Ok, I don't mean to pick and by no means am I perfect but I thought I should let you know in this chapter there are a few spelling mistakes and wrong words used. At the start of the fic you wrote Nit instead of Not and after the second break you used board instead of bored.

Other then that, I love it can't wait to see where it goes. Like I said, I know my stuff isn't perfect, I need to go over my older fics and get them beta-ed. So please don't take this as a dig at your work. Im just trying to help.

Author's Response: No, thank you, really I appreciate it, I am not good when it comes to editing, so thanks for the help and for the review, I am glad you are enjoying g the story!