Date: 10/06/2008 - 07:00 am Title: chapter 2
I absolutely love the story so far. Please update soon.
Author's Response: updated, updated...I have written a couple of chapters ahead so will post daily hopefully
Date: 10/06/2008 - 03:21 am Title: chapter 2
Interesting. Buffy's dead and the slayers have lost their strengths. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: glad you liked and thanks for the review
Date: 10/06/2008 - 02:34 am Title: chapter 2
What an intense chapter! I hope Merrick and Joyce can help Spike save Buffy. *sits on the edge of seat nervously*
Author's Response: glad you liked it more on its way
Date: 10/06/2008 - 12:33 am Title: chapter 2
Hmm , getting very interesting. The story idea is good , but i can't help noticing the lack of dialogue in your story , is it meant to be a narrative without an actual narrator , because you seem to be telling the story instead .
Author's Response: yep, that chapter the dialogue just wouldn't come..it refused, however my muse played nicer with the later ones
Date: 10/05/2008 - 10:43 pm Title: chapter 2
Buffy is already dead. How will Merrick be able to help?? Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: and dead counts how in BTVS world? :)
more very soon
Date: 10/05/2008 - 10:32 pm Title: chapter 2
Nice twists - really original.
Author's Response: thank you
Date: 10/05/2008 - 09:14 pm Title: chapter 2
WOW another really good chapter, glad they realized how much they hurt Buffy , with their so called "good intentions" Good for Faith in standing up to protect her baby, she won't let what happened to Buffy happen to her.
OMG , so happy that Spike survived and is being helped by Joyce and Merrick YAY !!
Hopefully now he'll be able to help Buffy ...
Author's Response: thanks for the review and yes they kept hurting buffy more and more without meaning to, comes of seeing her as less than them:)
more soon
Date: 10/05/2008 - 08:56 pm Title: chapter 2
Unexpected that all the other slayers (with one exception) lost her powers. Things gotten worse indeed.
But Spike is alive; didn't expect that after the summary. Hopefully he can help. And is willing to.
Author's Response: all the potentials, the ones taht were given thier powers through the scyth have lost tehm again, willow really should be more careful with her spells