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Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2008 - 01:36 am Title: Chapter 7

Thanks so much hon for the shoutout and the note. Hopefully I can return soon but in the mean time, soooooooooooooooooooo lookig forward to pinhead, lol. With you as a friend, i have no need for vengeance, giggles. If I didn't have you, I'd be screaming for Anya, hee hee hee. You already know how much I love this chapter, set aside how strong Buffy is now, the squee factor that she stood up to everyone and admitted her feelings for Spike. But the humor in this is what I enjoyed most I think. I never REALLY wrote Xander, but i sort of want to after reading how well you pegged him - 'special bus', rofl. Glad to have been able to help you on this boo. Smooches to a chapter well done - luv ya my twisted sista.

Author's Response: Return whenever you want hun, no pressures. And yeah, Pinhead will be a lovely little torture ...hehehehehe. SQUEEE! You're gonna write Xander! YAY Thanks for all your help babe, couldn't have done it without you and Dusty! Luv ya back sista

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2008 - 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 7

Well I like Buffy's eyes changing colors a lot. Tara explained it good with the color of the aura. But the other don't get it (at first). At last Xander shut up because of the eyes :)
I like the twist with the pheromone and Anya being the one explaining her wisdom.
Loved the roles Anya, Tara and Willow played here. Willow because she was eh hold down? Not successful with her magics.

Author's Response: Yeah, I always thought Anya and Tara should have been given bigger roles than on the I'm trying to make up for it. Thanks Cordy, more soon!

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2008 - 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 7

For some reason I seem to have missed the last chapter. Oh well, that means I got two chapters to read now, not gonna complain. :) Still loving this story and these chapters were great. And now I want more. *lol*

Author's Response: That's ok, I like it when I find that I have more chapters to read of a story too! Thanks for sticking with this one Pet, you're a gem!

Reviewer: Blackoberst Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2008 - 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 6

I managed to do it once again - falling back on reviews. This time I had a legitimate reason - I was out of town with precious little internet access.

Anyway, another great chapter that tears at the heart strings and leaves you craving for more. I just love your writing style.

Did I mention I'm insatiable when it comes to good stories? So I'll be aching for more of this!

Author's Response: Tsk tsk Andrei. All if forgiven though, cause I know you had to be jonesing for the internet connection. Awww thanks for the love on my writing style dearest...I try. You did mention you like stories yes...And I have a few more in the works besides the ones on be on the lookout! MWAH!

Reviewer: jackson Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2008 - 06:18 am Title: Chapter 6

great story.... can't wait for more

Author's Response: Thanks Jackson! I'll post more soon! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2008 - 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 6

You know I loved the emotional depth this chapter sweety - bravo, take a bow - and okay, so I did laugh a bit that you edited the wrong chapter, but only b/c I know the frustration first hand, hee hee. And you KNOW I have to say something about cutting the kissage short - evil, evil author you. You accuse me of dragging things out? I'm only following your example, LMFAO. Ok, THat's a total lie, but it sounded good in my head. GLad you enjoyed all my medicated ramblings as of late, lol. Luv ya babes.

Author's Response: *takes bow and falls off stage!* LOL (actually did that one time). I did, I edited the wrong chapter, I was nearly in tears! But I would have laughed at myself too! And like I told Mari... if I'm evil, it's only because I learned from the best *cough, you, cough*. And you keep talking like that to the voices inside your head and eventually they'll answer... and then you'll freak out...and well...things will go to shit then. LMAO... love you sista

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2008 - 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 6

I LOVED this chapter, loved how Spike ordered for Buffy and while I've never been to an IHOP that menu sounds too yummy for words. Heehee, loved the way everyone seemed afraid to get near them after the 'incident'. *giggles* And how Buffy keeps opening up to Spike. The conversation in the crypt was so emotional, and I love that it was she who got to console him then.

And yeah, you're slightly evil for ending it there, but I'm sure the next chapter would be so very good that I think I'll forgive you... this time. ;) *smooches* Love you, darling!

Author's Response: OMG, if you EVER get the chance to go... you gotta! The food is delish! Moi? Evil ending? I learned from the best...*cough Mari and Tina, cough* And yes, the next chapter will involve the Scoobies and you'll just LOVE that! Thanks Mari, for everything!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2008 - 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 6

☆SR☆ allows you to do some HTML tags in comments too (tags I forget to close sometimes).->* I just added some color :)
*testing * ♫ ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ (If that shows you can use the ALT key to make it. To google html is distracting *g* Didn't knew that ALT key works.
On to your story:
Ouch... the hot coffee must have hurt. But it were Buffy's eyes that distracted the waitress.
Loved the Spuffyness, Spike consoling Buffy, them really talking.

