Date: 04/15/2009 - 05:49 am Title: Two
I particularly like this because often writers would have Buffy misquote her feelings for William in a moment of not knowing what she wanted. Instead he merely overhears, and you state that she knows what she would have wanted to say, but goes with Willow's suggestion for ease. It's very plausible, I could see it happening in real life, and it has a good emotional kick to it.
Date: 11/24/2008 - 03:18 am Title: Two
At least it seems he's not with Dru now.
Date: 05/13/2008 - 01:47 am Title: Two
So sad, her brother. Always more than that I suppose. Love the flash backs. Can't wait to see his apartment. Please, update soon.
Date: 05/12/2008 - 11:13 am Title: Two
*smile* I see you already got one (banner) :)) So sweet :))) It fits well.
~ Buffy was very eager to see William again. Oh I see, it was in 2007 when Buffy talked of him as her brother. No wonder William didn't take it well.
But he'll never will know for sure if he doesn't tell her of his feelings.
Author's Response: He should talk totally talk to her, but my William is a bit of an odd duck. Give him a chance-I think he might just surprise us all.
Date: 05/12/2008 - 07:26 am Title: Two
Awesome story so far, I can't wait to read more.
Date: 05/12/2008 - 05:58 am Title: Two
Interesting, I like where this is going and can't wait for more.
Date: 05/12/2008 - 04:09 am Title: Two
Loved the two chapters I just read! Great start!
Date: 05/12/2008 - 02:58 am Title: Two
Just found your fic and love it! More please!
Date: 05/11/2008 - 08:58 pm Title: Two
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 05/11/2008 - 07:25 pm Title: Two
i do wish we'll get no more '/other' than this... lol
still loving it, of course. so, william's plan is clear... but buffy's?
thanks for the quick update!
Date: 05/11/2008 - 07:06 pm Title: Two
So glad to see another update so soon! Very sweet, looking forward to the next!
Date: 05/11/2008 - 06:29 pm Title: Two
Loved that chapter! Felt truely sorry for William though. Brother?!
I hope there's more to come.
Author's Response: I know :( -But she didn't really say that. She just lacks the words to describe her feelings.
Thanks for reviewing!!!
Date: 05/11/2008 - 06:17 pm Title: Two
So there is a Drusilla... and made a few personal changes since his last visit to Calilfornia and Buffy..
enjoying...
Date: 05/11/2008 - 06:08 pm Title: Two
Oh poor Will from last year!! Still loving this and looking forward to him changing her mind about their relationship!
Sarah
x
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 05/11/2008 - 05:36 pm Title: Two
Poor William... *sigh* Loved the chapter though. And now I want more. :) Great update!
Author's Response: More is on the way. (probably a couple of days still though) :)