Date: 04/16/2009 - 08:54 am Title: Fifteen
Love the commentary on the vampire story, and how the end quote ties in nicely with it. Very nice tongue in cheek moment.
Date: 09/10/2008 - 06:23 am Title: Fifteen
Wow. I am so glad that I stumbled upon this storey! I love it! The characters are incredibly well written, and the dialogue had me laughing out loud quite a few times. I love the fact that this is an AU, but it parallels the characters' attitudes toward sexuality in the Whedonverse so well....
I have a feeling there's going to be some messiness when their feelings finally come out, and I can't wait to read how you write it!
I'm definitely keeping up with this one! More...? Please...?*
Date: 09/09/2008 - 01:45 am Title: Fifteen
Wow - what an update! Very happy to see too I might add. Hope you get lots of lovely reviews so you'll post again soon!
Date: 09/08/2008 - 08:14 pm Title: Fifteen
Yay, I was so happy to see a new chapter of this story! And I loved it! *lol* More please...
Date: 09/08/2008 - 05:02 pm Title: Fifteen
Loved Buffy's teasing about the flashing. And that William couldn't understood that Buffy loved the books too. :-D
Hot :)) And William almost confessed his love... this is his deepest secret, huh?
Loved to see the update and hope for more :)
Date: 09/08/2008 - 04:50 pm Title: Fifteen
Loved the great conversation and the hot sex. ;) Wonderful chapter!
Date: 09/08/2008 - 10:22 am Title: Fifteen
love it...
post more please??
Date: 09/08/2008 - 09:18 am Title: Fifteen
Great chapter, I love how Spike mocks his uncle's books when in the regular universe for Buffy and Spike it's their relationship to a T. Please update soon.
Date: 09/08/2008 - 07:20 am Title: Fifteen
An update - yippee - and what a good one it was. William is managing to keep his feelings under wraps but surely it won't be long before he slips up? Neither Buffy or William are making any real mention of lessons anymore they are just making love and oh my god how hot was that? Loved it, especially William's little speech about the woman he loves. Just one more thing, is there really an Uncle Simon?
Date: 09/08/2008 - 05:32 am Title: Fifteen
totally awsome!! please write more!
Date: 09/07/2008 - 11:25 pm Title: Fifteen
GOD I love this fic. Like, seriously, I saw there was an update and SQUEALED. And it was totally worth the wait. I love the slow evolution of their relationship---sure it's not following the standard pattern, but it works for them. I love seeing how Buffy is slowly realizing there's something deeper going on with Will. And the sex! Oh, so hot. Wonderful, wonderful chapter.
Date: 09/07/2008 - 11:19 pm Title: Fifteen
Loved it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hot chapter
Date: 09/07/2008 - 11:02 pm Title: Fifteen
Awesome chapter! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 09/07/2008 - 10:40 pm Title: Fifteen
YAY, LOVED THE UPDATE, THANX!!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. im glad that theyre getting closer and i wish that he would tell her that he loves her. i really hope that buffy develops deeper feelings for him and doesnt leave him. also i hope that everything works out well and that they end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX