Reviews For The Mended Heart
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Reviewer: Ivy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2008 - 01:08 am Title: Chapter Eight

You know i used to hate it when teachers called on me and looked at me like 'you couldn't possibly know the answer' it was just so annoying :) Good chapter the ten questions was a great way for them to get to know each other. Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: I know! Right? I hated one of my best friends because we would always get caught talking and the teacher would always pick on one of us to answer the next question, but I wouldn't know the answer. But when the teacher would pick her, she would know the answers no matter what the question. LoL! That's where that part came from! haha. Pick Ten was a game that me and my friends made up on the our way up to Philadelphia when we were in like the 8th grade. It was a good time-passer. I'll try to get my muse into gear. I'm already working on chapter nine. I am so glad that you like it! Thanks! =)

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2008 - 08:22 pm Title: Chapter Eight

Loved both chapters and can't wait for your next update. :)

Author's Response: Thanks hun!!! I'll get my muse on the ball again!! Thanks babe!!! =)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2008 - 02:50 pm Title: Chapter Eight

I love how close Spike and Buffy have become. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Aww...thanks so much!! I'll try to get my muse into writing mode soon, but right now, I think she's kinda exhausted!!! lol! Thanks! =)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2008 - 11:03 am Title: Chapter Eight

Good chapter. I liked the 10 question game a lot, it gave them opportunity to get to know the other better. And that Buffy knew the answer when caught by the teacher.

Author's Response: Lol! Yeah, the part with the teacher was something that happened to one of my friends. We were passing notes in Psychology class and the teacher called on her and surprisingly enough, she knew the answer, but it was a lot more complex that what Buffy answered.... The 'Pick Ten' was a game that my friends and I decided to make up on our way up to Philadelphia when we were in like, the 8th grade. I thought that would be a nice way for them to get a little closer and for me to bring in the whole "i love you" thing... Thanks!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2008 - 10:51 am Title: Chapter Eight

Enjoyed... kinda a recap of their life.. good and bad..

Author's Response: Thanks!!!! =)

Reviewer: hhh569 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2008 - 05:59 am Title: Chapter Eight

I like this story. I didn't care for the this chapter though. I miss Buffy being a spitfire. Spike did apoligize for his treatment toward Buffy earlier but she needs time to trust people. Make Spike work for it. Maybe they can go on a date.

Author's Response: Well, Spike has been there to help Buffy a lot, but she hasn't really been trusting him all that much. I don't think that I got that point across though. In the flashback, she was just starting to get closer to him, but when he said that he loved her, she kinda withdrew herself from him. There's going to be a scene coming up with them that Spike is going to earn a bit more of her trust. I like the date idea, and I hadn't really thought about sending them out on a date in public, but what they are going to do in the next chapter is kind of a date. But it's sort of staying in date. Thanks! =)

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