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Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2008 - 05:25 am Title: Forgiving

So Willow knew but has kept silent. That must have been really hard for her. At least Giles trusted her to keep up Spike's tale. I'm curious about the Council symbols.

Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Yeah, I thought putting Willow in that kind of position would be an interesting twist. All will be revealed.

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Date: 07/17/2008 - 10:03 pm Title: Now We Wait

Ah sneak Dawn, trying to find out things of her own.
But Buffy knows a little more now.

Author's Response: She's a stinker.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2008 - 09:06 pm Title: A Slayer's Story

Enjoying this fic! Wonder who the vampire Buffy felt was?? Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks. I hope you enjoy.

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2008 - 05:59 pm Title: A Slayer's Story

Oh goodie, three new chapters! And very good ones. Looking forward to more, as always.

Author's Response: Thanks. Adding more as often as I can

Reviewer: Pin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2008 - 11:41 am Title: A Slayer's Story

Love this story; very intersting concept and i like the new characters. Looking forward to seeing what happens next. Thanks!

Author's Response: Appriciate you trying out the story. I try to update often.

Reviewer: Thundercat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2008 - 05:28 am Title: A Slayer's Story

So close and yet so far. Who was she feeling? Angel or Spike? Or both?

Thanks for the batch of chapters to read ~ quite a treat.

Author's Response: Thanks. More comming soon to a computer near you.

Reviewer: Blackoberst Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 - 08:31 pm Title: Forgiving

Come on, let's see Spike! *chants*

Alas this is the last online time that I'll get to spend reading wor the next week.

Author's Response: Your wish, my command. At least this once.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 - 03:42 pm Title: Forgiving

Looks like the gang is putting two and two together. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: A bit more addition, plus some algebra.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 - 03:02 pm Title: Forgiving

Well at last they are moving along. Knowing now that AI is looking for information too... maybe working together will be a good thing.

Author's Response: Its kinda like a min-demon-info co-op. o.k. enouph hyphens.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 - 02:56 pm Title: Reliving

Even as human (Liam) Angel(us) wasn't the best of his kind. Neither when he became Angelus.
But even now he passed? *wonders what's the matter with Spike*

Author's Response: Too much clothing??

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 - 02:37 pm Title: Confession

Girls talk was fun :)
Even more people know the secret now.. including the AI team.

Author's Response: Yup. And we're not quite half done.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 - 02:27 pm Title: Determined

So Akoshta can be more dangerous than Angel or Spike now... (though I can't imagine that Spike will be unworthy).
Oh interesting, Sam's diary. She has had a special life / training. So if Sam lived as long as her vampire, is she still alive? And what about the paper...

Author's Response: All I can say is, hope you like the update.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 - 01:42 pm Title: Intrusive Memories

Loved the lesson Spike got, Buffy leading him slowly to where he needs to be to know what he wants.

Author's Response: Thanks, that was one chappie that almost wrote itself.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 - 01:31 pm Title: Below the Surface

Oh no, where did all these chapters come from? I'm so behind...
If Spike and Angel faced the same situation here (the dark), Spike took it way better, sleeping instead dreaming.
Two Buffys... indeed there was the thought Spike didn't say aloud. *off to find what he wishes for*
Angel noticed that Buffy moved on (at last from his gifts).

Author's Response: Twas the same situation, dark, lack of anything to sense. I thought it fittining to keep their experiences seperate and unique.

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 - 07:46 am Title: Forgiving

Really liked the updates. I'm so glad you're updating this story so fast, then I won't have to wait too long. Never were good with patience. :) Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Sorry the updates too so long. Life, it interrupts. more very soon though and 3 chapters awaiting.

Reviewer: Thundercat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 - 03:54 am Title: Forgiving

Great update!

Just to confirm, have you updated or changed the story at all or is this as you originally wrote it back in 2002?

One thing from an earlier chapter just popped into mind. The "Buffy" guides did the memory invasion on both Angel and Spike, yet the one guide said it only worked on souled beings. At this point in S6, Spike was still unsouled. Just an oversight or a little something special from his extra-special demon?

