

Author's Response: Will do!!! Thanks for reading. Let me know how I'm doing.