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Reviewer: sask Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2009 - 04:27 pm Title: Chp 14 In the Dark

awesome...read the whole thing in one go...

Author's Response: Thank you very much. That's a lot to read!

Reviewer: Abby Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2009 - 03:18 pm Title: Chp 14 In the Dark

New reader here! I found this when you posted it to Elysian Fields and was delighted to find it more complete over here. I am absolutely loving this! Of course in-the-past-Spike has about as much chance of *not* falling for Buffy as in-the-future-Spike did - and I'm very much looking forward to reading about that! I'm also curious about whether future Spike's memories are going to reflect this early encounter with Buffy or if, somehow, when she gets back, the magic will have somehow accounted for that. Anyway, great update and surprise ending. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Do love to hear from new readers! Makes my day. So pleased you are enjoying the story. We'll see what the future brings!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2009 - 06:23 am Title: Chp 14 In the Dark

Very clever closing scene, I never would've guessed things were going to play out the way they did. Can't wait for Buffy to wake up, her reaction should be interesting. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Glad you enjoyed the chp.

Reviewer: msspikester Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2009 - 03:47 am Title: Chp 14 In the Dark

Wow, the way you threw that in the end was great! Do you think she will even remember it happening? Even though he doesn't know her well, he can still be the calming presence in her life. Waiting for more!

Author's Response: Was she dreaming? Will she think that, but then, let's face it, she may be in denial, but the girl isn't stupid!

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2009 - 12:23 am Title: Chp 14 In the Dark

Yeah, Spike, try not to fall for her. Good luck with that. I love this story. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. Will try and update again soon.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2009 - 09:32 pm Title: Chp 14 In the Dark

Clever twist :)
I don't think that Buffy will believe that it has happened, more probably thinking she was dreaming.

Author's Response: She may well try and deny everything she feels!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 10:10 pm Title: Chp 14 In the Dark

Uh, oh! Will Buffy just think it was a dream, I wonder?

'Slayer magic' lol

Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: I think, deep down, he will always believe that! Dru certainly did many years later!

Reviewer: NeomeBuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 05:51 pm Title: Chp 14 In the Dark

Woot! :D mwahahaha finally the two get together, but Buffy isn't really all together to enjoy it so sad. Sometimes with stories you have to go and refresh your memory, remember what it was about before you read the next chapter. Not for this story, such a cliffhanger that I was cheering "come on Spike wake up" as I clicked on the link. Boy did he ever wake up. Awesome chapter thanks for writing.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! So pleased to see some new names on my review page. Perhaps this story has been picked up by new readers? I do hope so.

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