Author's Response: Thanks for the info COrdy! YAY! Yeah, coffee is a SOB when it's hot and scalding - but Buffy will get over it. I think she was more impressed with Spike's reaction to the incident. More Spuffyness on the way! Thanks Cordy

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2008 - 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 6

This chapter really made me hungry for pancakes... lol! And buttered pecan syrup sounds yummy. ;) Seriously though, the Spuffy interaction was wonderful. I especially enjoyed seeing Spike and Buffy open up to each other. Great update, Carrie!

Author's Response: OMG, I LOVE their pancakes (duh, hello? International House of Pancakes!) And I wasn't kidding about the syrup! I WANT SOME! *sobs* Thanks for the reivew babe!

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2008 - 07:16 am Title: Chapter 6

Ok, I've been sniffling throughout this, but really sobbed at some points, so I pasted my favorite lines here :-D

“I have everything I need,”----awwwwwwww

She narrowed her eyes on him. “It’s a good thing I like you, mister.”

That brought him up short. “You do?” It wasn’t a declaration of love, but it was a start.
----why that made me tear up I know not, but it did, and it was soooo beautiful!

It must have been some time later that she grabbed his attention again with her sniffles. “I cleaned my plate,” she murmured, eating the last bite of her toast.----this was such a heartbreaking image... poor thing, just what a child would do. She seemed so helpless (and it's too early in the morning for me, so maybe I'm not all w the sense, but you always know what I mean)

I was homesick for you, even in Heaven.----aaaand guy sitting accross for me looked up at my sob...

It was pretty much downhill from there, and if I had something w long sleeves on I'd probably be wiping my nose on them. This story is beyond touching and you write them so brilliantly it's like I can see them in front of me.

Love you so much that I'll miss you if I have to kill you for letting the Scoobies interfere! (and my ass is waiting for your arrow with bated breath) *smooches*

Author's Response: OMG, I'm soooo sorry I made you cry hun! No... not really.... *evil laughter ensues... bwhahahahhaaa* Awwww guy looked at you sobbing... is there broom closet sex in your future because of it????? *bats eyelashes*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 - 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 5

Loved the kiss.
And Buffy knows of the claim now. Looking forward how she takes this.

Author's Response: Oh that is so neat Cordy! How did you do that? I love that little heart! Cool! I loved writing the kiss... got all dreamy eyed and had to shake myself free of the fantasy... sigh. Wait till the conversation at the IHOP, she'll take it well ;) Thanks Cordy, you're such a doll!

Reviewer: Grecia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 - 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 5

A fantastic story! Your description of Spike and his thoughts and his interaction with Buffy, while she deals with the "gift" are all so perfect, and I don't know if I'm more eager to read the two of them together in the IHOP and talking about claims or to read how Buffy tells the group about the changes in her and what might happen then! Please update soon, share the love and narrate to someone to type for you, they'll be lucky to hear your story!!

Author's Response: SQUEE! A new reader! (I secretly adore new readers). Oooo you should be eager about both the IHOP convo and the Scooby meeting - big time. As a side note, I did do some narrations as a child for a radio program and I loved it! Are you volunteering? LOL! Thanks so much Grecia for your review, it made me smile so much!

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 - 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 5

Yay, another update! Please let them keep coming, love this story. :)

Author's Response: *Bows to the Goddess of Putting up with Carrie's Old Fics* Thank you so much Pet, I really really appreciate you sticking around for a second go! More soon!

Reviewer: _3xy_ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 - 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 5

Aww. I'm so glad i took the time to read this. This is just awesome. Yay. Hope the update comes soon.

Author's Response: SQUEE! Thankee! I'm glad you liked it, and I have to say, I really love your stuff too. I love the twist of Agressive Buffy and Not Interested Spike - love it! I can't wait for an update! I'll update this soon- hopefully!

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 - 06:54 am Title: Chapter 5

Awwww, she drew a heaaaart!!!

I have a silly grin on now *bounces* I hope the Scoobies don't fuck everything up (tho I know they'll try *grumbles*)

More soon, please, woman! I need my fiiiiiiix!!!!! Love ya lots and lots.. and lots!!! *mwah*

Author's Response: Awww yup, she drew a heart! tee hee. I had a silly grin while writing it! Scoobies? Fuck things up? Surely not? Not the Scoobies? LOL. Hold your horses woman, my fingers can only type so much at a time! I'll get ya your drugs...eventually ;). Miss you.. love ya.

Reviewer: Veronica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 - 05:48 am Title: Chapter 5

I had a bad day today at work. But I saw that you updated your story here and it makes me feel better! Love love your story!

