Date: 06/22/2008 - 07:15 pm Title: Epilogue
I really enjoyed reading your story and I have to say that for a first try it wad damn good. I really hope you'll write more! Good job!
Date: 06/18/2008 - 05:19 pm Title: Epilogue
LOVED IT! =D
Awsome job =D
xoxo
Date: 06/15/2008 - 12:43 am Title: Epilogue
Nice story -Thanks. I was confused by the part where they went into their old house and sat on the couch - doesn't someone else live there now? They just found a key and went in? It it was still theirs then why the hotel?
Date: 06/12/2008 - 04:37 am Title: Epilogue
Dang! Wish my first attempts were this awesome. You have a natural knack for writing. You've got a future kid.
Although I will admit, the ending felt a little rushed, needs a bit smoother transition next time. But other then that very tastefully done, excellent grammer (which has been so hard to find lately) and a unique story line.
Keep up the good work, I look forward to your next venture!
Date: 06/09/2008 - 08:04 pm Title: Epilogue
Really enjoyed this!
Date: 06/08/2008 - 09:29 pm Title: Epilogue
A happy ending! :) I'm glad things worked out nicely.
Date: 06/08/2008 - 08:24 pm Title: Epilogue
Awe, already the end. Good way to end it with this epilogue.
Date: 06/08/2008 - 07:53 pm Title: Epilogue
LOVED THIS STORY!! AMAZING ENDING!! i LOVE reading this story and thank u so much for writing this fic. i loved that they had a kid and that angelus died. THANK U again and i CANT wait to read more of your work
Date: 06/08/2008 - 03:30 pm Title: Epilogue
Congratulations on the completion of your first fic! Well done! Enjoyed it--would like to see as your writing progresses.