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Reviewer: spikeluv84 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2009 - 10:38 am Title: Chapter 5

omg, that ch. ending is probably the sweetest thing i've ever read!! go Carrie!

Monica

Author's Response: On occassion I can be sweet. (though don't count on it again ;) I'm glad you're enjoying this! *huggles*

Reviewer: bella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2009 - 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 5

Then she closed her eyes and kissed the place where his cheek was, leaving a kiss print in the mist.

Spike felt that kiss, even through the glass, and it made his heart burst with warmth at her easy affection. He looked at her through the window, his eyes saying all he wanted but couldn’t. The rain ran in rivulets down his cheeks as his curls relaxed from their gelled state, falling into his eyes because they were so long. He saw that Buffy was about to open the window again, knowing that if she did, he wouldn’t leave…ever. He stopped her with a shake of his head and mouthed the word later, then dropped to the ground and headed off in the direction of Restfield.

He didn’t see her draw a heart around her mouth print.

The last part was totally made of awesome. sighs dramatically. off to chapter6.


Author's Response: *giggles* You know, that was my favorite scene to write out of the whole thing? I could so see it happening in my head it was so romantic! *le sigh* Thank you so much for the review/comment Bella!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 - 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 5

Loved the kiss.
And Buffy knows of the claim now. Looking forward how she takes this.

Author's Response: Oh that is so neat Cordy! How did you do that? I love that little heart! Cool! I loved writing the kiss... got all dreamy eyed and had to shake myself free of the fantasy... sigh. Wait till the conversation at the IHOP, she'll take it well ;) Thanks Cordy, you're such a doll!

Reviewer: Grecia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 - 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 5

A fantastic story! Your description of Spike and his thoughts and his interaction with Buffy, while she deals with the "gift" are all so perfect, and I don't know if I'm more eager to read the two of them together in the IHOP and talking about claims or to read how Buffy tells the group about the changes in her and what might happen then! Please update soon, share the love and narrate to someone to type for you, they'll be lucky to hear your story!!

Author's Response: SQUEE! A new reader! (I secretly adore new readers). Oooo you should be eager about both the IHOP convo and the Scooby meeting - big time. As a side note, I did do some narrations as a child for a radio program and I loved it! Are you volunteering? LOL! Thanks so much Grecia for your review, it made me smile so much!

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 - 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 5

Yay, another update! Please let them keep coming, love this story. :)

Author's Response: *Bows to the Goddess of Putting up with Carrie's Old Fics* Thank you so much Pet, I really really appreciate you sticking around for a second go! More soon!

Reviewer: _3xy_ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 - 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 5

Aww. I'm so glad i took the time to read this. This is just awesome. Yay. Hope the update comes soon.

Author's Response: SQUEE! Thankee! I'm glad you liked it, and I have to say, I really love your stuff too. I love the twist of Agressive Buffy and Not Interested Spike - love it! I can't wait for an update! I'll update this soon- hopefully!

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 - 06:54 am Title: Chapter 5

Awwww, she drew a heaaaart!!!

I have a silly grin on now *bounces* I hope the Scoobies don't fuck everything up (tho I know they'll try *grumbles*)

More soon, please, woman! I need my fiiiiiiix!!!!! Love ya lots and lots.. and lots!!! *mwah*

Author's Response: Awww yup, she drew a heart! tee hee. I had a silly grin while writing it! Scoobies? Fuck things up? Surely not? Not the Scoobies? LOL. Hold your horses woman, my fingers can only type so much at a time! I'll get ya your drugs...eventually ;). Miss you.. love ya.

Reviewer: Veronica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 - 05:48 am Title: Chapter 5

I had a bad day today at work. But I saw that you updated your story here and it makes me feel better! Love love your story!

Author's Response: Awwww! That's great that the story made you feel better (makes me feel great too!) Sorry you had a crappy day though :(. Thanks for the review Veronica!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 - 03:55 am Title: Chapter 5

Aww, the window scene was simply lovely, Buffy's gesture was so sweet. Fantastic update, Carrie! Can't wait to read more! :D

Author's Response: *Gushes* I wuv that scene too, I so wanted to do it... sigh. Thanks for reading babe and reviewing - you SO feed my muse ;)

Reviewer: Blackoberst Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 5

Gods I like this story. I remeber liking it before and I certainly like it now!
Great stuff!

Author's Response: Gods, I love your reviews - so breathtakingly honest :D. And I didn't know you had read that crap before... damn, I should give you a medal for service during times of great pain. I salute you sir!

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oh wow! That kiss in the window was so sweet, love that she drew a heart around it. I love how flustered she was when asking Spike about the claim, I imagine she's worried she might think he's being forced to put up with her more than anything else. Loving this so very much, I can't wait to read what else you have in store for us. *hugs*

Author's Response: Again, I am profusely sorry that I didn't send this to you! MY BAD! I always loved that image of steamy kissy kissy on window thingy... (that sounded bad, didn't it? Sounded more like porn.) And do you have a crystal ball with you young lady? How did you know what Buffy might be flustered about ? Hmmm? tsk tsk.. you're psychic, that's all there is to it. ;) Love ya hun!

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 5

GAWD, this chapter was so full of raw emotions - had me all choked up, *sniffs*. And whoa, she 'started' a claim, now that's interesting... wonder what happens if it isn't completed - will it fade, or remain to torture them both with its 'pull'? And WOW, I was truly moved byt the last scene, the fogging of the window and her kissing him - him missing the heart she drew around it. Sighs, such a lovely chapter boo, very well written, made the characters and feelings jump right off the page, bravo, I bow to you oh Mistress Carrie, giggles. Luv ya boo.

Author's Response: Delusional... yup, you're delusional. YOU took Vara's LSD, didn't ya? ;) tee hee. I always wanted to do the window foggy kissy thingy...damn, enought 'y's' in there? And nope, that claim won't go away... it will just torture poor Spike until he is a mindless puddle of goo...UNLESS Buffy does something about it! But will our heroine act in time? Will she save our battle weary Spike? Tune in next time for anothe episode of Buff the Bitch... ahem... Old Friend Long Gone. Brought to you by "Fruit Loops." love ya babe

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