Author's Response: Awwww! That's great that the story made you feel better (makes me feel great too!) Sorry you had a crappy day though :(. Thanks for the review Veronica!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 - 03:55 am Title: Chapter 5

Aww, the window scene was simply lovely, Buffy's gesture was so sweet. Fantastic update, Carrie! Can't wait to read more! :D

Author's Response: *Gushes* I wuv that scene too, I so wanted to do it... sigh. Thanks for reading babe and reviewing - you SO feed my muse ;)

Reviewer: Blackoberst Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 5

Gods I like this story. I remeber liking it before and I certainly like it now!
Great stuff!

Author's Response: Gods, I love your reviews - so breathtakingly honest :D. And I didn't know you had read that crap before... damn, I should give you a medal for service during times of great pain. I salute you sir!

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oh wow! That kiss in the window was so sweet, love that she drew a heart around it. I love how flustered she was when asking Spike about the claim, I imagine she's worried she might think he's being forced to put up with her more than anything else. Loving this so very much, I can't wait to read what else you have in store for us. *hugs*

Author's Response: Again, I am profusely sorry that I didn't send this to you! MY BAD! I always loved that image of steamy kissy kissy on window thingy... (that sounded bad, didn't it? Sounded more like porn.) And do you have a crystal ball with you young lady? How did you know what Buffy might be flustered about ? Hmmm? tsk tsk.. you're psychic, that's all there is to it. ;) Love ya hun!

Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Just found this - never read it before but anything with a demon hankie has to be fab! Off to read more now.

Author's Response: Yup, you never know how, when, or why it will be used ;). Thanks MarzBar! (I love those things, yum!)

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 5

GAWD, this chapter was so full of raw emotions - had me all choked up, *sniffs*. And whoa, she 'started' a claim, now that's interesting... wonder what happens if it isn't completed - will it fade, or remain to torture them both with its 'pull'? And WOW, I was truly moved byt the last scene, the fogging of the window and her kissing him - him missing the heart she drew around it. Sighs, such a lovely chapter boo, very well written, made the characters and feelings jump right off the page, bravo, I bow to you oh Mistress Carrie, giggles. Luv ya boo.

Author's Response: Delusional... yup, you're delusional. YOU took Vara's LSD, didn't ya? ;) tee hee. I always wanted to do the window foggy kissy thingy...damn, enought 'y's' in there? And nope, that claim won't go away... it will just torture poor Spike until he is a mindless puddle of goo...UNLESS Buffy does something about it! But will our heroine act in time? Will she save our battle weary Spike? Tune in next time for anothe episode of Buff the Bitch... ahem... Old Friend Long Gone. Brought to you by "Fruit Loops." love ya babe

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2008 - 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 4

I absolutely loved this, but I know you're gonna get all evil on me and I'm pouting in advance!!!


Wuv ya lots!!! *Mwah*

Author's Response: Awww pouty... Spike's gonna get that lip! And you can put your fears to rest. Giles will NOT call Angel, althought he has a strong inkling to do so. More soon! Love ya babes

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2008 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 4

Mmmmm meaningful, the colors turning more colorful when holding hands (joint).
Good trick with the eyes, I like the color changing. And the 'Spike has a heart'.

Author's Response: Sigh... yeah, Spike has a heart (hasn't he always ;) and it's so neat you picked up on the color changing thingy. I can always count on you to pick up that sorta thing ;) Yup the eye thing was in the original, so I thought I'd keep it. It made for lots of stuff to work with in terms of the storyline. Thanks Cordy, as always!

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2008 - 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 4

Wonderful chapter! So incredibly sweet. I just can't get enough of this story. :)

Author's Response: hehehe that means a lot Pet, cause you were with me the first time around. Bless ya! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2008 - 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 4

“Well, tie me up and shag me sideways till I’m blind,” me, me, me, I will, LMAO. And that ever-blasted PHONE interruption. Phones are evil, not of the good, they interrupt momentous happenings, damnit. But of course Giles being on the other end is enough for any guy to lose an erection fast, hee hee. GLad Buffy stood up to him where Spike was concerned. This chapter was so sweet, and hot, and frusrating and emotional - you got all wrapped up in here girl, seriously. And now that they have the rest of the night... I wonder what they'll do with it? Sleep? Nah, sleep only comes after a good shag, LOL. In other words - screw the scoobie meeting for now, giggles. Loved the gift he gave her and why he had to give it to her now. This line was great - Good. Long for me Buffy…please. And of course your work is always welcome to my axe, hahahahhahaa. Luv ya babes,

Author's Response: LMFAO! I know YOU would! (tears here) giggles. And the phone interuption was just for YOU, as you had the Spuffy interuption in ML too - phones just need to go the way of the Dodo. And actually it's already the morning - they dreamed all night. So it's more like, "What will they do all day while waiting for the Scoobes?" heheheh, I liked the last line too...sigh...if only she could hear too.... Luv ya too my sista, couldn't have been half way decent without you!

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