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Reviewer: Rogue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2008 - 08:58 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Excellent chapter! It's encouraging to see that he and Buffy can communicate somewhat. Can't wait to see what tomorrow brings in hell!

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2008 - 03:43 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

The agony, then the ecstacy.

Brilliant.

Reviewer: Spuffy_obsessed Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2008 - 10:35 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

Aw it's so sad. To think she's been there for hundreds upon hundreds of years. Although truly in the real world it wouldn't seem like that but you can tell she's not Buffy anymore. Not now at least, and it's sad. Good job at writing that. Just thinking about Spike's three hundred years at the time of reading it, it was painful to think about the possibility of time for her. It would be interesting to see an insight into her thoughts of the time of these years. As she slowly forgot her family and friends, her name, her 'death'.

It's understandable as to why Spike let the 3rd rule slip. I mean you emphasized the other two so much in the story (which is good) to where even I forgot what the third rule was. As much as I don't want the story rushed I hope they find the true SOLACE soon he's seeking for them and getting out of there. Hell even I would want to see Buffy beat Spike up because then that would mean she's Buffy again.

Reviewer: Spikes_slayer08 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2008 - 02:13 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

Great update can't wait to see how they get out and how Buffy will be once she is back in the real world, please update soon.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2008 - 12:26 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

Poor Spike. His slip was understandable, but the self hatred it's feeding is hard to read. Perhaps the cryptic markings on the wall hold the answer to freeing them both. In the meantime, cooling his heels in the slayer's makeshift bed should be some comfort.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2008 - 11:46 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

So intense! I loved it! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2008 - 09:42 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Poor, poor Spike, he thinks he's ruined everything.
Hopefully they weren't seen as promises , more like just a statement. Maybe the writing is a clue? The ending was sweet ...he wanted the solace of her arms, just tonight. Please give me tonight. *so sad*
Great chapter and good luck on your graduation!

Reviewer: Julianna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2008 - 08:50 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Esto es....simplemente hermoso y doloroso al mismo tiempo......siguiente por favor!.......Cómo saldran del infierno?.

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2008 - 07:42 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

I hope there is still hope here....hope for them to get out. Spike doesn't like following rules....I bet he'll try to break them, for Buffy's sake.
Can't wait to know what she wrote. And Greek? She can write in Greek? How'd she learn that?

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2008 - 06:26 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Happy Birthday again, Holly :)
Greek writings... that's nothing I expected, you surprised me again. So it was Buffy that has written it. Weird... I wonder what did Buffy cause to write in Greek.
I forgot about it, that Spike did a promise. *checks* He said it will be alright in the last chapter. He said too he won't hurt Buffy. Not really a promise but it sounds like one. Does that count? (Maybe I overheard something.
Poor Spike, he's now so devastated. To sleep a bit won't help them get out but make him feel better.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2008 - 06:09 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Maybe the writing tells the way out..

Make no promises .. hmmm...Will Larry come up with another "3"... for him to do..

Waiting for her recognition.. And congrats on the graduation..

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