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Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2009 - 03:46 pm Title: 16

JESUS! I don't know why I'm so shocked by her actions, she is crazy enough to do it, but still!

Oh man, she is going to blame William for stabbing her, isnt she? Maybe she will die... I have to go read what happens next!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2009 - 02:24 am Title: 16

Sorry, you feel that not very many people are interested in this story. I'm sure that isn't the case at all. Just people that are most likely too lazy to leave a review. I will admit that I don't always leave a review. I know I should because writers take the time to write these wonderful stories. Readers should at least leave a comment. With me, I usually like to write a little something. I can't write just " great chapter" or anything of that sort. I like to leave a little something more. Like what is my favorite part of the chapter. What I like I liked the best. So, when I'm really lazy that day. I won't leave a review. But I guess something like "love it more please" is better than nothing. It is sad to hear that you intended this story to be longer. But feel that hardly anybody is interested in it anymore. So, you are going to cut it short. I enjoy this story so much. So, whether you plan to it soon or make it longer. I will continue to read. As for this chapter. Dru is nuts. She really is. I bet William never would have imagined when he starting dating her that she was this crazy. Look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Maybe you're right. It's just that when I write, I write for my readers, not just for myself. And the only way for me to know if the readers like my stuff or find it to be crap is by them leaving a review. Just the smallest comment, like 'great chapter' means the world to me as an author. Just like it makes me really sad when no one bothers. Anyway, I'm really glad to hear you enjoy my story. Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know! :)

Reviewer: Dar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2009 - 01:34 am Title: 16

Whoa....just... Whoa

Author's Response: Yeah. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2009 - 12:29 am Title: 16

Dru is clearly out of her mind!! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: It's up now. ;) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 11:11 pm Title: 16

OMG that was a totally evil cliffie! Holy shit. Dru is even crazier than I thought. Poor William having to see that and the poor baby. At least Buffy's there so hopefully William won't get in trouble if she decides to say he attacked her or something.

I' m sorry to hear your muse is gone on this story, cause I really love it. It's so good.I'll keep reading.=)

Author's Response: So happy to hear that, thank you! Not much left of the story though. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 10:51 pm Title: 16

Too late for the warning, I've read it now ;)
~ When you answered the comment I thought for a moment that you would kill of Dru in some way. Didn't expect her to kill the baby all by herself.

Author's Response: At first I played with the thought of offing Dru but I changed my mind. :) Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: flyingnicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 09:14 pm Title: 16

you can't just leave it there
post more soon

Author's Response: Sorry, just updated though. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 08:17 pm Title: 16

I hope that he doesn't get implicated for this! She is so wacko. That is awful! I sure hope that an update comes soon, it will be so hard waiting! Why oh why didn't I least wait till the end of the day to read this chapter!

Author's Response: This soon enough? *lol* Thanks for your reveiw!

Reviewer: iamghost Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 07:25 pm Title: 16

Whaaaaaat?! Is she know completely insane??
You're really evil leaving it there ;) I liked the chapter though!

Author's Response: Know I'm evil *lol* Glad you liked, thanks!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 05:35 pm Title: 16

Too weird.. Dru stabing herself to get rid of the baby..

Sick... and sad for William. That 's her game. Control at all costs..



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