Author's Response: The memory invasion was on both but ony Angel relives and feels the past, while Spike can only view and recal. Angel is forced to relive the agony of his previous personas. Spike only watches himself be an ass. It is subtle, but different.

Reviewer: Thundercat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 - 01:28 am Title: Determined

What's on the paper? What's on the paper!?!

And surely the woman with "short cropped red hair in a long black gown" has to have some significance ` though I highly doubt it was Sam herself.

Gotta keep going.....

Author's Response: it was just some chick. very random.

Reviewer: Thundercat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 - 12:24 am Title: Below the Surface

The boys are so different, aren't they? So are the Buffys: the Angel-era Buffy vs Spike's Buffy.

I would think that the PTB would hold Spike to his first uttered wish, however impulsive or un-thought-out it may be!

Author's Response: all he cares about is getting Buffy in the end.

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Date: 07/13/2008 - 12:08 am Title: Reliving

OMG--does this mean Spike fails and must die? Nooooo!!! Say it isn't so! You've got me on the edge of my chair with this fic, so hurry with more of it, please?
~~K.

Author's Response: Spikes not gonna die. I keep him in my room for norty slavery, so the boy wont die.

Reviewer: Thundercat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2008 - 11:31 pm Title: The Second

I'm so pleased that Spike thought to buy blood and fortify himself for the expected trials. A rude awakening for Angel. ::snerk::

Interesting dynamic you've set up with between Giles and Buffy. Actually, your tweaks to each of the character's canon personalities are neat to read.

Author's Response: The Buffy, Giles dynamic is important to me, but Ange did go on a supply run before leaving. All's well.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2008 - 11:27 pm Title: Reliving

That was an interesting ride! I enjoyed how Angel was disgusted with the young Liam. It shows growth and maturity, though Angel can still be vain (the hair!) and petty at times (BtVS S7 End of Days when he whines about having had the soul first and Buffy replies, "What are you, TWELVE?!" - lol one of my favourite lines!). I always though Liam was a bit of a bastard. Somehow, I think he and his demon would have got on just fine if they had been together from the start. Being flooded with the 100 years of mayhem must have be overwhelming and set him straight.

I wonder what you will do with a soul-less Spike. Like you said, his demon has kept some of his humanity and the chip has forced him to stop eating 'happy meals on legs.' He is a much more fluid, flexible character, too, so that should help him out.

Looking forward to the next update!



Author's Response: I will be playing with soulless spike, no worries. But I get to bend him to me desire. And they are 12, lack of maturity is fun.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2008 - 10:53 pm Title: Confession

lol The duster again! Love it!

Anya was her typical wonderful self. :) I'm glad Buffy and Willow (and perhaps even Tara?) are starting to mend bridges. So now, how long until Buffy calls LA and everyone knows?

Great update, thanks.

Author's Response: No calling, we have email. its fun.

Reviewer: Blackoberst Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2008 - 09:22 pm Title: Reliving

I did enjoy your take in the past. It is a much wiser Angel you depict here than most invision (myself included). It is easy to overlook his past, his motivation, his ideals while judging him for his mistakes. However mistakes are an integral part of what makes us human. And Angel does want to become human (at least to reclaim his humanity in the face of all of his past deeds). I've noticed how you skipped over the whole Lawson business and some other not-so-proud moments (tortured by Spike for the Gem, the day he took back...). Anyway, this story is really good and I can't wait to read more (with that being said, I'm going out of town for a week, so no news from me is due to that, not to my losing any interest at all!)
Go on without me, I shall catch up!

Author's Response: I picked out moments that helped move along the story and prove the point I was trying to make at the time. have a great vacation.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2008 - 09:14 pm Title: Reliving

Really loving this! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: Thundercat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2008 - 08:41 pm Title: Slayer of Slayers

Very intriguing! Off to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: groovy. :)

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