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Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2009 - 10:54 pm Title: Confrontation

Some mysteries are coming to light! Travers does love playing God doesn't he. I'm interested to see if the girls rebel or if they fall into his plan. And how romantic is Spike! Any girl would lucky to have that vamp at her side. :-D And I loved sportive Giles.

Author's Response: :) Thank you demona! :) I've found myself having to make little notes on my word document just in case I forget something about what I have planned. So things should start falling together pretty quickly...:)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2009 - 02:39 pm Title: Confrontation

I really wonder what Spike was thinking about - he was very surprised that Buffy wasn't there now. He doesn't have a guilty conscience about what he intends to do, really thinking it would help Buffy. Makes me wonder why he has to leave for that.
Travers' idea of drugging the slayer? Not good, they don't know the drug. I'll bet it's the one that he was talking about, taking memories away.
Awe :D I think that surprise will be a good one. So Spike is planning a wedding (or something similar) for Buffy. She won't say no to him :)

Author's Response: :) Thanks cordy! Yeah, Spike never intended to leave. Buffy's just jumping to conclusions, but you REALLY can't blame her, after the last couple issues. LOL...:)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2009 - 10:33 pm Title: Confrontation

I can't believe I forgot Spike was already souled! Glad Spike decided on a commitment ceremony. It's the next best thing to a wedding! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks PhotographyNut! Don't worry, you're only one of several that forgot about Spike's soul. LOL...:) Lots more to come soon!

Reviewer: Nibblet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2009 - 09:25 pm Title: Confrontation

AWESOME!

One little problem though. When Buffy's at Giles' place, you wrote " Spike asked, gently placing his hand on Buffy’s back." Instead of "Giles asked..." You might wanna correct that.

Author's Response: Whoops! Thanks for that! :)

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2009 - 08:30 pm Title: Confrontation

Loved these last couple of chapters. :)

Author's Response: Thanks Pet! I admit I've been slacking and getting behind a little in my writing, because I"m so busy trying to catch up on your story, Healing! :)

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2009 - 07:59 pm Title: Confrontation

YAY! I guessed about the commitment ceremony.hehe
Spike is so sweet to think about doing that for Buffy. Can't wait to see her reaction. Poor Buffy was so worried tho, glad Giles told her to talk to Spike.
Travers is a total bastard. OMG he's gonna use drugs on Faith and Dana, and God knows what the side effects will be.

I love this story, and you rock with the quick updates! :)

Author's Response: Yeah Travers is a wanker. I'm not even British, and that's totally the word I would use. LOL...:) Glad you're enjoying the story, Ami! :) Your feedback always makes me smile!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2009 - 06:09 pm Title: Confrontation

OMG I'm so excited that Buffy will be getting her special day. You had me worried about Spike leaving but this is just awesome. I can't wait to see the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks Jenn!!! Hehe...more coming soon!

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