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Reviewer: callmekitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2008 - 03:22 am Title: Chapter Twelve

Geez, if there is trouble to be found, these 2 will find it. Love that B & S get "pop up timers" together at Angels anger.

-Beth

Author's Response: lol yeah they are trouble magnets

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2008 - 06:45 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

The chapter started funny but ended bad; sad if the baby is really dead.

Author's Response: No way would I kill the baby. The kid's alright, but is it's parents?

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2008 - 10:02 am Title: Chapter Twelve

I'm really confused but it's a great chapter.

Author's Response: Yeah, mee too on the confusion. :D

Reviewer: BuffyLuvsSpike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2008 - 05:57 am Title: Chapter Twelve

This part was hilarious
Furiously butt naked, Spike was in the sun, with his arms wide open and yelling to the skies, “I can feel the sun on my tallywacker! I’m ALIVE!”

But Spike had failed to remember LA was a demons’ playground and was immediately tackled to the ground by a bulbous Fahunghai demon.

up until u found out the baby is killed


Author's Response: It doesn't say that the baby was killed.... Hope you like the next chappy

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2008 - 04:10 am Title: Chapter Twelve

Oh poor Spike and Baby *is sad* So happy about the update :) Get a doctor NOW , tell him Buffy !

Can't wait for more !!!

Author's Response: The Doctor is here :D Thanks for your reviews

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